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Dad circumcises son (story Pt1)
From: djma...@interaccess.com (David)
Date: Thu, 25 May 1995 22:00:15 -0800
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The Doctor and Darren
I'm thirty-four and I've been a doctor for seven years. I started off in
the Army Medical Corps after I finished my training at one of the big
teaching hospitals. The Army really isn't my kind of life, and I only did a
couple of years, but there's one thing to be said for it. If you enjoy
performing circumcisions, you get your chance to keep in practice there.
There's always someone being posted to the tropics, or having some little
problem with a tight foreskin, and I often found it quite surprisingly easy
to persuade them that what they needed was that little bit of skin removed
by my own highly skilled hand. Even better were the poor dumb squaddies who
believed the tale that it got you ten days leave. I made sure that a couple
of my corporals kept spreading that story among the new recruits. In
return, they got to watch the circumcisions I performed. They enjoyed that.
My two sidekicks would encourage the recruits to come and ask for
it, and when I looked at their dicks the skin would be loose and the head
completely clean. In fact I can say that I mostly cut the lads who didn't
need it. And need it or not, they were back on parade the following morning
with a very sore weapon in their rough army trousers.
I think that's where I developed a taste for the whole idea. Of course at
medical school they had decided that circumcision was a bit unfashionable
but I've found that the practice I got in the Army has stood me in good
stead. Don't misunderstand me. I don't approve of the sort of wholesale
slaughter of the innocent that happens in the States. I do circumcise
babies, of course, from time to time, but only if the parents are really
insistent. Fewer of them are, these days, but that's all to the good.
Cutting a baby is OK, but the real thrill is doing it for an adolescent, and
because there are fewer babies done, it means there are more teenagers
around to play with. And that is really nice. Part of the interest is
persuading their parents. I tell them how much cleaner, and how much better
the penis looks. I warn the about dirt behind tight foreskins and penile
cancer. I talk about irritations and ulcers and all the other "medical"
reasons. But what I don't say is that they are all so much nonsense.
Doctors, and especially me, we circumcise because we enjoy it.
And so, since I left the Army, I have had the privilege and pleasure of
taking my scalpel to some twentyfive or thirty healthy teenagers'
foreskins. Now you must understand that I am a professional. They got the
best treatment. After all, if you're going to get a reputation for
circumcision, it ought to be a good one, and I took great care over all of
them. They all had an anaesthetic injected carefully into the skin. They
all had the cut ends lined up neatly, the frenum carefully preserved. The
frenum is the little bridge of skin just under the opening, the meatus as we
call it. It's quite sensitive and most guys ask to keep it. Mostly I let
them. Anyway they all healed up looking smooth and neat. But I have to say
that I began to feel that I was not getting all the pleasure I might from
the operation. Then about a month ago, two things happened. First, I read
an article in an American magazine. It was about some of the customs of the
Arabs and of the slaves they took from the African tribes. Now I don't know
how true it all was, but it was obvious that the writer was as turned on by
the idea of primitive circumcisions as I was. It was terrific, and I began
to think that perhaps I was being too unambitious with the foreskins that
came under my knife. I also began to wonder what it would be like to own
slaves. The second thing that happened was that a goodlooking guy of about
thirty-two or thirty-three, a patient of mine, Terry by name, brought his
fifteen year old stepson, Darren, to my surgery. They were the last
patients of the afternoon session.
I've known Terry for some time. He's goodlooking, a bit of a bruiser, not
the world's most intellectual guy, but sharp. He works at Nine Elms, in the
new Covent Garden fruit market, and humping tons of fruit around has given
him a very fair set of muscles. You can see them ripple under his Tshirt.
I've seen that other important muscle he has bulging in his jeans, too.
After all, I'm his doctor. It's big, I can tell you, and I've seen enough
that I don't impress easily. His bollocks are big to match it, and if you
find bodyhair sexy, well, he has neither too little nor too much. There's
just one thing though. Whoever circumcised him was a butcher. What was
left was a beautiful head, and a lovely thick shaft, but too much skin off
one side, too little off the other, and a scar that looks as if it was
stitched up with string. Of course, as I said, I am his doctor, so I'd
never actually had my hands on it except purely for medical purposes, but I
didn't somehow think he'd have been surprised that another guy was
interested in the state of his equipment. Anyway, here he was, with young
Darren.
The other thing I knew about Terry was that his wife, Darren's mother, had
been carrying on with more or less anything in trousers for a long time now.
Of course you and I don't see much wrong in that, and maybe neither did
Terry, because he stuck with her. But seeing Terry there was a bit of a
surprise. In the past it was always Sylvia that came in with Darren.
