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Eleonore Beaudoin

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Feb 7, 2012, 8:56:12 PM2/7/12
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Manfred Rahim (farewellpa...@spamgourmet.com) writes:
> x-no-archive: yes
>
> if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
> here is my first:
>
> you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
>
> you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
>
> nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
>
> surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
>
> never fear that step, it=92s so wonderfully bold
>
> embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.
>


Yikes....

Quite dark....
But also, wiht the laws in this country at least, it could be seen as an
encouragement to suicide, which is punishable by law...

Hope things lighten up....

harry

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Feb 8, 2012, 4:22:35 AM2/8/12
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On Tue, 7 Feb 2012 16:46:54 -0800 (PST), Manfred Rahim
<farewellpa...@spamgourmet.com> wrote:

>x-no-archive: yes
>
>if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
>here is my first:
>
>you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
>
>you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
>
>nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
>
>surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
>
>never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold
>
>embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.


if you had the guts to take the dive,

you wouldn't be here nor be alive.

instead, you'll bore me with your hypocrite rap,

filling my ears with your sissy crap.

so take your own advice and jump,

you boring, babbling, hypocrite chump.

Brave Burger

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Feb 8, 2012, 5:31:53 AM2/8/12
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Nobody invited you here, so don't let the door
kick you in the ass while leaving, bye bye..


Eleonore Beaudoin

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Feb 9, 2012, 1:21:52 AM2/9/12
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This is completely illegal.

I wish I had your address to report you.


Eleonore Beaudoin

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Feb 9, 2012, 1:24:20 AM2/9/12
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Another coward, acting illegally and irresponsibly, and too coward to put
a real addie. In other words, doing wrong just because he can ...under
anonymous postings. Probably quite the coward in real life, just because
..he can't, his name being known in real life.



Adam Lynn

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Feb 10, 2012, 3:02:30 AM2/10/12
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On Feb 7, 7:46 pm, Manfred Rahim <farewellpal.
13.ra...@spamgourmet.com> wrote:
> x-no-archive: yes
>
> if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
> here is my first:
>
> you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
>
> you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
>
> nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
>
> surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
>
> never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold
>
> embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.

Do you need a hug? There.
Hope that helps. Now go
make a poem.
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humble.life

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Apr 2, 2012, 10:31:55 PM4/2/12
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On 03/04/2012 02:47, hop wrote:
> x-no-archive: yes
>
> "Now go
> make a poem. "
>
> some of us struggle just to climb out of our lonely beds,
> some of us have voices screaming in our heads,
> we did not choose the life that conquered our souls,
> we did not yearn to be torn apart between poles,
> yet we stagger on, because we know nothing else and think we must
> would not lashing out be right, proper, some say even just?
>
>
> (end)

you win my vote

jill

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Apr 2, 2012, 11:51:05 PM4/2/12
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On Apr 2, 6:47 pm, hop <connie.2.ra...@spamgourmet.com> wrote:
> x-no-archive: yes
>
> "Now go
> make a poem. "
>
>  some of us struggle just to climb out of our lonely beds,
> some of us have voices screaming in our heads,
> we did not choose the life that conquered our souls,
> we did not yearn to be torn apart between poles,
> yet we stagger on, because we know nothing else and think we must
> would not lashing out be right, proper, some say even just?
>
> (end)

lash out at who hop? that is the problem for me. All this free
floating resentment and misery and knowing it really isn't fair to
dump it on anybody even the people who contributed to it cuz they
really didn't mean it there was no intent , it is just such a mess
isn't it ,
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