An Urdu translation of Nietzsche!

[Umar]

Asalam O alaekum,

I'm currently in the process of translating Nietzsche's "Thus Spoke
Zarathustra" into Urdu, and I've put one chapter on the web (in pdf
form). Its available here:
http://azadkhayal.tripod.com/zarathustra.pdf (Note: You won't be able
to go to it by clicking on the link. Either copy paste or type the
link into your browser). Its a translation of "On the teachers of
Virtue". Please give me any constructive comments, regarding
specifically the style, understandability and "normality" of the Urdu
translation. If you wish to see the English, you can visit here:
http://www.publicappeal.org/library/nietzsche/Nietzsche_thus_spake_zarathustra/I_02.html

I'll be looking forward to your comments.

Thanks,
Umar

[Syed Mohammad Mehdi Naqvi]

janab e umar sahib... me aap se contact karna pasand karunga... me khud is waqt Nietzche pe kam kar raha hun... barah e karam apna email irsaal farma dije...

[amjadm...@gmail.com]

Waiting for the final version :)

[salma...@gmail.com]

Its a very good effort. Complete the work. Keep in touch.

Regards

Salman Dasti

[aj22...@gmail.com]

Janab Umar Sahab Can you help me in knowing the name of shayar of these lines "Ahista berg-e- gul ba afshan bar mazar ma, pas nazuk ast sheesh-e-dil dar kinar ma" Ishall be highly obliged.

[aj22...@gmail.com]

Huzoor Naqvu Sahab,Kya aap shayar ka naam trace out karne me meri madad kar sakte hai jisne ye lines kahi hai " Ahista berg-e-gul ba afshan ber mazar maa, Pas nazuk ast sheesh-e-dil dar kinar ma " Main ahsanmand rahunga.

[aj22...@gmail.com]

Mere father ki copy mein yah nazm maine padhi thi." Ahista beg-e-gul ba afshn bar mazar ma , Pas nazuk ast sheesh-e dil dar kinar ma "
Kya aap shayar ka naam janne mein meri madad kar sakte hai ?

I shall remain obliged ,
Regards,

[manzoo...@gmail.com]

give me pls this work

[anis.m...@gmail.com]

Great work Umer . keep continue and be in touch .