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Namaste Aniket
Good composition.
A small Tweaking on last verse:
Shifting focus from ‘read’ to ‘ Speck-listen –communication’ and go beyond history to Nature provided human standards.
Original: कस्य शुद्धास्ति वाणीह कश्च शुद्धिं विधास्यति। तत्रानिकेतसूक्तिर्यद् बन्धो मे पठ संस्कृतम्॥६
Suggested: कस्य शुद्धास्ति भाषा-हा कश्च शुद्धिं विधास्यति। तत्र वाग्योग-सूक्तिर्भो- वद-संश्रुणु-संस्कृतम्॥६
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BVK Sastry
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