Final edits

[Safeya Almqtri]

Hi guys

 

i see someone is working on the document (funding challenge) but can't see who. can i start restructring the other bits now? then we can consolidate?

[Gauthier, Fiona]

I assume its Pierre but you can both work in the document at the same time.
  

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[Safeya Almqtri]

hi Fiona - i've finished making changes first part. if you look at the document, i updated the intro and operations part. I'm now going to look at the "Funding" part. You can now start the editing up until the title "Funding". I should finish in an hour.

 

 

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From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [bangalo...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Gauthier, Fiona [Fiona.G...@dvbbank.com]
Sent: 18 September 2013 6:51 PM
To: bangalo...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Final edits

[Pierre Mulotte]

Yep it’s me

 

I’m still on it as well

 

From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [mailto:bangalo...@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of Safeya Almqtri
Sent: 18 September 2013 15:50
To: <bangalo...@googlegroups.com>
Subject: Final edits

 

Hi guys

 

i see someone is working on the document (funding challenge) but can't see who. can i start restructring the other bits now? then we can consolidate?

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[Pierre Mulotte]

By the way, Safeya, did you get a reply from Anu to your questions ?

 

Pierre

[Safeya Almqtri]

thanks Steve - i'll skip the shisha part :)

 

guys - i think everyone of us needs to read the whole case study and makes sure you're able to identify the history, what is the issue, the details, and then the conclusion.. can you start reading?

who's submitting to Celia?

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From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [bangalo...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of stephen....@shell.com [stephen....@shell.com]
Sent: 18 September 2013 9:15 PM

To: bangalo...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Final edits

Well done Safeya.

 

Wish I can send you some nice sweet shisha on email to boost your energy.

 

From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [mailto:bangalo...@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of Safeya Almqtri
Sent: 18 September 2013 17:50
To: bangalo...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Final edits

 

hi Fiona - i've finished making changes first part. if you look at the document, i updated the intro and operations part. I'm now going to look at the "Funding" part. You can now start the editing up until the title "Funding". I should finish in an hour.

 

 

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From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [bangalo...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Gauthier, Fiona [Fiona.G...@dvbbank.com]
Sent: 18 September 2013 6:51 PM
To: bangalo...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Final edits

[Gauthier, Fiona]

Have you finished? Can I download to a word doc and clean up before sending to Celia? This is just a draft - at this stage waiting for everyone to read through again and make more comments and changes will be a bit tight for time...

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[Gauthier, Fiona]

Ps we will of course need to do that in the 10days with have after receiving Celia's feedback and before submitting the final version.

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From: Safeya Almqtri [mailto:salmqtri....@london.edu]
Sent: Wednesday, September 18, 2013 07:26 PM

[Safeya Almqtri]

hi Fiona

 

agree. i just read the part added by Pierre, the commerce for charity part and I'm not sure we will be able to share as much detail in the case study. let's see what Celia thinks

 

when you send the document to Celia, please add the question about how much detail to share in terms of breaching confidentiality and also from an educational perspective - there might be some pieces of info we added to he main body which can be part of the learning outcomes instead. Please also ask her if we could share the draft with Prof Brad at this point or she would suggest waiting.

 

we've done wonderful job team :) i think we're getting there.. I'm more confident we will see our names published soon ;D

 

 

 

safeya

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From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [bangalo...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Gauthier, Fiona [Fiona.G...@dvbbank.com]

Sent: 18 September 2013 9:30 PM
To: 'bangalo...@googlegroups.com'
Subject: Re: Final edits

[Gauthier, Fiona]

Yep - was already planning too (what do they say - great minds think alike? :-))

So am I good to download now?

Thanks!!!

[Safeya Almqtri]

it's all yours :)

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From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [bangalo...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Gauthier, Fiona [Fiona.G...@dvbbank.com]

Sent: 18 September 2013 9:52 PM

[stephen....@shell.com]

Well done Safeya.

 

Wish I can send you some nice sweet shisha on email to boost your energy.

 

From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [mailto:bangalo...@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of Safeya Almqtri
Sent: 18 September 2013 17:50
To: bangalo...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Final edits

 

hi Fiona - i've finished making changes first part. if you look at the document, i updated the intro and operations part. I'm now going to look at the "Funding" part. You can now start the editing up until the title "Funding". I should finish in an hour.

 

 

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From: bangalo...@googlegroups.com [bangalo...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Gauthier, Fiona [Fiona.G...@dvbbank.com]
Sent: 18 September 2013 6:51 PM
To: bangalo...@googlegroups.com
Subject: RE: Final edits

[Safeya Almqtri]

Hi Fiona

Did you send the draft to Celia? I didnt see an email from you 

Sent from my iPhone

[Gauthier, Fiona]

Safeya, the level of editing required in the document is extreme. Just 3hrs of basic proofing only got me to page 10. There's days of work required to get flow, consistency of style and language etc

Personally I wouldn't send it in like this. However since the content is good I spoke to Rutger and agreed I'd send in this morning and ask for feedback on content only.

Will see what can then be achieved over next days before Celia's second draft submission deadline.

Regards,
Fiona