CS feedback

[Christopher Wood]

Dear All,

A quick update on the feedback I have received from CS: I spoke with Ryan on Tuesday and by e-mail on Thursday; he reiterated previous comments regarding consistency of voice, highlighting topic sentences at the beginning of paragraphs and general formatting specifics. He also promised to get in touch with some bigger picture comments but hasn't done so yet. In light of his comments I have made further revisions to the current draft, which is attached to this message and can be found on Dropbox (Research-->Report-->CSCapstoneAp21). 

I will reach out to Ryan tomorrow pm if I haven't heard from him by then so that we have feedback prior to our meeting. If I can be of any help to anyone before then, please let me know.

All the best,

Chris  

[Adam Quinton]

Hi Chris
Based on this and esp. the fact that Ryan has comments are pending sounds like it might be better for me to go through the doc thoroughly on Tuesday!? I can carve our several hours then ... ie deal with the next iteration and have hopefully the benefit of his big picture comments you refer.
Does that make sense!?
Adam

[Christopher Wood]

Thanks, Adam, then I'll plan on soliciting Ryan's comments tomorrow and forwarding to you and the group.

Chris

[Christopher Wood]

Dear Team,

I just spoke with Ryan, and he says that he has no additional comments in terms of content and that everything's in line with expectations. He reiterated his suggestion to present all data in line with the style guide and to verify that all data cited are accurate. He would like to see the copy of finalized data charts as soon as possible.

Thanks guys, see you this evening!

Chris

[Ryan Hakim]

Thanks Chris.

Team, can you please make sure your data is up-to-date and on the master xls spreadsheet. Some graphs seem to be missing or the numbers are inconsistent, including:

-Exhibit 7: Emerging Markets 5-Yr CDS Index Spread

-Exhibit 8: Turnover ratios

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