Thanks in advance for the opinions.
Tom
> I've often used "insofar as" to qualify a previous statement when I
> write scholarly papers. So I was wondering if you guys and gals
> considered that phrase, and/or "inasmuch as," overly wordy or ,
> perhaps, pedantic ways of saying "in that" or "since," particularly
> when writing for the general public.
This is more a matter of your personal literary style than the
readers you have in mind.
When editing and when in doubt over questions like this it helps:
1. To remove the word or phrase completely and judge whether
a connecting or qualifying word is really essential. If so:
2. Try first the very simplest word or phrase with the necessary function,
e.g. "as," "for" or "because."
--
Don Phillipson
Carlsbad Springs
(Ottawa, Canada)
All of those, and hackneyed too. Never use multiple words where one
will do.
--
"The difference between the /almost right/ word and the /right/ word
is ... the difference between the lightning-bug and the lightning."
--Mark Twain
Stan Brown, Tompkins County, NY, USA http://OakRoadSystems.com
Perfectly normal in my language.
--
Robert Bannister
But "insofar" is one word. What did you mean?
--
Robert Bannister
--
Peter Moylan, Newcastle, NSW, Australia. http://www.pmoylan.org
For an e-mail address, see my web page.
The Oxford Dictionary for Writers and Editors has this interesting sequence:
in so far (three words)
insomuch (one word)
--
James
"Insofar as" is two words; "since" is one.
I must be really, really old, because I would have written it (if at
all) as three words. AHD4 lists it as one word, though.
But they don't mean the same thing insofar as "since" means "because"
and "insofar" doesn't.
--
Robert Bannister