2 New Articles

[Glowing Face Man]

Here are a couple new articles I wrote:

My Anime Story: a tell-all description of the role Japanese animation
has played in my life.
http://www.glowingfaceman.com/2009/08/my-anime-story.html

How to Take Control of Life: a step-by-step guide to claiming greater
control over one's life.
http://www.glowingfaceman.com/2009/08/how-to-take-control-of-life.html

Let me know any improvements or constructive feedback! If you like
the articles a lot, please support them :)

-Glowing Face Man
http://www.glowingfaceman.com

[Boreas]

I like the take control article GFM. The personal examples work well,
like how you met your girlfriend and found courage to ask her out by
living in the moment.

If I had to comment on the writing I would say watch out for any
repetition of descriptors, like in the opening line

"It has been said that our entire lives are just preparation for the
few brief moments that really matter. Aside from those precious
fleeting moments, the rest is autopilot. Days slip through our fingers
like grains of sand while we act out scripts."

Here you have "few brief moments" and "precious fleeting moments", I
would suggest completely dropping the "precious fleeting".

Otherwise the content is spot on, just what I needed to read. Thanks
for writing and sharing.

-Paul.

On Aug 19, 6:53 am, Glowing Face Man <glowingface...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Here are a couple new articles I wrote:
>
> My Anime Story:  a tell-all description of the role Japanese animation

> has played in my life.http://www.glowingfaceman.com/2009/08/my-anime-story.html

>
> How to Take Control of Life:  a step-by-step guide to claiming greater

> control over one's life.http://www.glowingfaceman.com/2009/08/how-to-take-control-of-life.html