well, I had wanted to re-read mine again, coz I thought it might still be too long, but I just printed a couple of copies of angie's ... maybe mine isn't too long after all. I must say that I did not review my original plan of taking
scene "clou" that told the story in brief, in exchange for Giorgia's probably BETTER idea of choosing
la scena più bella. But, that's why we are a collective, so we can give each other feedback. I await your approval (or disapproval, your majesties).
whoever needs stuff printed let me know before friday, likewise a ride to angie's...
baci&abbracci
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