BAAZYAAFT: Qaa'im Chandpuri
Zafar
BAAZYAAFT sisile ke pehle shaa'ir the Qaa'im Chandpuri.
haalaat o vaaqiyaat
Qaa'im 1725? meN Chandpur, Bijnor, meN paidaa huve (in kaa Khaandaan
aaj bhee vahaaN maujood hai). ba'ad meN Delhi chale aa'ye aur pehle
Mir Dard, phir Mirza Sauda kee shaagirdee iKhtiyaar kee.
naam kaa iKhtilaaf
Qaa'im ke asl naam ke baare meN kaafee iKhtilaaf paayaa jaataa hai.
aksar log in kaa naam Muhammad Qaa'im bataate haiN. apne daur ke
mash'hoor shaa'ir aur muhaqqiq janaab Raz Chandpuri ne Zamana, Kanpur,
meN July 1929 meN aik mazmoon "Hazrat Qaa'im Chanpuri" likhaa thaa.
Raz saahib ne ba'az tazkiroN aur Qaa'im ke Khaandaan ke logoN ke
havaale se raa'ye zaahir kee hai k asl naam Muhammad Qaa'im thaa.
lekin mas'ala ye hai k Qaa'im ne apnee kitaab "maKhzan e nikaat" meN
Khud apnaa naam Qiyaam ud Din likhaa hai. is li'ye meree naaqis raa'ye
meN isee ko saheeh maannaa paRtaa hai.
Sauda kee kulliyaat meN Qaa'im kaa kalaam
janaab e Jasho ne mere paish karda she'er "aashiq kaa dil banaa" par
Irfan Abid saahib ke havaale se likhaa hai k ye she'er Sauda kaa hai.
dar'asl Qaa'im chooN k Sauda ke shaagird the is li'ye ho saktaa hai k
in kaa kuchh kalaam baGharz e islaah, yaa kisee aur vajh se, Sauda ke
paas paRaa reh gayaa ho jise ba'ad meN logoN ne Sauda kaa
tasneef-karda samajh liyaa. misaal ke taur par Sauda kee kulliyaat meN
mausam e sarmaa kee hijv meN aik masnavee hai:
sardee ab ke baras hai itnee shadeed
sub'h nikle hai kaanptaa Khursheed!
lekin Qaa'im ke 2 ham-'asroroN, Mir Hassan aur Lutf ne apne apne
tazkiroN meN is masnavee ko Qaa'im kee taKhleeq bataayaa hai.
she'er e mazkoor ko Qaa'im ke aik aur ham'asr Lachhmee Naraayan
'Shafeeq' ne apne tazkire "chamanistaan e shu'araa" meN Qaa'im se
mansoob kiyaa hai. ye she'er kulliyaat e Qaa'im meN fard (akele
she'er) kee haisee'at se shaamil hai.
Qaa'im kaa intiqaal 1794 meN Rampur meN huvaa.
maKhzan e nikaat
is tazkire kaa shumaar Urdu shu'araa ke qadeem tareen tazkiroN meN
hotaa hai.
Qaa'im kaa shaa'irana maqaam
Qaa'im Urdu shaa'iree ke sunhre daur ke shaa'ir haiN. ba'ad meN jo
huvaa so huvaa lekin us zamaane meN kisee ko in ke martabe ke baare
meN shak naheeN thaa:
- Gadezi ne apne tazkire "raiKhta goyaaN" meN Mir kaa sirf aik she'er
misaal ke taur par naql kiyaa hai jab ke Qaa'im ke ash'aar ka'yee
safhaat par muheet haiN!
- Mus'hafee (tazkira e Hindi): "ba'az auqaat apne ustaad [Sauda] se
aage baRh jaate haiN." [tarjuma az Farsi]
- Mairza Ali Lutf (tabaqaat ush shua'araa): "sach to ye hai k ba'ad
Sauda aur Mir ke kisee raKhta-go kee nazm kaa naheeN ye usloob hai."
- Maulvi Kareem ud Din (tabaqaat ush shu'araa e Hind): "ba'az ba'az
aadmee jo us ko Sauda se behtar kehte haiN, haq ye hai k sachche
haiN."
