~Finger~Painting~

[Iceshard]

Hi, just a couple of delirous thoughts..I started this poem, and I was
jjust wondering how other's thought of it so far. If you have any
idea's on what to add to it, PLEASE tell me!! Thanx :)
***
I finger-paint the sky black velvet
And sing the lone wolf's song
The world is dying now
But you can't see what's wrong

Each word spoken makes me shudder
And every touch makes me withdraw
Now demon's are my comforters
And they caress me with thier claws

My blood is coloured dark as the wine
That hardly touches your perfect lips
And I am just the dreamer type
Who would just rather sit and wish

A hoofbeat is my steady heart
My ears pick up his voice
It's swimming in my mind now
And I don't get a choice....
***
And that's all I have. Basically, it is about me, who hates the city
and is a dreamer, who feels exculded from her friends, and she loves a
dreamer country boy, who she hardly even knows...welcome to my
world.....