Bekas sahib,
I want to let you know that I have read your composition more than once, and I've been thinking about it. It is like an abstract painting! :)
I have three observations/questions:
1. I'm not sure if it is actually meaningful content, or you just put this together to get student reader's attention focused on the craft of constructing Urdu poetry meters. Yes?
2. Is one of the points being made is to analyze which 2 s may be split as 1-1? And will doing so change the beHr of any of the misraas, and is it legit? Kind of like Sarwar sahib's recent sawaal in another thread. Yes/No?
3. Can 'qii' and' kii' be ham_qafiia? Yes/No/Maybe??
*Will you please let me know if I am reading too much into your post, perhaps based on my recent 'Arooz' exercise experience? If Yes, then tell me to quit overthinking! If No, then please define the question(s), I readily admit that I am no good at spotting/solving riddles.
*If my stydy buddy Nagesh sahib is reading this, I want him to pitch in, please.
*If one of my ustaads has any input/hints/suggestions, please Sirs?
Someone please talk about all this before it starts haunting me and I start saying "naagaasaakii naagaasaakii" in my sleep! :-)
Thank you Bekas sahib, Maybe. :)
_____Zoya