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Vasl ka din kitna muKHtsar?

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Anil Kala

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Feb 2, 2012, 10:28:26 AM2/2/12
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vasl ka din aur itnaa muKhtsar
din gine jaate the is din ke liye

- Amir Minai

http://heartcrossings.blogspot.in/2011/10/interview-with-devajyoti-roy.html

BGM

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Feb 2, 2012, 10:52:52 AM2/2/12
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On Feb 2, 10:28 am, Anil Kala <kalih...@gmail.com> wrote:
> vasl ka din aur itnaa muKhtsar
> din gine jaate the jis din ke liye

- Amir Minai
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shab-e-vasl kyaa muKhtasar ho gayii
kih aate hi aate saHar ho gayii

[Ameer Minai]

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v

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Feb 2, 2012, 8:55:49 PM2/2/12
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isn't it 'din gine jaate the isee din ke liye'

Vijay

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Feb 2, 2012, 10:32:07 PM2/2/12
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On Feb 3, 1:55 am, v <kumar.vr...@gmail.com> wrote:
> isn't it 'din gine jaate the isee din ke liye'

No Ravi sahib: 'isee' won't be in meter. 'is' is correct. There is an
implied question mark at the end of second misra, questioning the 'is'
bit, I think.

Best regards,

Vijay

Anil Kala

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Feb 3, 2012, 5:40:01 AM2/3/12
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vasl ki shab thi to kis darja subuk guzri thi,
Hijr ki shab hai to kya sakht giraa’n Thahri hai.

Faiz Ahmad Faiz

Vijay

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Feb 3, 2012, 6:26:53 AM2/3/12
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lazzteN qarb-o-judaaii kii haiN apni apni
mustaqil hij'r hii acchha na visaal accha hai

Ahmed Faraaz
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