aah Qasimi!
kaun kehtaa hai k maut aa'yee to mar jaa'ooN gaa
maiN to dariyaa hooN, samandar meN utar jaa'ooN gaa!
Qasimi saahib kee shaKhseeyat ke ka'yee ruKh the, afsaana-nigaar,
shaa'ir, sahaafee aur mudeer. kuchh log un ke kisee aik ruKh ko doosre
par tarjheeh dete haiN. meree naaqis raa'ye meN un kee
afsaana-nigaaree ziyaada aham hai ... taaham aise as'haab kee kamee
naheeN jo un kee shaa'iree ziyaada pasand karte haiN. maiN Qasimi
saahib ke chand ash'aar paish kar rahaa hooN jo mere pasandeeda haiN
aur is waqt yaad aa rahe haiN:
andaaz hoo ba hoo teree aavaaz e paa kaa thaa
dekhaa nikal ke ghar se to jhonkaa havaa kaa thaa
--
ham to is ko bhee mashee'at kee saKhaavat hee kaheN
zindagee bhar saans lene ko havaa miltee rahee
aik pal bhee zinda rehnaa ik qiyaamat thaa hameN
aur tool e umr kee ham ko du'aa miltee rahee (tool e umr, how
prophetic!)
--
maiN to samajhaa thaa k lauT aate haiN jaane vaale
too ne to jaa ke judaa'yee meree qismat kar dee
poochh baiThaa hooN maiN tujh se tere kooche kaa pataa
rang e haalaat ne kaisee teree soorat kar dee
[vaise is mazmoon ko Munir Niazi ne kuchh yooN bartaa hai:
vaqt ke saath 'ajeeb saa ban jaataa hai aadamee
haalaat dekh ke ranj huvaa aaj us paree-jamaal kee]
aadaab arz hai,
Zafar
nihaayat umdaah sher hai!
aur is vaqt ke liye nihaayat munaasib bhi.
urdu adab ke samandar meN Qasimi Saahab ne Khoob izaafah kiya.
Vasmi
> >
> > aah Qasimi!
> >
> > kaun kehtaa hai k maut aa'yee to mar jaa'ooN gaa
> > maiN to dariyaa hooN, samandar meN utar jaa'ooN gaa!
> >
>
> nihaayat umdaah sher hai!
> aur is vaqt ke liye nihaayat munaasib bhi.
>
> urdu adab ke samandar meN Qasimi Saahab ne Khoob izaafah kiya.
>
> Vasmi
>
Vasmi Sahib, liijiye puurii ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai:
Courtesy: Amjad Nabeel Sahib
kaun kehta hai ke maut aayee to mar jaauN ga
maiN to daryaa hooN samandar meiN utar jaauN ga
tera dar choR ke maiN aur kidhar jaauN ga
ghar meiN ghir jaauN ga seHra meiN bikhar jaauN ga
tere pehlu se jo uThooN ga to mushkil ye hai
sirf ik shakhs ko paauN ga jidhar jaauN ga
ab tire shehr meiN aauN ga musaafir ki taraH
saaya-e-abr ki maanind guzar jaauN ga
tera paimaan-e-vafaa raah ki deevaar banaa
varna socha tha ke jab chaahooN ga mar jaauN ga
chaara saazoN se alag hai mira me'yaar ke maiN
zakhm khaauN ga to kuch aur sanvar jaauN ga
ab to khursheed ko Doobe hue sadiyaaN guzriiN
ab use DhooNdne maiN taa.ba saHar jaauN ga
zindagi sham'a ki maanind jalaataa hooN Nadeem
bujh to jaauN ga magar subH to kar jaauN ga
Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi
Zoya Sahiba,
bahut KhuubSuurat Ghazal hai. shukariyya.
Naseer
shukryah Naseer Sahib! :)
ek aur ghazal dekhiiye, yaqiin hai aap ko yeh bhii pasaNd aayegii:
Courtesy: Amjad Nabeel Sahib
marooN to maiN kisi chehre meiN rang bhar jaauN
Nadeem kaash yehi aik kaam kar jaauN
ye dasht-e-tark-e-muhabbat ye tere qurb kii pyaas
jo izn ho to tiri yaad se guzar jaauN
miraa vujood miri rooH ko pukaarta hai
tiri taraf bhi chalooN to Theher Theher jaauN
tire jamaal ka partau hai sab HaseenoN per
kahaaN kahaaN tujhe DhooNdooN kidhar kidhar jaauN
maiN zindaa tha ke tira intizaar khatm na ho
jo too milaa hai to ab sochtaa hooN mar jaauN
ye sochataa hooN ki maiN but parast kyuN na hua
tujhe qareeb jo paauN to khud se Dar jaauN
kisi chaman meiN bas is khauf se guzar na hua
kisi kalee pe na bhoole se paauN dhar jaauN
Ye jee meiN aati hai takhleeq-e-fun ke lamHoN meiN
Ke khoon ban ke rag-e-sang meiN utar jaauN
Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi
Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi saHib ki vafaat ne bila.shuba dunyaa-e-adab meiN voh
khalaa paida ho gayaa hai jis ko pur hone mein muddateN guzar jaaiN gi.
