what is the biggest problem our HCM city facing with?
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phung ngo
Sep 30, 2011, 12:00:36 PM9/30/11
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Hi Mrs Ngoc Anh
i have written a topic but i think you must help me to fix it
this is the frist time i write a topic by english to you, and i really
seldom do this.
OUr city has a lot of problem day by day. the problem are
always connected with the jam traffic, the high population, the
pollute environment and the inflation.... But up to my opinion, the
biggest problem in our city is the jam traffic.
Reach for the development of industry, the population in
our city is increased day by day. More people pour to the road, so
that is why we can see the more people with the more transportation
outside. especial is the motobike. you can image that in the city we
can ride the motobike with lower 40km/h, this speed is the usual but
if you go out with the rush time, it will be a big problem. Because it
will took you twice time or three time as long time as the normal to
ride. for example, my personal example is, i have finished my work at
5 ;00 pm. But i have retured home at 6;00. i had waste a lot of time
for riding motobike and without doing anything. On the contrary, in
the morning i go to work i have just used less 30 minute to the
company.
i think we need to satisfy this problem as fast as we
can. that is too lose our time and too dangerous. More transportation
and more accident. How can we live with this traffic problem?
i have written a topic but i think you must help me to fix it
this is the frist time i write a topic by english to you, and i really
seldom do this.
OUr city has a lot of problem day by day. the problem are
always connected with the jam traffic, the high population, the
pollute environment and the inflation.... But up to my opinion, the
biggest problem in our city is the jam traffic.
Reach for the development of industry, the population in
our city is increased day by day. More people pour to the road, so
that is why we can see the more people with the more transportation
outside. especial is the motobike. you can image that in the city we
can ride the motobike with lower 40km/h, this speed is the usual but
if you go out with the rush time, it will be a big problem. Because it
will took you twice time or three time as long time as the normal to
ride. for example, my personal example is, i have finished my work at
5 ;00 pm. But i have retured home at 6;00. i had waste a lot of time
for riding motobike and without doing anything. On the contrary, in
the morning i go to work i have just used less 30 minute to the
company.
i think we need to satisfy this problem as fast as we
can. that is too lose our time and too dangerous. More transportation
and more accident. How can we live with this traffic problem?
Love Nguyenthingocanh
Oct 3, 2011, 6:05:49 AM10/3/11
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| Hi Phung, I got your work, but I'm afraid I cannot make any corrections or revisions on it right now as the Internet connection at my home is getting into some trouble currently. I'm checking emails on my friend's computer. Just wait a couple of days and I will reply to you as soon as i can. Best regards, --- Ngày Thứ 6, 30/09/11, phung ngo <phung....@gmail.com> đã viết:
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phung ngo
Oct 4, 2011, 1:44:51 AM10/4/11
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Hi Mrs Ngoc Anh
that is my pleasure if you take a look on my writting and i can wait for your reply. Mrs Ngoc Anh do not worry about that. i hope you have a nice day!
Kim PHung
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