BOS PROGRAM INTERNAL REVIEW -- 9AM MONDAY DEADLINE
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Steve Weintraub
May 17, 2009, 1:15:52 AM5/17/09
to Arts in Bushwick
Hey,
We need your help!
Andrew has been working non-stop and the beautiful BOS program. He
has sent us a link to the program, which can be downloaded from his
website.
http://www.acrstudio.com/docs/
Please read over the PDF and send comments to Laura at
regist...@artsinbushwick.org by 9AM MONDAY.
Please note that we have already sent the a version of the PDF to all
the registrants so that they could check over their listings. These
changes have not yet been incorporated in this version.
Steve
We need your help!
Andrew has been working non-stop and the beautiful BOS program. He
has sent us a link to the program, which can be downloaded from his
website.
http://www.acrstudio.com/docs/
Please read over the PDF and send comments to Laura at
regist...@artsinbushwick.org by 9AM MONDAY.
Please note that we have already sent the a version of the PDF to all
the registrants so that they could check over their listings. These
changes have not yet been incorporated in this version.
Steve
Steve Weintraub
May 17, 2009, 10:23:24 AM5/17/09
to Arts in Bushwick
I was really tired when I wrote this; sorry for the terrible grammer.
S
On May 17, 1:15 am, Steve Weintraub <StevenWeintr...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hey,
>
> We need your help!
>
> Andrew has been working non-stop and the beautiful BOS program. He
> has sent us a link to the program, which can be downloaded from his
> website.
>
> http://www.acrstudio.com/docs/
>
> Please read over the PDF and send comments to Laura at
> registrat...@artsinbushwick.org by 9AM MONDAY.
S
On May 17, 1:15 am, Steve Weintraub <StevenWeintr...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hey,
>
> We need your help!
>
> Andrew has been working non-stop and the beautiful BOS program. He
> has sent us a link to the program, which can be downloaded from his
> website.
>
> http://www.acrstudio.com/docs/
>
> Please read over the PDF and send comments to Laura at
Pegah Shahghasemi
May 17, 2009, 7:14:45 PM5/17/09
to Steve Weintraub, Arts in Bushwick
HI every one, i think it looks awesome.
just one question, on page 16, is there any reason for number 100 not to be on the same line (aligned on top) with number 103? I am not sure if some thing is suppose to be there, and I am just not seeing it, because of a bad download.
I think everything is very easy to fallow on the maps, great job.
Pegah
Steve Weintraub
May 18, 2009, 12:46:53 AM5/18/09
to Arts in Bushwick, BOS 07 Registration
Hey Laura,
Maggie and I looked over the copy for the program. We have thought
about this a lot and wanted to freshen up the copy and to propose the
following changes to the opening paragraph on page 1 about what BOS is
and to the mission statement.
In regards to the opening statement, we are proposing these changes:
"Bushwick Open Studios is an art festival organized entirely by
artists and curators, where everyone is welcome to participate. Our
goal is to create a open and inclusive environment that benefits the
community through the sharing of collaborative projects, which foster
a rich dialogue and a greater engagement with the arts."
In regards to the Mission statement, we realize that we cannot change
the statement at this point without a longer discussion. Therefore,
Maggie and I are proposing a grammertical rearrangement that creates
two sentences and clarifies our goals:
"We are an all volunteer organization that supports the community
through creative accessibility and engagement. It is our goal to
create a integrated and sustainable community and to organize Bushwick
residents and stakeholders to counter development-driven
displacement."
Steve & Maggie
On May 17, 7:14 pm, Pegah Shahghasemi <pegahghi...@gmail.com> wrote:
> HI every one, i think it looks awesome.
> just one question, on page 16, is there any reason for number 100 not to be
> on the same line (aligned on top) with number 103? I am not sure if some
> thing is suppose to be there, and I am just not seeing it, because of a bad
> download.
>
> I think everything is very easy to fallow on the maps, great job.
>
> Pegah
>
> On Sun, May 17, 2009 at 10:23 AM, Steve Weintraub <StevenWeintr...@gmail.com
Maggie and I looked over the copy for the program. We have thought
about this a lot and wanted to freshen up the copy and to propose the
following changes to the opening paragraph on page 1 about what BOS is
and to the mission statement.
In regards to the opening statement, we are proposing these changes:
"Bushwick Open Studios is an art festival organized entirely by
artists and curators, where everyone is welcome to participate. Our
goal is to create a open and inclusive environment that benefits the
community through the sharing of collaborative projects, which foster
a rich dialogue and a greater engagement with the arts."
In regards to the Mission statement, we realize that we cannot change
the statement at this point without a longer discussion. Therefore,
Maggie and I are proposing a grammertical rearrangement that creates
two sentences and clarifies our goals:
"We are an all volunteer organization that supports the community
through creative accessibility and engagement. It is our goal to
create a integrated and sustainable community and to organize Bushwick
residents and stakeholders to counter development-driven
displacement."
Steve & Maggie
On May 17, 7:14 pm, Pegah Shahghasemi <pegahghi...@gmail.com> wrote:
> HI every one, i think it looks awesome.
> just one question, on page 16, is there any reason for number 100 not to be
> on the same line (aligned on top) with number 103? I am not sure if some
> thing is suppose to be there, and I am just not seeing it, because of a bad
> download.
>
> I think everything is very easy to fallow on the maps, great job.
>
> Pegah
>
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