Koi Achooti baat
Sana Ali
aap sab ko Sana kaa aadaab :-)
Abidah ji baat yeh hai , ke aap se kuch milne ki talab ne, mujhe dair
tak computer ke aage bithaa diyaa, aur baqi kaamoN kaa haraj hone
lagaa :-((
so I figured , as wonderful and giving as u are, poetry ki book to
mujhe aap bhaij hi daiN gi :-) let me take care of my other
responsibilities :-) and then arse baad jab Raj Sahab ki Ghazal daikhi
to bass, kuchh naa poochiye, vese aap yaqeen nahiN karaiN gi, magar
mujhe yeh ghazal kehne maiN sirf chand minute lage :-) ahem ahem , I
am not trying to brag about it, please note, the friends who know me
well, know that if I am in the mood, I can whip up a shair filbadih
and say a ghazal within a day :-) [Allah nazr e bad se bachaae
mujhe ] :-)
magar mood naa ho to yaqeen kijiye, aik misraa apne doosre misre ke
liye saaloN intizaar kartaa hai .....
Shair aur mood, I guess they go together :-) ...
any way, so qissaa mukhtasir yeh, ke ab bohat saare Vafaadaar e Alup
vaapas aa gae haiN :-) Mashaa allah :-) ab kuchh nayaa maze kaa
silsilaa honaa chahiye
kuch anokhi baat
koi naee cheez
what do u say Alupers ???
Please speak up :-)
Awaiting for your Ideas , or else I would come up with my own :-)
Khair andaish
Sana
abidasultana1
neki aur poochh poochh? kuchh anokhi baat, koi naee cheez zaroor
tajweez keejyie. what's the delay ?
apa apni masroofiat ki wajah se post naheeN kar paayeiN, koi baat
naheeN. kiyooN ke post karne ki nee'at to thi aap ki, is liye aap inaam
ki haqdaar ho gayeiN . aap aur Manjit Sahib ji chhoTa na keejyiye. aap
ka inaam jald hi aap ko rawaaan kiya jaaye ga.
I am sure you can compose ghazals in no time. You are talented. (teri
pyaari pyaari ghazaloN ko kisi ki nazar na lage,, chasm-e-bad door!).
Dua hai ke aap ka mood hamesha aisa hi rahe taake aap ki ghazaloN ka
lut'f ham hameshaa uThaate raheiN :-) waise kharaab mood ko tabdeel
karne ka nuskhaa hi to hai ghazal likhna :-))
LOL!!!
Cheers!
Abida Sultana
Raj Kumar
> Abidah ji baat yeh hai, ke aap se kuch milne ki talab ne mujhe dair
> tak computer ke aage bithaa diyaa, aur baqi kaamoN kaa haraj hone
> lagaa :-((
goya, baaqi ke kaam kisi aur ko karne paRe. tab to, yaqeenan, behtar
hi huye hoN ge! :-))
> --------------- and then arse baad jab Raj Sahab ki Ghazal daikhi
> to bass, kuchh naa poochiye, vese aap yaqeen nahiN karaiN gi, magar
> mujhe yeh ghazal kehne maiN sirf chand minute lage :-)
voh to aap ke she'roN se hi zaahir tha. saaf lagta tha ke yeh she'r
kisi ne bhaagam-bhaag meiN kahe haiN! LOL
> magar mood naa ho to yaqeen kijiye, aik misraa apne doosre misre ke
> liye saaloN intizaar kartaa hai .....
ain usi tarah jaise aek aashiq apni mehbooba ke liye karta hai! :-((
vaastav meiN, yeh baat to aap ne nihaayat pate ki kahi hai, Sanaa ji!
maan gaye aap ko! :-))
> kuch anokhi baat
>
> koi naee cheez
>
>
> what do u say Alupers ???