Any good doctor, when he sees a patient, goes through the patient's history
notes. I didn't have much on Darren, but what there was was quite
interesting, to me at least. Like for example, he'd been brought to see my
predecessor in the practice. You remember I said I only circumcise babies
if the parents insist? Well, the notes said that Sylvia had come up with
the idea, but the guy before me turned her off. I didn't know him, but I
was glad he had. Probably, like me, he thought that circumcising a baby
seemed a bit tame. There have been several I've thought, 'save him for
later, or if not him, well, there will be lots more.' When he was eight, she
and her then boyfriend came and asked again. It was my writing on the notes
and I remembered it now. Darren's little cock looked very good as it was,
and it stiffened nicely as I handled it, but again I said no. Of course I
didn't close the door on the idea entirely. I'd had a feeling then that she
would come back, but I pointed out that there was no tightness or soreness
and if she was still worried, bring the lad back when he has developed, I'll
take another look then.
Then when Sylvia married Terry they adopted Darren, to make it all legal,
and I'd seen him two or three times since then. He was a tough kid, and
they get the harder knocks. I took a quick look through his notes and
registered a broken arm and some concussion from a fight. Looking at the
boy himself, he certainly seemed to have developed very nicely indeed. He
was wellmuscled for a teenager, compact and trim, short blond hair and a
very fair packet in his trousers. I asked what seemed to be the problem.
Terry answered. "It's like this, Doc". Darren ain't been sleeping too good
and 'e's got these exams coming up. I thought you might be able to give him
something. To get him off to sleep, like." Darren looked a bit sullen, I
thought, but Terry looked embarrassed. I knew there had to be something
else, you get a instinct as a doctor, so I waited. "See," he said, "when he
doesn't got off to sleep, he starts, you know, playing with hisself."
"Oh, yes," I said, "masturbating."
"Well, that's the fancy word, innit."
"Still, it's the right one."
Now you and I, we know that everyone does it. So did Terry, I thought,
after all, he is quite a sharp character. I wondered why he was making a
thing of it. Darren looked a bit guilty. Still, he was my patient, so I
thought I'd better talk to him. "All right," I said, "lets have some more
information. What do you think is keeping you off your sleep? Is there
anything you're worried about? "
The lad shrugged. "Dunno," he said, "not really." "How long have you been
masturbating?" "Dunno."
"Well, that wasn't the first time, was it, son," said Terry. Then he turned
to me. "Maybe you heard, Doc, his mum and me, we've split up. She's gone
off, oh, four months back, with her new bloke. This time she says she's not
coming back."
"Good riddance," said Darren. "We'll do better without her." Terry seemed
pleased at this, but he carried on.
"That's as may be, son. Anyhow, you know what it means. I'm in charge now,
you'll do what I say. And that means no more beating your meat every night.
It ain't good for you. You carry on like that and we'll have to talk to Doc
about that other little job."
I pricked up my ears. The 'other little job' had an interesting sound.
Then I looked at Terry, and suddenly, just from the look in his eye, I knew
exactly what the 'other little job' might be. What's more he looked back at
me, and I saw that he knew I knew. He wasn't going to say the word, and nor
was I, but I could tell we were both savouring the same idea. Then I looked
at Darren. I wondered if he knew, too. Was that fear in his eyes? Or was
it interest ? Or maybe, was it both ?
"Right," I said. "I'd better take a look at you. Lots of boys masturbate,
and the reason is often some minor irritation, even something you can't
really feel, which keeps you off your sleep and makes you want to touch your
penis. And of course having done that, it's a short step to playing with
it." I looked him straight in the eyes. "We can probably do something
about that." I could tell that he too knew what we could do. What
interested me was that something about him seemed almost to welcome the
idea. "Go behind that screen, please, and strip down to your underpants."
The boy did so and I had him come and stand by my table. He had a lovely
body, with the taut muscles, the tight little arse and smooth skin of the
adolescent. I slipped his briefs down over his thighs. The hair at his
groin was silky and almost blond and curled tightly at the base of his
shaft. The cock itself was big and beautiful. It hung freely down, a
little proud of his testicles. The foreskin precisely covered the head, and
no more. The head was big and I gradually, slowly and gently took it in my
hands and pushed back the foreskin. The soft teenage skin slid easily back
and as the fleshy purple glans was released from its covering it expanded
like a flower. Though the skin covered the head closely there was no
tightness. The foreskin rode back across the corona easily. As it slid
over the edge I could feel Darren's erection beginning. I continued to
press it further, and the clean, perfect, beautiful sulcus appeared. There
were veins beneath the skin. I paused for a second. Then I thrust the
foreskin firmly back as far as it would go. Under the tension the frenum
showed white amid the surrounding skin. I took hold of the glans and spread
the lips of the meatus. It was a fair size and as it opened I could see the
dark, moist flesh inside. When I released it a spot of the precum fluid
appeared at the tip. I had been fighting to be a professional doctor, to
keep my hard down. What finished me was that spot of juice from the meatus.
