خاموشی

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Jan 14, 2024, 7:15:46 PM1/14/24

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کوئ خاموشی سی خاموشی ہے

دشت کو دیکھ کے گھر یاد آیا

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Jan 15, 2024, 6:14:50 AM1/15/24

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کوئی ویرانی سی ویرانی ہے

دشت کو دیکھ کے گھر یاد آیا

ko'ii viiraanii sii viiraanii hai

dasht ko dikh ke ghar yaad aayaa

Ghalib

Naseer

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Jan 15, 2024, 7:44:30 AM1/15/24

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Naseer sahib,

The change in the first line was deliberate. Viiraanii did not quite fit the situation here..

With apologies to Ghalib’s soul.

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Jan 16, 2024, 6:59:13 AM1/16/24

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Shoaib SaaHib,

Yes you do need to apologise to Ghalib as you didn't put his line in quotation marks. :-)

Naseer

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Jan 16, 2024, 1:59:04 PM1/16/24

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Guilty as charged!

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