Let's the party begin

[Roni Gloger]

Guys,

Attached you can find two recorded audios as options to intro our presentation. Please listen to them and read the text at the document attached to give me feedback on which you like the most and feel free to make any suggestions to modify them. 

I need to practice them so please don't take in consideration how I read them...

Best

Roni Gloger
(310) 774-6229

[Charles David Lyle]

I like intro 2.

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Charles David Lyle
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[Corinne Doughty]

me too:)

[Faris, Kenneth]

Ok, 

Taking a listen now and will offer feedback. 

On Sun, Oct 6, 2013 at 1:10 PM, Roni Gloger <ronig...@gmail.com> wrote:

[Faris, Kenneth]

Sounds good Roni, 

I vote for 2 as well 

Read through the doc also but I think you've got it down pretty well as is.  

Your read through was also good.  Good pace and inflection.  

On Sun, Oct 6, 2013 at 1:10 PM, Roni Gloger <ronig...@gmail.com> wrote:

[Powell, Daniel]

I vote for #2.  

For either one, recommend starting with the value proposition and defining what Motu does first (takeaway from 1st presentation).  I think the second one tells a better story about the industry, social trends, and the niche we're entering and sets us up as the underdog.  

For me, the "unhealthy" part got lost after mentioning the giants.  

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Daniel Powell

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[Lodestro, Nick]

Even if I voted for #1 it clearly would not matter :)   #2 it is!!!

NICK LODESTRO | Regional Sales Manager at IDEXX Laboratories (IDXX)

Babson College | F.W. Olin Graduate School of Business | Fast Track MBA

 

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