BA411

[Larissa Pilipshen]

HiHi

 

After 6 hours of this paper, I can't think or write anymore and my brain is fried. The paper needed a lot of editing. So this is what I have so far. I will be going to Petes office hours to ask what we should add/ take out. I definitely want to add more figures to the Appendix to further support our arguments but that can wait until tomorrow when I can see straight again.

 

The plan is, after I get back and make changes based on what Pete says, I need one or more of you to proof read it before I turn it in. I will e-mail everyone the attached document tomorrow probably around 3 or 4. Will anyone be able to read it around then? If you use Microsoft Word, there is a tab called Review at the top and under that tab an option that says Track Changes. If you use that, it would be most helpful.

 

Much Love,

 

Larissa

[Lauren Patone]

Hi Larissa,

Yeah I can definitely take a look at it around 3 or 4. Thanks so much for reviewing it and going to his office hours. I think that's a really good idea. I still want to added a few more financial ratios like what we talked about in class to my part and probably add to the appendix as well but it looks great!! Go team Chester haha

Thanks again,
Lauren

[amandat...@gmail.com]

I can definitely proof read/edit

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From: Lauren Patone <lap...@psu.edu>

Date: Tue, 16 Feb 2010 07:33:53 -0500

To: <ba-411-te...@googlegroups.com>

Subject: Re: BA411

[Lauren Patone]

Hi Everyone,

I worked on Round 5 since its financials and attached the completed excel template along with the breakout assignment for our latest round. I didn't submit it, just attached it to the email. Our figures are quite wonderful. Let me know if you have any questions on it.

Thanks,
Lauren