Painting in Chinese English
Darshaneneazram
Darshaneneazram reflecting:
Upon reading Japanese Death Poems,
Compiled and with an Introduction by Yoel Hoffmann
Tuttle Publishing
One come upon a translation of a poem by: Li Po
Entitled "Self-Consolation"
The Poem is four lines long
Each lie composed of five characters
The literal translation:
facing wine not distinguishing twilight
fall flower(s) pile up I/my robe
drunk rise walk valley moon
bird(s) return man also rare
Darshaneneazram playfully painting:
Beholding the wine who is distinguishing the twilight
The fall flowers pile up upon my robe
Drunk, I rise and walk amidst the valley moon
The birds return and the man also, this is rare.
Amidst the twilight robe the moon is rare
Distinguishing the self and the valley also
I do not pile up, but walk as a man
Wine flowers rise and return
Facing the fall of drunk birds
Love and Blessings from:
A field of silence
In a sea of solitude
A beholding light
In the empty sky!
ericsattava
Raan
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Tried any like this yourself?
--
*·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
(_¸.·' Raan
Darshaneneazram
<raan...@sympatico.ca> writes:
******Darshaneneazram reflection:
Darshaneneazram playfully painting:
Love and Blessings from:
ericsattava
Darshaneneazram reflecting:
What!
K
This D u
r n
Bird?
Boris Fuller
That was fun Eric. I can't reproduce your patchwork but here's my take on
the translation.
(I think it is a spring poem, not "fall" :-D )
Contemplating the wine, not noticing the twilight,
falling flowers pile up on my robe.
Drunk, I rise and walk the valleys of the moon.
Migrating birds return - we may also, occasionally.
Do you have any more of those?.
Boris
Raan
The prose
whose words
swords cuts
what's one
under
words hid
bid see
the prose
--
*·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
(_¸.·' Raan <-- Not-Poet
Darshaneneazram
<orour...@hotmail.com> writes:
******Darshaneneazram reflection:
Upon reading Japanese Death Poems,
Compiled and with an Introduction by Yoel Hoffmann
Tuttle Publishing
One come upon a translation of a poem by: Li Po
Entitled "Self-Consolation"
The Poem is four lines long
Each lie composed of five characters
The literal translation:
facing wine not distinguishing twilight
fall flower(s) pile up I/my robe
drunk rise walk valley moon
bird(s) return man also rare
******Darshaneneazram's playful painting:
Beholding the wine who is distinguishing the twilight
The fall flowers pile up upon my robe
Drunk, I rise and walk amidst the valley moon
The birds return and the man also, this is rare.
Amidst the twilight robe the moon is rare
Distinguishing the self and the valley also
I do not pile up, but walk as a man
Wine flowers rise and return
Facing the fall of drunk birds
******Boris playing:
That was fun Eric. I can't reproduce your patchwork but here's my take on
the translation.
(I think it is a spring poem, not "fall" :-D )
Contemplating the wine, not noticing the twilight,
falling flowers pile up on my robe.
Drunk, I rise and walk the valleys of the moon.
Migrating birds return - we may also, occasionally.
Do you have any more of those?.
******Darshaneneazram playfully painting:
naturally reflecting light turns quickly
exotic dancers nakedly sway slowly
within valley flowers spring up
amid mountains drunk fall down
Raan
Reflects my
exact experience
--
*·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
(_¸.·' Raan LOL
Darshaneneazram
Upon reading Japanese Death Poems,
Compiled and with an Introduction by Yoel Hoffmann
Tuttle Publishing
One come upon a translation of a poem by: Li Po
Entitled "Self-Consolation"
The Poem is four lines long
Each lie composed of five characters
The literal translation:
facing wine not distinguishing twilight
fall flower(s) pile up I/my robe
drunk rise walk valley moon
bird(s) return man also rare
******Darshaneneazram playful painting:
Beholding the wine who is distinguishing the twilight
The fall flowers pile up upon my robe
Drunk, I rise and walk amidst the valley moon
The birds return and the man also, this is rare.
Amidst the twilight robe the moon is rare
Distinguishing the self and the valley also
I do not pile up, but walk as a man
Wine flowers rise and return
Facing the fall of drunk birds
*****Raan's response:
Tried any like this yourself?
--
*·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
(_¸.·' Raan
*****Darshaneneazram reflecting:
What!
K
This D u
r n
Bird?
