Monster Novel By Dark Fairy

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Aug 3, 2024, 4:54:16 PM8/3/24

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The only downside to this web novel is something that VanZans is working on right now. Some PoV changes are quite sudden and some chapters have to be reviewed for little mistakes. But the author is not only working on the aforementioned but also an a list of other things that readers complained about.

The Grammar is pretty good, though there are several mistakes, it's not bad enough to be called fatal to the story and can mostly be ignored if your accustomed to reading stories with much worse grammar.\u00A0

Characters in this story are well developed and explained, a clear sense of personalty can be read and understood. Side characters are also generally well developed and are easily remembered, though because of their amount some can be forgotten, but this I feel can be easily remedied thanks to the author making a page dedicated to characters and things which is this: \u00A0Description/Character Page: Updated. \u00A0 \u00A0\u00A0

All I can say about this fiction is WOW!\u00A0This fiction only started a couple months ago and right when I catch up on this series it has managed to break the TOP 50. It honestly deserves to be in the top 10.

The chapter length is around 20K per chapter which is phenomenal. \u00A0It's not useless information either, it's high quality content that makes you honestly want to know more about this amazingly vast world. The MC is not like other mc's he's not overly good or overly bad but he has strict morales and gets pretty violent whenever he sees others being abused in front of him. The mc gets transported to an RPG like world by the norse god Loki. The story has so many great characters come in and it makes the story so colorful and amazing.

This is not like other Fantasy novels I've read before simply because it goes dark pretty quickly. And yet it has some amazing heartwarming scenes thrown in as well that honestly had me break out in tears in a couple scenes. The prologue isn't just some tacked on backstory....it is the story! The MC is crazy OP but the world is so large it seems there are enemies and other \"blessed beings\" equally as cheat like as our troubled MC is. I however love reading through the MC's struggles, he's such an interesting character to read about as he's been through so much in his life and finally being transported to another world is just so much fun to read about.

Only tid bit I can say is some of the grammar and spelling isn't perfect but it doesn't take away from the amazing story here! The content is just so rich and good. 5 / 5 Stars and will be eagerly awaiting more!

All I can say about this fiction is WOW! This fiction only started a couple months ago and right when I catch up on this series it has managed to break the TOP 50. It honestly deserves to be in the top 10.

The chapter length is around 20K per chapter which is phenomenal. It's not useless information either, it's high quality content that makes you honestly want to know more about this amazingly vast world. The MC is not like other mc's he's not overly good or overly bad but he has strict morales and gets pretty violent whenever he sees others being abused in front of him. The mc gets transported to an RPG like world by the norse god Loki. The story has so many great characters come in and it makes the story so colorful and amazing.

This is not like other Fantasy novels I've read before simply because it goes dark pretty quickly. And yet it has some amazing heartwarming scenes thrown in as well that honestly had me break out in tears in a couple scenes. The prologue isn't just some tacked on backstory....it is the story! The MC is crazy OP but the world is so large it seems there are enemies and other "blessed beings" equally as cheat like as our troubled MC is. I however love reading through the MC's struggles, he's such an interesting character to read about as he's been through so much in his life and finally being transported to another world is just so much fun to read about.

The story is GREAT! The author has implemented various idea's from other stories like mana, Qi and various mythological characters/creatures from different cultures. You simply can't read this novel without getting emotional. It shows how evil some characters can be, but also how kind, a lot of times you'll be contemplating if wether some characters are evil or not.

There are a LOT of little one-letter-mistakes, quite a bit of words which are wrong, however they resemble the words which the author meant to use so it doesn't affect me reading the chapters. minus 1 star, because the grammar mistakes made don't bother me.

The author goes quite in-dept on the POV of not only the MC but also other characters which is done very good. The MC isn't the typical full-on evil or full-on pussy which A LOT of novels have and quite annoying might i add... The MC clearly struggles being hurled in a world that is harsh in a way that it's that the strong or rich prey on the poor.\u00A0

You should really do like 3k-5k words per chapter, which will definitely benefit you. More chapters equals more followers which equals more donations! C+F= D! HAhahA thanks for the chapters, i enjoy it very much

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A dark fairy tale about the woods outside a small village and the monster that roams within them. Become Sage and play through to uncover the mystery when they're tossed away from everything they've ever known.

I do quite like this story, its my favorite one by you guys so far I think! ^u^ I'm not usually one that likes creepy/scary/dark themes, but I was drawn in by potentially being able to romance 'the monster'. x'/D And learning the story of "the monster, the dark and the forest" hehe.

Most reviews that I conduct of Visual Novels are based upon experiences I have whilst playing through it at the time of the writing, yet the story you have crafted here had kept me sat tightly in my rickety old chair wishing to see more and more, and I was genuinely dissapointed to see that the experience had to be ended so quickly.

The Artwork in this VN, much like the music is beautifully done, especially for a demo. The cover art is what caught my eye the most, with it being one of the best pieces of cover art i've ever seen out of even AAA games.

Played the demo today and noticed something weird: fullscreen made the game duplicate itself on both of my monitors, and when I clicked anything the secondary monitor just went black and stayed that way even after I closed the game. I have Windows 10 and my version of the demo is up to date.

Hello! I'm sorry to hear about that. We haven't seen this error before but we'll do some testing to try and figure out what could be wrong. Thanks for bringing it to our attention and sorry it took so long to get back to you!

But fairy tales also depict clever children who outwit the horrible predatory adults. Fairy tales return agency and power to the powerless children. Fairy tales, as Chesterton famously reminds us, show that dragons can be killed, witches get pushed into ovens, that evil ultimately gets its reward.

Fairy tales tell us that ultimately there is hope for the poor widows and orphans of this world. This is one of those truths that keeps jumping out at me as we read the Old Testament: God spends an awful lot of time taking care of the widows and orphans and resident aliens. The powerless and dispossessed and voiceless. Father of the orphans, protector of widows, defender of the poor. The Just Judge who will render a righteous judgment.