It was all I could do not to bend down and lick it off. Darren was half
erect now, and when I let his cock go it stayed there. The foreskin
unrolled of its own accord almost to its original position.
I looked at Terry. I recognised the look he had on. Lust, of course. He
had sex written all over his face. But as he gazed at Darren's perfect
cock, I saw envy there as well. And I knew what he wanted to do about it,
too.
So I let the boy dress himself and sent him into the waiting room so that I
could have a private word with Terry. I noticed though that when Darren
came out from behind the screen, he hadn't just stuffed his cock back into
his jeans any old how. It was carefully placed to be seen, and the half
erection showed clearly in his pants. When he had gone I looked Terry,
straight in the eye.
"Stand up, Terry," I said. He looked surprised, then embarrassed. He
wriggled a bit in his trousers, but I held his eye and he stood. It was as
I expected. Terry's jeans were tight and clearly outlined I could see the
shape of his erection trying to get out of them. "Thought so," I said. "OK,
now I know where we stand." Terry looked at me hard. Then he laughed.
"Bloody hell, Doc. How did you know?"
"That's not the only thing I know," I said. "Now, this door is soundproof,
noone can overhear us and everything you say to me is confidential, right?
So you can say exactly what you like. But I'm going to say one thing.
Every kid has a wank now and then. I bet you did when you were Darren's
age." He shook his head a little, as if he was remembering it, but he
didn't deny it. "So why'd you bring him here? I mean, if it's just that
he isn't sleeping, I'll give him something. But it's not that, is it?
It's the other thing. And what do you expect me to do about that?"
"Well," he said, "You said yourself there might be something wrong,
something irritating him. Can you do anything about that?"
"There's nothing at all wrong with Darren's penis. In fact it's as close to
perfect as you could wish to see, no marks, no dirt, no tightness, no
irritation. And what's more, he knows that. You know it too, surely. Or
is that the first time you've seen it? I saw you getting a good look."
"First time closeto. I've seen it a couple of times in the bath."
"Anyway," I went on, "I think you had something else in mind, or am I wrong.
You said something about 'some other little job'. Were you thinking of some
sort of punishment or other. Noone punishes a kid of fifteen for wanking,
not in the twentieth century."
His face clouded over.
"They did me, didn't they?" he said."Just the once I got caught and they
did me."
I thought I knew just what he meant, then, and I said "All right, let's have
it then. I think you've got something in mind. You said masturbation was a
fancy word, and I said it was the right one. What's the right word for this
one, then?"
He looked at me then. He didn't know if he could trust me, but I knew he
was too horny with the idea to let go now.
"Circumcision," he whispered. "That's what the word is. That's what they
did to me. And Christ! it hurt!" I thought of his butchered cock. "My
two brothers, Ron and Kevin, they caught me wanking one night, just like I
caught Darren. They thumped me, and I swore at them and thumped them back.
Next night they're in the boozer and they meet this bloke they don't know
from Adam. They have a bit to drink and they tell him all about it. 'I
know a trick worth two of that' says the bloke, and the next thing I know
the three of them are back home, pissed as ferrets and up in my bedroom.
'We're going to put a stop to your larks' says Ron, and then he and Ron hold
me down and the other guy gives me the treatment with the kitchen scissors.
Have you seen the result, Doc? You have haven't you. It ain't pretty, and
my God it hurt!"
"And that's what you want for Darren?"
"That's what I want."
I looked at him straight. He was still standing. One hand was in his
pocket, and I could see he was gripping the stiff and swollen monster in his
pants. "All right, drop your pants. Let's see what you want for him, and
I'll think about it." Slowly he undid the belt of his jeans and slipped
them down. His cock bulged and throbbed in his briefs. I could see the
shape of the cockhead clearly. "I don't like showing this," he said. "I'm
a doctor, I've seen worse, I expect." He slipped down his briefs.
I have seen worse, but not many. His cock was straight out hard and stiff
as a ramrod. It could have been magnificent. It was strong and thick, with
the great purple cockhead swollen with excitement to the size and colour of
a huge plum. But as I've said, he'd been butchered. On one side the skin
was tight and the horrible, messy scar had pulled. On the other there was a
cuff of thick white skin covering part of the head. The scar there was ugly
too. Underneath there was a ragged scar running back along the shaft.
