Seymour's impossible poems

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mike

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Oct 12, 2021, 1:30:20 PM10/12/21
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Way back in the day we had fun trying to imagine Seymour's poems as described in "An Introduction."  I was thinking about the white cat widower one, being Seymour's last written in 1948.  I think Seymour was putting himself in Muriel's future shoes, and the white cat is her mother.

Also, who else noticed the never-before seen Salinger writing a blurb for Buddy on the inside jacket of the 2018 Centennial Edition of "Raise High / An Introduction?"

[We grew up, far off-center of everything we were born amidst.  Schools and banks here are closed, Post Offices too, on October 12th, Columbus Day.  But for both my eldest and youngest brother and myself, on this same date, but in 1694, Basho died, in Osaka.
-Buddy Glass]

Any mention of a different date of death for Basho is only due to the difference between the Lunar and Gregorian calendars, I believe.

Good morning, nerds!

mike

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Oct 12, 2021, 2:33:34 PM10/12/21
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Here's my stab at the widower white cat poem.  34 syllables.  No matter what I try, there seems to be zero danger of any cornet sounding.

i remember us
sitting on the grass
under a full moon

now snowball has her old spot back
biting a left hand
i can't feel anymore

mike

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Oct 12, 2021, 3:45:37 PM10/12/21
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Seymour's hotel desk blotter suicide poem, awkwardly translated from Japanese:

the head of the doll
of the girl on the airplane
turns to look at me

James Rovira

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Oct 13, 2021, 8:30:34 PM10/13/21
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Ha, great to see posts to this list. What about

John Keats, John Keats, John,
put your coat on.

Jim

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