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Yusuf

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Oct 8, 2010, 3:21:49 PM10/8/10
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I wish success to everyone. I found a good paraghraph on the internet.
Maybe you want to investigate that.


Aspirin can be a fatal poison. People are used to
taking aspirin whenever they feel pain. It is true that aspirin is an
efficacious pain-killer for example in headache cases. However,
aspirin is like any other medicine can be dangerously harmful. Any
unregulated use of it may result into the damage to the lining of the
stomach, prolonged bleeding time, nausea, vomiting, ulcers, liver
damage, and hepatitis. It is scientifically proven that excessive use
of aspirin turns it into a toxin. Its toxic effects are Kidney Damage,
severe metabolic derangements, respiratory and central nervous system
effects, strokes, fatal haemorrhages of the brain, intestines & lungs
and eventually death. Thus, the careful and regulated use of aspirin
is most advisable so as not to turn into a deadly
poison.


http://www.scribd.com/doc/391505/Paragraph-Writing

samime celik

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Oct 8, 2010, 4:32:38 PM10/8/10
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Yusuf thank you for sharing this,
If you want to see other paragraph examples, in your BUSEL books after listening tapescripts, there are very nice paragraph examples.
Also, if you want to write paragraphs and receive feedback I will check my e mails regularly so you can send them to our mail group.
 
Kolay Gelsin
 
Samime Celik
Instructor
Bilkent University

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