Aap ki madad ki talabgaar!
A Cassam
Aadaab Arz Hai,
Kya koi bataa sakhta hai hamein ye kis shaa'ir ka sher hai?????
shaaheen khud apna shikaar dhund leta hai
phehnkay huway danon pe tau kabootar guzaara karte hein!
Yahan par har waqt kaafee serious sa mahaul nazar aata hai--kya hee
behtar ho agar aap mehrbaan kabhi kabhi halkay phoolkay mazhai'aa
ash'aar bhi post kar kiya karen???
shukriya!
Abida Sultana
emth...@my-deja.com
Abida Sahiba,
Alaama Iqbal ka ziq'r ho raha hai ti unhiN ka aik mizahyiaa q'taa pesh
hai (shayad bahut logoN ko yeh maloom na ho ki unhoN neN kuchh halkey
phoolkey shaai'ry bhi ki hai):
membrii imperial council ki kuchh mushkil nahiN
vote to mil jaaeNge, paise bhi dilvaaeNge kya
meerzaa Ghalib Khuda bakhshe wazaah farmaa gaye
ham neN manaa ke raheN dilli meN par khaeNge kya.
Is qa'taa ka lut'f aap tabhi utha sakeNge, agar Mirza Ghalib ka yeh
she'r aap neN pehle suna ho:
is maa'moora* meN to hai, qeht-e-gham-e-ulfat** Asad,
ham neN manaa ke rraheN dilli meN par khaeNge kya.
*=kasba, town
**=gham-e-ulfat ka akaal
>
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emth...@my-deja.com wrote:
> In article <37535893...@home.com>,
> A Cassam <aca...@home.com> wrote:
> > Mohziz Khwaateen -O-Hazraat!
> >
> > Aadaab Arz Hai,
> >
> > Kya koi bataa sakhta hai hamein ye kis shaa'ir ka sher hai?????
> >
> > shaaheen khud apna shikaar dhund leta hai
> > phehnkay huway danon pe tau kabootar guzaara karte hein!
> >
> > Yahan par har waqt kaafee serious sa mahaul nazar aata hai--kya hee
> > behtar ho agar aap mehrbaan kabhi kabhi halkay phoolkay mazhai'aa
> > ash'aar bhi post kar kiya karen???
> >
> > shukriya!
> >
>
> vote to mil jaaeNge, paise bhi dilvaaeNge kya
> ham neN manaa ke raheN dilli meN par khaeNge kya.
Of course, wazaah should read 'b'jaa'
FDar351585
rpat...@sciborg.uwaterloo.ca
A Cassam wrote:
> Kya koi bataa sakhta hai hamein ye kis shaa'ir ka sher hai?????
>
> shaaheen khud apna shikaar dhund leta hai
> phehnkay huway danon pe tau kabootar guzaara karte hein!
>
'shaaheen' ka lafz dekhte hi, hamaare kisi ALUPer dost ne fauran keh
diya ke yeh she'r Allama Iqbal ka hai.............
haalaan-ke asliyat yeh hai ke is she'r ki takhleeq ka aaghaaz Safi
Lakhnavi se huya, jo aek baa-viqaar shaa'ir hone ke saath saath aek
naamvar kabootar-baaz bhi the. unhon ne aek din Khudaa-e-Sukhan Mir Taqi
Mir se (jo ke un dinon Lucknow gaye huye the) kahaa ke 'huzoor, koi aisa
mazmoon bataaiye jo kabootaroN se muta'alluq ho aur saath saath zaraa
adabi rang liye huye bhi ho'.
Mir Sahib bole ke 'hazrat, ham to gul-o-bulbul ke shaidaai hain, hamen
kabootaroN se kya waasta'?
kuchh arse ba'ad, Safi Lakhnavi ka Dilli jaana hua to Mirza Ghalib se
mulaaqaat ho gayee. unhon ne yihi sawaal Mirza ke saamne rakh diya.
Mirza tilmilaaye ke 'miyaaN, ham bater-baaz to hain, magar kabootar-baaz
naheen hain. aap apna rujoo' Ustaad Zauq ki taraf keejiye'. Jab Ustaad
Zauq ne yeh baat suni to ise apni tauheen samjha ke jo kaam Mirza khud
apni shaan ke shaayaaN naheen samajhte woh kaam bhalaa ham kiyoon karne
chale'?
waqt guzarta gayaa. aakhir-e-kaar, jab yeh mas'alaa Allama Iqbal ke
saamne aaya to unhon ne cheeN-bar-jabeeN ho kar kahaa ke 'sahib, is
mazmoon par to be-tahaasha taba'-aazmaai ho chuki hai, maslan kisi ne
yahaan tak keh diya hai ke
kunad ham-jins ba ham-jins parvaaz
kabootar ba kabootar, baaz ba baaz
yeh she'r parhte hi Allama ne farmaaya ke unhen lafz 'baaz' se sakht
nafrat hai; woh agar is mazmoon par kuchh kahen ge to us mein lafz
'shaaheen' ki maujoodagi az-had zaroori hai. unhon ne yeh bhi kahaa ke
mujavviza she'r mein kuchh khayaal aisa hona chaahiye jaise -----------
'maangi huyi rihaaee tauheen-o-baal-o-par hai'.
ya phir kuchh aisa khayaal ho jaise -----------
'ehsaan naa-khuda ke uthaaye miri balaa kashti khuda pe chhorh
doon, langar ko torh doon',
waghaira, waghaira, ..............
