Hi Marc,
Thank you for your artistic efforts and the back-story for your logo
idea.
While I know there is at least one more logo underway, I will offer
the following comments on your design:
I like the idea of the monk, the paddle, and the raised glass. I
don't know that others besides us will easily relate to the reasons
these items are in your design (but I also don't know that "that's" a
big deal). I do think ALEZ needs to be in there -- and more
specifically, that the entire spelled-out name should be there in some
capacity. I think perhaps the simplest way to handle that (and I'm
not an artist either, but have worked with many in my 'past life') is
to incorporate a ribbon underneath the pic that has "Athens League
of ..." written into the ribbon, and then also I would suggest
incorporating "ALEZ" somewhere else on our monk (to effectively
communicate the name of the group and that ALEZ is short for our full
name).
I think if your monk faced forward -- still holding out the paddle and
raised mug -- you could incorporate the "ribbon" (or other similar
"bordering" effect containing the full name) beneath him, and also
perhaps put a medallion-like object on the monk (something similar to
the "sommelier's cup", if you're familiar with that), and that you
could put ALEZ in that medallion (it would need to be large enough to
see, though). Another option is that ALEZ could go on the mug.
Also, don't sell yourself short on your artistic abilities. I think
you worked in an extraordinary amount of detail and that your drawing
is both recognizable and reflective of your goal. That's not an easy
task.
Thanks much!!
Kat