voh aik azeem shaa'ir, adeeb, afsaana navees, kaalam nigaar, mufakkir,
mudabbir hone ke saath saath aik insaan dost shakhsiyat ke maalik bhi
the :
khud apne baare mein farmaate haiN :
ye faqat mera takhallus hi nahiN hai ke Nadeem
mere kirdaar ka kirdaar hai aur naam ka naam
filvaqt Qasmi saHib ki aik aur nazm "Hukm" se iqtibas pesh kar rahaa
hooN :
*********************
maiN ke aik shaa'ir hooN
nak'hatoN ka rakhvaala
narmiyoN ka matwaala
meri ye tamanna hai
meri maut yooN aaye
pichlee raat ko jaise
aik taara TooTa ho
aik teer chooTa ho
(december 1967)
**************************
umeed hai yahaaN A.N.Qasmi saHib ka mazeed kalaam paRhne ka mauqa mile
ga.
shukria
Amjad
aadaab Amjad Sahib,
is thread meiN shirkat kaa shukriyah!
maiN jaantii huuN k aap Qasmi Sahib ko jaante the aur un se mil bhii
chuke haiN. agar ho sake to un se mulaaqaat ke dauraan huii kuChh
baateN Alup par bhii share kiijiiyega.
shukriyah!
__________Zoya
I have posted an entry at my blog about Qasmi saahab. It can be viewed
at http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/a-tribute-to-ahmed-nadeem-qasmi/.
The reason I am posting the link and not the entire post is that there
are Ghazal renditions by Nayyara Noor, Ghulam Ali and Jagjit Singh in
the original post that can't be transported here.
Thanks a lot,
Mohib
This one even better:
zindagi sham'a ki maanind jalaataa hooN Nadeem
bujh to jaauN ga magar subH to kar jaauN ga
Kali Hawa
zoya saHiba
aadaab arz hai
Qasmi saHib ko maiN do teen HavaaloN se jaanta tha, lekin tafseeli
mulaaqaat 2004 meiN un ke daftar (Lahore) meiN hui. us vaqt unki mooN
boli beTi Mansoora Ahmed saHiba bhi maujood theeN.
aik to vaise un se milne ka ishtiaaq tha, doosra ham ne aik NGO banaai
thi jis ke meHz ta'aaruf ke liye unke paas jaana hua.
uski vajah ye thi ke mera aabaai ilaaqa aur Qasmi saHib ka aabaai
ilaaqa aik hi khitte meiN hai, jise SAKEISAR kehte haiN. is ilaaqay ko
vaadi-e-soon bhi kehte haiN.
Qasmi saHib ki SAKEISAR ke baare meiN aik nazm bhi hai, jis meiN
sakeisar aur vaadi-e-soon ka zikr hai.
to hamaari NGO ka head office isi vaadi-e-soon sakeisar ke ilaaqay meiN
ban'na tha, to ham ne socha ke qasmi saHib se mulaaqaat bhi ho jaaye gi
aur is NGO ka ta'aaruf bhi ho jaaye ga.
us vaqt Qasmi saHib ne meri farmaaish per mujhe ye she'r bhi likh ker
dia tha jo aaj bhi mere paas maujood hai :
ae saHar aaj hameN raakh samajh ker na uRaa
ham ne jal jal ke tire raaste chamkaaye haiN
taqreeban aik ghanTe ki is mulaaqaat meiN ham ne qasmi saHib ke saath
kuch tasveereN bhi kheinchi aur unki kuch kitaaboN per unke dastakhat
bhi liye, jo aaj mere liye qeemati acaaca haiN
fil.vaqt Qasmi saHib ki aik ghazal suniye aur mujhe ijaazat deejiye :),
ghazal ka matla unki shakhsiyat ki behtareen akkaasi karta hai :
maiN voh shaa'ir hooN jo shaahoN ka canaa khwaaN na hua
ye hai voh jurm, jo mujh se kisi unvaaN na hua
is gunah per miri ik umr andheray meiN kaTee
mujh se is maut ke maile meiN chiraaghaaN na hua
kal jahaaN phool khile jashn hai zakhmoN ka vahaaN
dil vo gulshan hai ujaR ker bhi jo veeraaN na hua
aankheN kuch aur dikhaati haiN, magar zehn kuch aur
baagh mehke magar aHsaas-e-bahaaraaN na hua
yooN to her daur meiN girte rahe insaan ke nirkh
in ghulaamoN mein koi Yousuf-e-kin'aaN na hua
maiN khud aasudah hooN, kam kosh hooN, ya patthar hooN
zakhm khaa ker bhi mujhe dard ka irfaaN na hua
saari dunyaa mutalaatim nazar aati hai Nadeem
mujh per ik tanz hua rauzan-e-zindaaN na hua
(March 1966)
shukria
Amjad
> zoya saHiba
>
> Qasmi saHib ko maiN do teen HavaaloN se jaanta tha, lekin tafseeli
> mulaaqaat 2004 meiN un ke daftar (Lahore) meiN hui. us vaqt unki mooN
> boli beTi Mansoora Ahmed saHiba bhi maujood theeN.