phir adeem-ul-fursati ka bahaana kar ke, apna daaman chhurhaa gaye.
baat Faiz Ahmad Faiz tak pahunchi to unhon ne yeh keh kar taal diya ke
'bhai, awwal to is mazmoon mein koi aisa unsar maujood naheen jo kisi
tehreek ke kaam aa sake; doosri baat yeh ke hamen "daana phainkne" mein
koi dilchaspi naheen hai'. aakhir Hafeez Jalandhri ne, jo ke har kaam
mein Allama Iqbal ki baraabari karne ke khwaahaaN the, is she'r ko poora
karne ka zimma apne sar liya aur is mazmoon par kaafi sar dhunte rahe.
phir bhi ta'ajjub hai ke, dono misron ko ham-wazn karna to aek taraf,
huzoor kisi bhi misre ko kisi bhi baihr mein fit na kar paaye.
ba-har-haal, qismat ki khoobi dekhiye ke joon-toon kar ke is she'r ne
hamaari roz-marra ki zabaan mein apna maqaam banaa hi liya. ab dekhna
yeh hai ke ise Ali Minai Sahib ki fehrist mein jagah milti hai ya ke
naheen!
khair-andesh, Raj Kumar
Ali Minai
<rpat...@sciborg.uwaterloo.ca> wrote:
>
>
>A Cassam wrote:
>
>> Kya koi bataa sakhta hai hamein ye kis shaa'ir ka sher hai?????
>>
>> shaaheen khud apna shikaar dhund leta hai
>> phehnkay huway danon pe tau kabootar guzaara karte hein!
>>
>
>'shaaheen' ka lafz dekhte hi, hamaare kisi ALUPer dost ne fauran keh
>diya ke yeh she'r Allama Iqbal ka hai.............
>haalaan-ke asliyat yeh hai ke is she'r ki takhleeq ka aaghaaz Safi
>Lakhnavi se huya, jo aek baa-viqaar shaa'ir hone ke saath saath aek
>....
>yeh hai ke ise Ali Minai Sahib ki fehrist mein jagah milti hai ya ke
>naheen!
Raj Kumar Sahib, that was a good one:-). I think this she'r is so outstanding
that I will start a whole new list for it!
Ali
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mehrbAN hO ke bulA lO mujhe CHAhO jis vaqt;
maEN gayA vaqt nahIN hUN ke phir A bhI na sakUN! Ghalib
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Ali Minai
A Cassam
Aadaab Arz Hai,
Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya. Aap ne apna itna waqt nikaal kar na sirf
Mohtaram Shaa'ir ka naam bataya bulkay --yeh bataa kar ke is she'r ka
wajood kiyoon kar huwa---humaray ilm mein bohot izaa'fa kiya hai! Aap ki
maalooma'at dekh kar tau humein bohot hee heirat hai! Goya she'r ke
peechay jo such waa'qiat hein --woh tak aap sab jaantay hein!!Is forum
ki kitnee barhee khush kismati hai jo aap jaisay Urdu Adab ke Aalim
yahan par maujood hein!
Umeed hai aap yoon hee hamesha hum logon ki rehnumaai kartay rahein ge!
Respectfully,
Abida Sultana
rpat...@sciborg.uwaterloo.ca wrote:
>
> A Cassam wrote:
>
> > Kya koi bataa sakhta hai hamein ye kis shaa'ir ka sher hai?????
> >
> > shaaheen khud apna shikaar dhund leta hai
> > phehnkay huway danon pe tau kabootar guzaara karte hein!
> >
>
> 'shaaheen' ka lafz dekhte hi, hamaare kisi ALUPer dost ne fauran keh
> diya ke yeh she'r Allama Iqbal ka hai.............
> haalaan-ke asliyat yeh hai ke is she'r ki takhleeq ka aaghaaz Safi
> Lakhnavi se huya, jo aek baa-viqaar shaa'ir hone ke saath saath aek
> yeh hai ke ise Ali Minai Sahib ki fehrist mein jagah milti hai ya ke
> naheen!
>
> khair-andesh, Raj Kumar
A Cassam
>
> >
> Alaama Iqbal ka ziq'r ho raha hai ti unhiN ka aik mizahyiaa q'taa pesh
> hai (shayad bahut logoN ko yeh maloom na ho ki unhoN neN kuchh halkey
> phoolkey shaai'ry bhi ki hai):
>
Aap ne apna naam nahin likha!!
Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya is ma'loomaat ke liye -yehi ke Allama Iqbal
ne kuchh halkey phoolkey shaai'ry bhi ki hai!
========================================================================
> membrii imperial council ki kuchh mushkil nahiN
> vote to mil jaaeNge, paise bhi dilvaaeNge kya
> meerzaa Ghalib Khuda bakhshe wazaah farmaa gaye
> ham neN manaa ke raheN dilli meN par khaeNge kya.
>
> Is qa'taa ka lut'f aap tabhi utha sakeNge, agar Mirza Ghalib ka yeh
> she'r aap neN pehle suna ho:
>
> is maa'moora* meN to hai, qeht-e-gham-e-ulfat** Asad,
> ham neN manaa ke rraheN dilli meN par khaeNge kya.
>
> *=kasba, town
> **=gham-e-ulfat ka akaal
>
> Shukriya aap ki explanation ka aur is she'r se related Mirza Ghalib ke sh'er ka bhi!
Abida Sultana