I leant forward. "Oh, Christ," he said, "Don't touch it or I'll come."
I didn't want that, of course, so I said "OK, now I've seen it. You're
right it's not pretty, but it's a hell of a weapon."
"Got no complaints on that score."
"I'll bet. You know, maybe I could do something about those scars. Anyway,
is that what you want for Darren? Because I tell you one thing if it is.
I don't do circumcisions with kitchen scissors."
He shuddered a bit as he remembered his own mutilation. Then he said, "Look
Doc, you're way ahead of me. Darren's a good kid, mostly. When I came in
here I didn't have any of this in mind." But I saw he couldn't meet my
eyes, and I said "Don't give me that, Terry. You've been thinking about
this ever since you caught him wanking. Maybe earlier. In fact, I think
you've wanted him cut ever since the first time you saw him in the bath." I
didn't look at his eyes, I looked at his cock. The way it twitched when I
said it, I knew I was right.
"You know, you got me," he said. "So help me I don't know how you knew, but
you've known since we came in, ain't you. And you're dead right. He's a
goodlooking kid, and he left the bathroom door open. First time I went in
it was an accident, and I only got a quick look. I couldn't think of
anything else all fucking evening. So I made sure I got another look, real
soon. Well you saw it, Doc. That kid's prick, it's fantastic, it's magic."
He grinned. "Course I reckon he left the door open on purpose, second time.
See, he put the facecloth on the top of it when I came in, but he left it
long enough so I got quite a good look."
He paused. "Here Doc, when exactly did you suss out that's what I wanted."
"Soon as you said he was playing with himself."
"Yeah, well I'll tell you something. Soon as I said it I knew you knew.
And I knew you were going to help."
"Well..... that depends exactly what it is you want. Like I said, no
kitchen scissors."
"Nah, nah," he said, "I want it done proper. If I'd wanted the other I'd
have done it myself, and I don't say I wasn't tempted, poor little bleeder.
D'you know, he was so ashamed when I caught him I think he'd have let me.
Course you see it wasn't like what happened to me. I didn't thump him, and
he didn't give me lip. Anyway, I want him to look good."
"And what does he want?"
"Haven't asked him. See when I walked in I said to myself, 'Gotcher, son,
you've given me the excuse. We're having that foreskin off you.' Then I
talk to him all serious about it, and I says we're going to see you, and
maybe that's what you'll say."
"What did he say to that?"
"Didn't seem to like it a lot. In fact not one little bit." Terry grinned
all over his face. "But then, he's not got a lot of choice, has he. I
mean, I'm in charge of him, and you're his doctor, and if we say 'cut', it's
cut. Mind you, it's funny, in a way I think he's quite interested. I told
him I'd been done." "Did you show him?" "Didn't want to frighten him off,
did I? Anyhow, he cheered up a bit." "He knew what it meant, though,
circumcision?" "Oh sure, all kids do."
"So, this isn't going to be a total surprise!"
"Bit of one, maybe. Anyhow, like I said, I want it done properly, not
fucked up like I was." He looked down at his cock. "Course if I could get
hold of the bastard that did this, that'd be different. I've had ideas
about him..... Well, we won't go into that." Then he grinned. "Unless
you're interested."
"Let's stick with Darren," I said, "for the moment. Now, how do you want
him to be circumcised?"
"Didn't know there was a choice, really. I mean, I thought I'd just bring
him to you and you'd take care of that."
"Oh, I will, I will. But just for example, do you want to be here, do you
want to watch him being circumcised?" Of course you do, I thought and
watched his cock. It twitched again at the thought. "I suppose so," he
said. "Best to make sure it's done right, eh Doc? Anyhow, it'd be
interesting. Specially since I couldn't see a thing when mine was done."
"Right. Next, circumcision can be rather painful. Well, you know that." I
paused to make sure he got the message. "Do you want him to have an
anaesthetic?"
He got the message and for a moment I thought he was going to come on the
spot. "Fucking Christ," he gasped, "oh fucking Christ. Oh, the poor little
bugger. I thought about that, but I thought you'd never wear it. Oh God,
that's going to hurt. I thought you'd want to give him a jab or something,
but oh, Christ, nothing at all."
"Come on," I said, "it's good for him to learn to take a little pain. It's
only a cut in the skin."
"Yes," he said, "but I've had it done to me, remember. I know what it's
like. It's not just a little pain. God, would you really do that for me?"