>
> uski vajah ye thi ke mera aabaai ilaaqa aur Qasmi saHib ka aabaai
> ilaaqa aik hi khitte meiN hai, jise SAKEISAR kehte haiN. is ilaaqay ko
> vaadi-e-soon bhi kehte haiN.
> Qasmi saHib ki SAKEISAR ke baare meiN aik nazm bhi hai, jis meiN
> sakeisar aur vaadi-e-soon ka zikr hai.
>
> Amjad
Aadaab Amjad Sahib!
Qasmi Sahib ke baare meiN aur tafsiil se jaan kaarii dene ke liye aap
ka bahut shukriyah!
aur is thread meiN un kaa kalaam post karne kaa bhii shukriyah!
aap Alup par aate jaate rahaa kareN, aap ke aane se yahaaN raunaq baRh
jaatii hai. :)
___________Zoya
lijiyay inki shairi share kartay chaltay hain.
lab e khamosh se afsha ho ga
raz har rang main ruswa ho ga
tum nahin thay to sar e bam khial
yad ka koi sitaara ho ga
kis tawaqo pe kissi ko dekhain
koi tum se bi haseen kiya ho ga
zenat e halqa aaghosh bano
door betho gay to charcha ho ga
zulmat shab main be sharmatay ho
drd chamkay ga to phir kiya ho ga
jis bi fankar ka shehkar ho tum
us ne sadion tumhain socha ho ga.
shukria
-----------------
Iftikhar
Iftikhar Saheb,
Hum log ALUPers ke kalaam par to apni raaye ka izhaar kar sakte
haiN, aur karte bhee haiN. Lekin deegar sh'uraa ke liye kisee
qism ki tanqeed ya izhaar-e-raaye zara mushkil hai aur
"embarrassing" bhee. Aap ne jo ghazal 'inaayat farmaayi hai, us
ka yeh sher thoRa khaTakta hai. Agar deegar ALUPers naa~munaasib
na samjheN to woh bhee is par apne KHayaalaat pesh kareN :
Zeenat-e-halqa-e-aaGHosh bano
Door baiThoge to charcha hoga
Is ke 'ilaawa ek baat aur. Aap ne tehreer farmaaya hai ke
(marhoom) Qasimi Saheb "mulk ke liye sarmaaya-e-hasti the".
Koi shaKHs apne "field" men kitna hi maahir-e-fan kyoN na ho,
kya apne mulk ka "sarmaaya-e-hasti" ho sakta hai ? YahaaN
maiN ne lafz "hasti" ka link "mulk" se joRa hai. HaaN,
"baa'is-e-naaz" vg. jaise alfaaz ist'emaal kiye ja sakte haiN.
M'aazrat ke saath,
Afzal
> Iftikhar Saheb,
>
> Hum log ALUPers ke kalaam par to apni raaye ka izhaar kar sakte
> haiN, aur karte bhee haiN. Lekin deegar sh'uraa ke liye kisee
> qism ki tanqeed ya izhaar-e-raaye zara mushkil hai aur
> "embarrassing" bhee. Aap ne jo ghazal 'inaayat farmaayi hai, us
> ka yeh sher thoRa khaTakta hai. Agar deegar ALUPers naa~munaasib
> na samjheN to woh bhee is par apne KHayaalaat pesh kareN :
>
> Zeenat-e-halqa-e-aaGHosh bano
> Door baiThoge to charcha hoga
Janaab-i-Afzal Sahib,
ek talKH tajrube ke ba'd mujhe muNh kholne par nihaayat diqqat maHsuus
ho rahii hai. baa vujood is ke kih maiN in do shi'roN ke muta'alliq
raae rakhtaa huuN, jab tak aap koii vaazi' ishaarah nahiiN kareN ge,
maiN apnii nanhii sii jaan jokhoN me nahiiN Daalnaa chaahtaa!
ba-sad iHtiraam,
Naseer