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Naumaan Ansari

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Jul 12, 2011, 10:55:24 AM7/12/11
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Aight

Tom is taking the results part of the paper. Im doing future work. Kush you gotta try and put somethign in there. Maybe you and Tom should split the results part up cuz its pretty long. ALso Kush, you have to edit the video. I think we should meet sometime on this week (possibly today), for a couple hours. It should only be like a logistics meeting / clean up. Also maybe go over the paper and its weaknesses. We should finish the paper seprately and then we can compile it together on skype or something. I DONT have work tomorrow so I can meet anytime. If we meet any day but tomorrow Ill have to meet after 5 PM. 

Kush, I really hope you finished editing the video. If you have, see if you can upload it to rapidshare or megaupload or fileshare and ask him to DL it. If you havent, we need that to be done. If you cant do it then yore gonna have to put the video on a flash drive and give it to Tom or me or something. My goal is to have another draft sent to him by Wednesday and a FINAL draft sent to him by the weekend. He gave us some nice criticisms about the paper that Im gonan try and work on. I have been reading the paper and it does sound very casual and not formal. Each of us MAY have to tweak our parts. We can talk about that when we meet. Let me know if and when youre available. Srry about sending the email so late, just got home. If you can meet late afternoon tomorrow im fine with that too.

Peace

PS: If we do have a meeting with him we should ask him what hes going to give us as a grade cuz the grades dont get released until later in the summer so Im gonna be too curious by then. 

Thomas Womersley

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Jul 12, 2011, 5:17:22 PM7/12/11
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Hey Naumaan and Kush,
I rly can't meet on wednesday-friday.  I can skype mayb after work tomorrow.  So what exactly should I write the results on? or should i write about everything let me know.   Well i rly hope we can wrap it up this week. thanks guys
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Thomas Womersley

Patel, Kush Dipak

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Jul 12, 2011, 5:44:34 PM7/12/11
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Hey guys,

I'm working on writing the programming / software side of the trashcan.
Also, i'm working on future implementation on how the Motion capture technology would combine with this.
For the video however. when you mean edit, you mean crop all the reactions out of the long video. Anything else?

Kush
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Hey Naumaan and Kush,
I rly can't meet on wednesday-friday. I can skype mayb after work tomorrow. So what exactly should I write the results on? or should i write about everything let me know. Well i rly hope we can wrap it up this week. thanks guys

Thomas Womersley

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Jul 13, 2011, 3:45:48 PM7/13/11
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Idk do u guys want to make like a finished like short film with the footage or what?

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Patel, Kush Dipak

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Jul 14, 2011, 10:12:21 AM7/14/11
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Hey guys,

Here is the Software section. As Bianchi said, I only put in 1 paragraph about the Wii remote thing.
There really wasn't much more to explain, but if you guys want I can go more in depth.
I'll work on some Future implementation (the proramming side of it) if you want me to Naumaan.
Tom do you need any help with the results?
And the video, i'm cropping the reactions together, trying to make short clip.
Should I make it like a short video? My skills not that great but will do my best.
And MOST IMPORTANTLY.
What about the sounds? since we were talking, it captured most of that and we don't wnat that.
Just play like epic songs ?

Kush Patel

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Thomas Womersley

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Jul 14, 2011, 5:37:38 PM7/14/11
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Hey guys,
This is the results section tell me if you need more naumaan. Let me know if you need me to compile it or what ever thanks buddy hope that your days were good ones.
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Thomas Womersley

Results.docx

Patel, Kush Dipak

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Jul 17, 2011, 7:01:37 AM7/17/11
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Hey Naumaan,

I was just wondering if you got your section done and sent everything to bianchi. If not, sent it to me or Tom and we will compile it and send it.
I also think this time we should all read each section so we can edit each section thoroughly.

Kush Patel

Naumaan Ansari

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Jul 17, 2011, 11:37:06 PM7/17/11
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Here is what i sent to Bianchi. Alrite, I have a few comments lol. First off, you guys are damn awful at editing your own stuff. I went over the entire paper and did some heavy duty editing. I changed everything to past tense and also tried to make it less vernacular. I fixed a lot of the grammatical mistakes (which there were a LOT of ). I also deleted a lot of the unnecessary stuff that was in there. The paper is a lot more fluid now and a lot less conflicting with ideas. i added my own future development section and a couple other things. The only section that was untouched was the research, mainly because it was just basic content. Im actually goign out of town on wednesday (comic con), so thats why I decided to do my part of the heavy editing  now. Each of us should take turns editing. Just warning you, it takes a long ass time. Its almost 40 pages. But just try to get through it. After bianchi sends us his final comments, we should try to edit it together. After, do a final check and send him the final copy. Tom, just make sure, when you write your stuff, plz proofread. You missed like 10 thousand commas and a lot of your sentences are fragments. 

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IQPpt6_Ansari_Patel_Womersley_kushx.docx
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