Hello Rene. You did quite well and are very close, but I do see somethings differently.
Date is 24 June 1789
Groom: Lourenço José de Sousa, son of Mateus de Sousa Lopes and his wife Maria Francisca do Rosario, baptized in Matriz da Estrella, Ribeira Grande
Bride: Luisa Francisca daughter of Pedro Furtado de Medeiros, deceased, and his wife Rosa Ferreira. natural and baptized in this parish of NS do Rosario, Achadinha
The margin note I believe just shows that they were given a certificate of this record on that date which I see as 26 Sep (7.bro) 1853. This could have been for many reasons (passport, marriage, godparent, inheritance, etc.)
I hope this helps.
Bill Seidler