hi, i just finished the first draft of my assignment and am looking for a beta. i like to do my editing myself mostly, but i think another pair of eyes would be really helpful (looking particularly for grammar and any issues with structure and pacing).
the assignment is explicit (features a handjob and a blowjob respectively) and it's an mlm pairing. any more info you need to ask about, because i don't want to accidentally spoil the person i'm writing it for.