"I need your signature."
"You've got it." I knew I had.
"And I can watch?" "Sure. Just one more thing. When?"
"Soon as you like."
I looked at my watch. "OK, Strike while the iron is hot. I'll get rid of
my secretary, and we'll do it now. One of the nice things about this is
that it's all perfectly legal. You're in charge of him and I'm his doctor,
like you said. But I don't think we really want witnesses. Are you going
to tell him or am I?" "Better be you."
Terry's maltreated cock was still rock hard and he had a lot of trouble
putting it back in his jeans. He sat down, with difficulty, so that it
would not be too obvious when Darren came in. I went out to the waiting
room and sent my secretary home. Darren was sitting there, looking
apprehensive. I called him into the consulting room.
"I'm sorry we took so long," I said, "But I'll come straight to the point.
You were brought here because you were playing with yourself. I examined
your foreskin, and I can find nothing the matter with it, but we have
decided that you should be circumcised, here and now. Terry tells me you
know what that means. I am going to remove your foreskin which is the ring
of skin at the tip of your penis." Terry and I knew, of course, that I had
told the truth. There was nothing the matter with his foreskin, but we had
decided to circumcise him anyway.
Not surprisingly, he looked very apprehensive, but was I wrong, or was it
mixed with anticipation. I wondered if he'd maybe been curious, as some
kids are, what it would be like to be circumcised. If so, he was going to
find out.
I sent him to undress again behind the screen. While he did so I put a mat
on the floor and positioned the light. Then I went out to the store
cupboard to fetch my kit. I heard voices and wondered what they were saying
to each other. Whatever it was they were silent when I came back. I waited
for Darren to finish undressing.
When Darren came from behind the screen he was naked. He watched fascinated
as I laid out the instruments for his circumcision. First I laid out the
needles and the sutures on the sterile tray. I took the clamp with which I
would seize the foreskin to draw it forward. Then from a sealed pack I took
a scalpel. I remembered the article I had read, and thought that if a witch
doctor with a rusty razor blade could get a perfect result time after time,
I could do the same with my experience and a surgical steel blade so sharp
that it could slice a human hair. I showed Darren the edge. He gazed at it
horrified. I could tell that in imagination he felt it already in his
flesh. Of course there was no hypodermic needle on the tray, and I think it
was then he realised there would be no anaesthetic. Moving slowly, almost
ritually, I took a bowl and washed the boy's genitals. The warm water and
the gentle pressure bought on an almost instant erection and the boy's cock
stood upright straight in front of him. I could not see Terry, but I could
tell that he was hardly daring to breathe. I dried the boy's penis and
testicles. Then I washed my own hands and dried them.
I shone the light upon the naked boy's defenceless penis. I studied it
carefully. Without anaesthetic the operation would have to be done exactly,
precisely and as swiftly as lightning, or the boy would not be able to bear
the pain and unable to stop himself would move away, pulling his penis from
my grasp and risking horrifying damage from the scalpel as I cut. I wanted
the perfect, beautiful circumcision that a cock like his cried out for, not
a botched and disfiguring mutilation.
I took a deep, deep breath. Then I picked up the clamp in my left hand and
seized Darren's foreskin, pulling it forward as hard as I could. The boy
gave a sharp intake of breath from surprise and pain. Then I took the
scalpel in my right hand. The blade is much much keener than a razor. One
mistake would mutilate Darren beyond repair.
There was no mistake. I held his foreskin taut in the clamp. Then I struck
like lightning, and in two swift cuts I had run the scalpel round the outer
skin. It parted cleanly, and the boy gave a gasp of agony. As the skin
severed under the blade I pulled it forward with the clamp. Turned
outsidein the useless collar of prepuce covered the glans for the last
time. I ran the biting steel around it and it came free. I was working so
fast that Darren had not lost that amazing erection. The sight of it
spurred me on. Darren's cock was to be my masterpiece. I did not hesitate.
I pushed it upwards and the wounded boy gave a brief cry as in two quick
strokes I slit out the frenum.
There was one last thing. I meant to leave my own mark on Darren.
Thrusting the point of the scalpel into the very eye of the cock I cut
downwards in one flashing stroke, subincising the cockhead. The lips of
the meatus sprang apart, and as they did so, with a great cry, in an orgasm
of blood and fire, Darren and Terry climaxed together in a single instant of
time.
I lifted the scalpel and held it up between them. Darren was stunned,
numbed and mastered by the agony he had undergone. I could see in Terry's
eyes the memory of his own mutilation. Then both dropped to their knees on
the floor and worshipped the blade I held before them.
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