" jab shehr ke log na rastaa daiN kiyooN ban maiN na ja bisraam kare
deevanoN ki si na baat kare to aur kare deevaana kiyaa "
un ki tabiyat ki saadgi ki bharpoor akkasi karta hai .
aaj maiN un ki yeh ghazal aap sab ki nazar karti hooN
khair andaish
Sana
ham raat bohat roe, bohat aah o fughaaN ki
dil dard se bojhal ho to phir neend kahaaN ki
sar zanu pe rakhkhe hooe kiyaa soch rahi ho
kuch baat samajhti ho mohabbat zadgaaN ki
tum meri taraf daikh ke chup ho si gaeeN theeN
voh sa'at e khush vaqt, nishaat e guzraaN ki
an aur hi auqaat hai ai jaan e tamanna
ham nala kushaaN, be gunahaN , gham zadgaN ki
is ghar ki khuli chhat pe chamakte hooe taro
kehte ho kabhi baat vahaaN ja ke yahaaN ki
bargashta hooa ham se yeh mehtaab to yaaro
bas baat suni , raah chalaa kaahkashaaN ki
Allah kare meer ka jan'nat maiN makaaN ho
marhoom ne har baat ,hamari hi bayaaN ki :-))
paRhte haiN shab o roz usi shakhs ki ghazlaiN
ghazlaiN ,ke hikaayaat haiN ham dil zadgaN ki
achhchha hamaiN bante hooe mit'te hooe daikho
ham moj e guraizaN hi sahi aab e ravaaN ki
Inshaa se milo is se na rokaiN ge valaikin
us se yeh mulaaqaat nikaali hai kahaaN ki
mash'hoor hai har bazm maiN iss shakhs ka soda
baataiN haiN bohat shehr maiN badnaam miyaaN ki
ai dosto , ai dosto , ai dard naseebo
galiyoN maiN chalo sair karaiN shehr e butaaN ki
ham jaeN kisi simt ,kisi chok pe tehraiN
kahiyo na koi baat kisi sood o ziyaaN ki
"Insha " ki ghazal sun lo pe ranjoor na hona
deevana hai deevane ne ik baat bayaaN ki
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Before you buy.
Welcome back, Sana. It is a pleasure to have you back with us on ALUP.
Also, thanks for the ghazal. However, I am confused about one thing. Is
the poet Ibne Insha or Insha Allah Khan Insha? As far as I
know, "Inshaji" is normally used to refer to Insha Allah Khan Insha,
and not Ibne Insha. They are two completely different poets.
One is Insha Allah Khan 'Insha'. He was born in 1756/58 in Murshidabad.
He passed away in 1818 in Lucknow. Insha migrated to Delhi in search of
patronage. After an Afghan attack on Delhi, he moved to Lucknow.
Ibne Insha's actual name was Sher Mohammed Khan. He was born in
1925 in Jullundhar. He died in 1978 in London
I must confess that I often get confused between poems written by the
two poets, though one would expect the language and the style would
make matters easier.
Nita
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Nita as far as my limited knowledge goes, "Inshaji" is used for Ibne
Insha, he has used "Inshaji" in many of his Nazm's a famous
one, "Inshaji ab kooch karo..." and other
Ye baateN jhuThi baateN haiN, ye logoN ne phailaaI haiN
tum inshaa jii kaa naam nA lo, kyA inshaa jii saudaaii haiN ....
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tabassum
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tabassum
> Nita as far as my limited knowledge goes, "Inshaji" is used for Ibne
> Insha, he has used "Inshaji" in many of his Nazm's a famous
> one, "Inshaji ab kooch karo..." and other
>
> Ye baateN jhuThi baateN haiN, ye logoN ne phailaaI haiN
> tum inshaa jii kaa naam nA lo, kyA inshaa jii saudaaii haiN ....
Dear Tabassum,
As I already mentioned in my earlier post, I have problems
distinguishing between poems written by the two poets. I
always thought "Inshajii uTho ab kuuch karo" was by Insha Allah Khan
Insha. If I am mistaken, I would like to correct my web site, too.
Perhaps you and other ALUPers can help me out. Please tell
me which of the following are by Insha and which by Ibne
Insha. I have written the information I currently have:
achchhaa jo Khafaa ham se ho tum ai sanam achchhaa - Insha
"Insha" jii uTho ab kuuch karo is shahar me.n jii kaa lagaanaa kyaa -
Insha
Khayaal kiijiye kyaa kaam aaj mai.n ne kiyaa - Insha
kamar baa.Ndhe huye chalane pe yaa.N sab yaar baiThe hai.n - Insha
apane ham-raah jo aate ho idhar se pahale - Ibne Insha
aur to ko_ii bas na chalegaa hijr ke dard ke maaro.n kaa - Ibne Insha
kal chaaudhavii.n kii raat thii shab bhar rahaa charchaa teraa - Ibne
Insha
raat ke Khvaab sunaaye.n kis ko raat ke Khvaab suhaane the - Ibne Insha
us shaam vo ruKhsat kaa samaa.N yaad rahegaa - Ibne Insha
ye baate.n jhuuThii baaten hain yelogon ne phailaa_ii hain - Ibne Insha
farz karo ham ahl-e-vafaa hon - Ibne Insha
Thanks in advance
thanks so much for your warm welcome :-)
you are so right, these two poets can be confusing but as tabassum has
mentioned it, " Insha ji " is the term used for only Ibn e Insha .
among all the ghazals you have listed,except for the one you corrected
yourself, rest seem to have the correct poet's name in front of them.
where are you moving your site to ??
I am sure it is because you need more space :-)))
mashaallah kitni ghazlaiN haiN ab vahaaN pe ??
allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyaadah :-)
khair andaish
Sana
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