Slide 11: 1:15 - fine as is
Slide 12: 2:00 - repeating asian and hispanic in demographic slide = leave out or include caucasiaians = leave out, focus on psycographic; and, where is the pain
Slide 13: 1:00 - pick up with the 'where is the pain'
Slide 14: 1:40 - maybe talk about being outside of the building and be where our customers our going to be. the finish line concept
Slide 15: 1:20 - address ORS as a profit potential
Slide 16: 1:10 - say "distribution and supply"; change slide name to "Pricing and Competition"; agree that current plastic bag of formula costs $2.26 for a 20-24oz water bottle
Slide 17: 1:18 - Chuck to beauty up this slide
Slide 18: 0:48 - need $$ upfront, before year 1 to sustain us because distribution channel will burn a lot of cash.
Slide 19: 1:13 - A,B, C distracting. Be profitable at year 1? leave this out
Slide 20: 0:25