Final Paper Week 7

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eyoh...@gmail.com

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Jul 8, 2007, 10:17:13 AM7/8/07
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Hello Friends-

I have uploaded the final product in Files under Week 7 Final Product.
Hope all of you are doing well.

Eugene

Nicole....@gmail.com

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Jul 8, 2007, 12:36:22 PM7/8/07
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Eugene - Thanks for compiling. I made some correction and revisions. I
also restructured question 2. I think it flows better and looks better
as a paragraph answer versus the bullets. I uploaded file with
revisions as Week 7 Final product_Revisions.

Thanks!
Nicole

bassem fahmi

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Jul 8, 2007, 12:51:02 PM7/8/07
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Hello,
Great job on the paper. I think answering q2 with a bullets format is better. I think that is what Prof. Daily likes more.
Thanks
Bass

Nicole Hackett

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Jul 8, 2007, 2:20:05 PM7/8/07
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Ok well We can do it however you guys like I just want to make sure he approves.
 
Thanks!

 

Eugene Yohannan

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Jul 8, 2007, 2:43:43 PM7/8/07
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the revisions look great!!!!!

eyoh...@gmail.com

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Jul 8, 2007, 2:48:58 PM7/8/07
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I am not sure whether it matters if we put in a bullet format or
paragraph format. I dont mind either way. I believe it is easier to
read in a bullet format, however, a paragraph format appears to be
more suitable for this question.

Thanks-

On Jul 8, 1:43 pm, "Eugene Yohannan" <eyohan...@gmail.com> wrote:
> the revisions look great!!!!!
>

> On 7/8/07, Nicole Hackett <nicole.hack...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Ok well We can do it however you guys like I just want to make sure he
> > approves.
>
> > Thanks!
>

> > On 7/8/07, bassem fahmi <b_fa...@hotmail.com> wrote:
>
> > > Hello,
> > > Great job on the paper. I think answering q2 with a bullets format is
> > better. I think that is what Prof. Daily likes more.
> > > Thanks
> > > Bass
>

Nicole Hackett

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Jul 8, 2007, 3:09:12 PM7/8/07
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If the bullets make most sense to people that is fine with me...I just want to ensure he feels that we are taking the time needed to do this and not throwing it together. Also if we put it back into bullet form make sure each bullet is a complete sentence and thought...a few did not make complete sense when reading over them.
Thanks!
Nicole

 

Dan Jensen

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Jul 8, 2007, 3:34:54 PM7/8/07
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Hi all,

I think the paper looks good. If I were to vote I would think the
paragraph form is more appropriate over the bullets.

Daniel Jensen

On Jul 8, 2:09 pm, "Nicole Hackett" <nicole.hack...@gmail.com> wrote:
> If the bullets make most sense to people that is fine with me...I just want
> to ensure he feels that we are taking the time needed to do this and not
> throwing it together. Also if we put it back into bullet form make sure each
> bullet is a complete sentence and thought...a few did not make complete
> sense when reading over them.
> Thanks!
> Nicole
>

Michael Loiacano

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Jul 8, 2007, 4:55:21 PM7/8/07
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I agree. We should stick with the paragraph.
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