>
> Please speak up :-)
>
> Awaiting for your Ideas , or else I would come up with my own :-)
vaise, ham kuchh kehne hi vaale the ke aap ke Khat ka unvaan dekh kar
ruk gaye. socha ke bhalaa ham koi "achhooti" baat kaise keh sakte
haiN; ham koi "achhoot" thoRe haiN? ROTFL
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
Sana Ali
aadaab
cha cha cha
baRe afsos ki baat hai ke aap jaisaa urdu daaN , itnaa laiq o faaiq ,
Zaheen e kamil insaan aur aik lafz ko bajaae " lughvi " maanoN main
lene ke ....
ghalat e aam ke maanoN ke chashme se daikhne lage :-(
achooti meaning ke jise pehle kisi ne choooa naa ho , jise ab tak koi
soch ke haat bhi na lagaa sakaa ho aur aap chale haiN ta'assub vali
baat karne :-(
aap se yeh ummeed na thi hamaiN :-((
vese aap to achhooot ho bhi nahin sakte, aap to na sirf chooe jaa
chuke haiN balke , chhoo bhi chuke haiN :-P
magar iss ka yeh matlab hargiz nahiN ke aap achhooti baat nahiN keh
sakte :-)
vese bhi hamaiN achhi baat jahaaN se mil jaati hai, ham use apnaa lete
haiN , yeh nahiN daikhte ke kiss ki baat hai , chahe voh Raja bhoj ho
yaar gangoo teli , bhai ham to sab insaanoN ki baraabari pe yaqeen
rakhte haiN :-P
aap ki tarhaa kisi ko raqeeb , kisi ko aashiq aur kisi ko mehbooob
nahiN qaraar dete, vese aap ki mehbooba to maze maiN hogi, uss ke liye
to aap zameen aasmaan aik kar dete hoN ge .... :-)
baqi rahi baat aap ki, hamare iss idea ke javaab maiN kuchh paish
karne ki, voh to ab aap ko karnaa hi paRai gaa :-)
since u are the only one speaking now ,, we all want to listen
any way I have an Idea
how about u qiving us one of the rather not so easy ghazals of Ghalib
and then giving us " tashreeh " :-)
bohat din ho gae, Ustaad ji se kuchh seekhe hoooe :-)
kuch mehfil garam honi chahiye ab :-)
aap sab alupers kaa kiyaa khayaal hai iss bare maiN ???
please do reply
Sana
Raj Kumar
>
> baRe afsos ki baat hai ke aap jaisaa urdu daaN , itnaa laiq o faaiq ,
> Zaheen e kamil insaan aur aik lafz ko bajaae " lughvi " maanoN main
> lene ke ....
>
> ghalat e aam ke maanoN ke chashme se daikhne lage :-(
>
> achooti meaning ke jise pehle kisi ne choooa naa ho , jise ab tak koi
> soch ke haat bhi na lagaa sakaa ho aur aap chale haiN ta'assub vali
> baat karne :-(
>
>
> aap se yeh ummeed na thi hamaiN :-((
yaqeen jaaniye, Sanaa ji, hameN aap ke is chahete lafz ke sabhi
ma'anoN ka ilm hai. voh to ham aap ko yooN-hi 'taNg' kar rahe the
kiyooN-ke,
ba-qaul-e-Ustaad DaaGh,
ham aap chheR chheR ke khaate haiN gaaliyaaN
kaanoN ko paR gayaa hai mazaa, koi kuchh kahe! :-))
> vese aap to achhooot ho bhi nahin sakte, aap to na sirf chhooe jaa
> chuke haiN balke chhoo bhi chuke haiN :-)
Really? kis se? aur kis ko? LOL
> aap ki tarhaa kisi ko raqeeb , kisi ko aashiq aur kisi ko mehbooob
> nahiN qaraar dete, vese aap ki mehbooba to maze maiN hogi, uss ke liye
> to aap zameen aasmaan aik kar dete hoN ge .... :-)
magar aek baat hai, Sanaa ji, --- voh yeh ke hamaari mehbooba koi
'asli' shai naheeN hai, maihz 'farzi' hai. kiyooN-ke, agar voh 'asli'
hoti to us ki yooN ta'areef karna "jhooT bolne" ke mutraadif hota!
:-))
> since u are the only one speaking now ,, we all want to listen.
is ke bar-aks, haqeeqat yeh hai ke
hamaari kaun sunta hai? vagarna ham 'dam-e-ruKhsat'
idhar kuchh dil ko samjhaate, udhar dilbar ko samjhaate! :-(
kahiye, kaisa lagaa yeh she'r?
> any way I have an Idea
>
> how about u qiving us one of the rather not so easy ghazals of Ghalib
> and then giving us " tashreeh " :-)
bhai, yeh kaam to baRaa mushkil hai; phir bhi, koshish kareN ge!
> bohat din ho gae, Ustaad ji se kuchh seekhe hooe :-)
vaise, aap jaisi chaaq-o-chust shaagirda ko koi nayee cheez sikhaana
itna aasaan bhi naheeN hai. :-))
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar