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jose ramirez

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Oct 7, 1998, 3:00:00 AM10/7/98
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Death Cry

The closer I get to life's end
The nearest I see
wines and bread.
Shall mine; end tomorrow,
in my way, shall not be any sorrow.

Jose
jnr...@erols.com

http://members.tripod.com/~pichin


Bastiaan Reinink

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Oct 8, 1998, 3:00:00 AM10/8/98
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I loved this poem!
I totally didn't get it though
*smile*

jose ramirez wrote:

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Bastiaan Reinink

I am not
I strife

Joe Gallagher

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Oct 9, 1998, 3:00:00 AM10/9/98
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In article <6vf5ta$p0f$1...@winter.news.erols.com>, jnr...@erols.com says...

> Death Cry
>
> The closer I get to life's end
> The nearest I see
> wines and bread.

Awesome lines.

> Shall mine; end tomorrow,

What's with the semi-colon? Did you do that for rhythm?

> in my way, shall not be any sorrow.

Weird but cool.
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Joe G. is road...@magicnet.net
http://www.magicnet.net/~joeg/words/
is his poetry website
"You'll never take me alive" - tSP

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