******Raan's insightful painting:
The prose
whose words
swords cuts
what's one
under
words hid
bid see
the prose
not poet
--
*·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
(_¸.·' Raan
******Darshaneneazram the refection of a painting:
The prose whose words are cuts of swords
What is the one under the words hid
The capacity to see the prose not the poet
Beholding the unseen over the autumn moon
darshaneneazram <bowing>
Love and Blessings from:
A field of silence
In a sea of solitude
A beholding light
In the empty sky!
ericsattava :-)
Boris Fuller
"Raan" <raan...@sympatico.ca> wrote in message
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>
> "Darshaneneazram" <darshan...@aol.com> wrote in message
> news:20011116043725...@nso-fy.aol.com...
> > ******Darshaneneazram playfully painting:
> >
> >
> > naturally reflecting light turns quickly
> > exotic dancers nakedly sway slowly
> > within valley flowers spring up
> > amid mountains drunk fall down
Light from the mirror ball spins rapidly
naked dancers undulate slowly.
In the valley flowers spring up
somewhere in the mountains a drunk falls down.
> >
> >
> > Love and Blessings from:
> >
> > A field of silence
> > In a sea of solitude
> > A beholding light
> > In the empty sky!
> >
> > ericsattava
>
> Reflects my
> exact experience
> --
> *·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
> (_¸.·' Raan LOL
>
Boris
Darshaneneazram
naturally reflecting light turns quickly
exotic dancers nakedly sway slowly
within valley flowers spring up
amid mountains drunk fall down
******Boris's playful expression:
Light from the mirror ball spins rapidly
naked dancers undulate slowly.
In the valley flowers spring up
somewhere in the mountains a drunk falls down.
******Raan's smiling insights:
Reflects my
exact experience
--
*·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
(_¸.·' Raan LOL
******Darshaneneazram painting for wonderful friends:
A Wonderful Journey
******************************
mindful soft petals floating water
sleep hard stones empty ground
evening moon over flowing fields
morning light under endless skies
******Darshaneneazram bowing:
Thanks Raan and Boris
It is a wonderful experience
To have such playful companions
On the road of this joyful journey
Drunk!
Laughing!
With tearful eyes! ( :.D
Boris Fuller
"Raan" <raan...@sympatico.ca> wrote in message
news:2nkJ7.23314$cG3.3...@news20.bellglobal.com...
>
> "Darshaneneazram" <darshan...@aol.com> wrote in message
> news:20011116043725...@nso-fy.aol.com...
> > ******Darshaneneazram playfully painting:
> >
> >
> > naturally reflecting light turns quickly
> > exotic dancers nakedly sway slowly
> > within valley flowers spring up
> > amid mountains drunk fall down
Light from the mirror ball spins rapidly
naked dancers undulate slowly.
In the valley flowers spring up
somewhere in the mountains a drunk falls down.
> >
> >
> > Love and Blessings from:
> >
> > A field of silence
> > In a sea of solitude
> > A beholding light
> > In the empty sky!
> >
> > ericsattava
>
> Reflects my
> exact experience
> --
> *·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
> (_¸.·' Raan LOL
>
that would be the lap dancing then, would it?
Boris >:)
Boris Fuller
> ******Darshaneneazram's playful painting:
>
>
> naturally reflecting light turns quickly
> exotic dancers nakedly sway slowly
> within valley flowers spring up
> amid mountains drunk fall down
>
>
> ******Boris's playful expression:
>
> Light from the mirror ball spins rapidly
> naked dancers undulate slowly.
> In the valley flowers spring up
> somewhere in the mountains a drunk falls down.
>
>
>
> ******Raan's smiling insights:
>
> Reflects my
> exact experience
> --
> *·.¸_¸.·'¨¨)
> (_¸.·' Raan LOL
>
>
>
>
> ******Darshaneneazram painting for wonderful friends:
>
> A Wonderful Journey
> ******************************
>
> mindful soft petals floating water
> sleep hard stones empty ground
> evening moon over flowing fields
> morning light under endless skies
awake - softly, the petals float on the water.
asleep - on hard stones on the empty ground.
In the evening, the moon over flowing fields;
in the morning, light under endless skies.
>
>
> ******Darshaneneazram bowing:
>
> Thanks Raan and Boris
>
>
> It is a wonderful experience
> To have such playful companions
> On the road of this joyful journey
>
> Drunk!
>
> Laughing!
>
> With tearful eyes! ( :.D
>
>
>
> Love and Blessings from:
>
> A field of silence
> In a sea of solitude
> A beholding light
> In the empty sky!
>
> ericsattava
>
(bows)
Boris