From: "Pamela" <Pam...@alltel.net>
Tauna,
Quite the teasing story. Not sure you convinced me this would take
place in such a public place, but Tom teasing Harry was quite fun. Tom
was ruthless. Poor Harry. :-)
I did have some trouble with positions. Just when I thought Tom was
behind Harry, Harry was noticing the look in Tom's eyes. Then I thought
they were face to face and then Tom was grinding into Harry from behind?
I wasn't sure here. Not a huge problem, but it did throw me off.
Thanks.
Pamela
> Title: I feel funny.
> Author:Tauna (blkt...@shawstudios.com)
> Series: VOY
> Part: NEW 1/1
> Rating: [PG]
> Codes: P/K
> Summary: Teasing
>
> Archive as you will. I'd love to know if you enjoyed it. Constructive
> criticism is welcome. Flames are not.
>
> **Disclaimer**
> Paramount owns Tom and Harry, I just play with them.
> You should be over 18 and not offended by two boys in love to read
this.
>
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From: Donna Bowers <blkt...@shawstudios.com>
On Thu, 11 Nov 1999, Pamela wrote:
Pamela,
Thanks for the feedback!
>
> Quite the teasing story. Not sure you convinced me this would take
> place in such a public place, but Tom teasing Harry was quite fun. Tom
> was ruthless. Poor Harry. :-)
>
I could see it. No one really taking it seriously, sort of...
> I did have some trouble with positions. Just when I thought Tom was
> behind Harry, Harry was noticing the look in Tom's eyes. Then I thought
> they were face to face and then Tom was grinding into Harry from behind?
> I wasn't sure here. Not a huge problem, but it did throw me off.
Ahh yes, that's the sort of info I'm looking for. He was indeed behind
Harry. Harry was looking over his shoulder. I need to add that part in.
What were the other specifics where you got confused to positioning?
<just cause I can see it in my head doesn't mean everyone else can!>
Tauna
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