- Muhammad Hussain Azad (aab e hayaat): "in kaa deevaan har giz Mir
[Taqi Mir] o Mirza [Sauda] ke deevaan se neeche naheeN rakh sakte,
magar kyaa keeji'ye k qubool e 'aam kuchh aur shai hai, shuhrat na
paa'yee."
aaKhir meN Qaa'im kee chand GhazleN:
dil paa ke us kee zulf meN aaraam reh gayaa
darvesh jis jagah k huvee shaam, reh gayaa
naapuKhtagee kee apnee sabab us samar* se poochh [phal]
jaldee se baaGhbaaN kee jo vo Khaam reh gayaa
saiyyaad too to jaa* hai par us kee bhee kuchh Khabar [jaataa]
jo murGh e naatavaaN k tah e daam reh gayaa
qismat to dekh TooTee hai jaa kar kahaaN kamand
kuchh door apne haath se jab baam reh gayaa
[ye she'er zarb ul misl kee tarah mash'hoor hai, agar che akasr log is
kee qir'at muKhtalif tareeqoN se karte haiN, taaham asl soorat vuhee
hai jo likhee ga'yee]
ne tujh pe vo bahaar rahee aur na yaaN vo dil
kehne ko naik o bad ke ik ilzaam reh gayaa
Qaa'im ga'ye sab us kee zabaaN se jo the rafeeq
ik bai-hayaa maiN khaane ko dushnaam* reh gayaa {gaaliyaaN]
***
shab jo dil bai-qaraar thaa, kyaa thaa
kisee kaa intizaar thaa, kyaa thaa
chashm dar par thee sub'h tak shaayad
kuchh kisee se qaraar* thaa, kyaa thaa [va'ada]
na diyaa dil jo phir too [ne] le ke, maiN kuchh [Jasho jee, aap kaa
qiyaas 100% dursut thaa]
aisaa bai-'aitibaar thaa, kyaa thaa
dekh mujh ko jo bazm se too uThaa
kuchh tujhe mujh se 'aar thaa, kyaa thaa
raat Qaa'im too is mizaaj pe vaaN
saKht bai-iKhtiyaar thaa, kyaa thaa
[Irfan Abid saahib, dekhaa Mus'hafee ne zameeN kahaaN se uThaa'yee
thee!]
***
na dil bharaa hai na ab nam rahaa hai aankhoN meN
kabhoo* jo ro'ye the, KhooN jam rahaa hai aankhoN meN [kabhee]
maiN mar chukaa hooN pe tere hee dekhne ke li'ye
habaab-vaar* tanak** dam rahaa hai aankhoN meN [*bubule kee tarah;
**zaraa]
mavaafiqat* kee bahut shehrioN se maiN, lekin [aashnaa'yee]
vuhee Ghazaal abhee ram* rahaa hai aankhoN meN [bas jaanaa, samaanaa.
kyaa Ghazab kaa she'er kahaa hai. Mir bhee is she'er par naaz karte!]
vo mehv hooN k misaal e habaab e aa'eena
jigar se ashk nikal tham rahaa hai aankhoN meN
basaan* e ashk hai Qaa'im too jab se aavaara [kee tarah]
viqaar tab se tiraa kam rahaa hai aankhoN meN
Ghalib ke she'er "bai-aitidaalioN se subuk..." kee yaad aatee hai
lekin Qaa'im kaa she'er bahut baRhaa huvaa hai.
***
dil miraa dekh dekh jaltaa hai
shama' kaa kis pe dil pighaltaa hai
ham-nasheeN, zikr e yaar kar k kuchh aaj
is hikaayat se jee behiltaa hai
dil mazha tak pahunch chukaa jooN ashk
ab sanbhaale se kab sanbhaltaa hai
gandamee rang jo hai duniyaa meN
meree chhaatee pe maung daltaa hai :)
apne 'aashiq kee sauKht* par pyaare [jalnaa]
kabhee kuchh dil tiraa bhee jaltaa hai?
aaj Qaa'im ke she'er ham ne sune
haaN ik andaaz to nikaltaa hai!
[jee haaN, andaaz to nikaltaa hai aur bahut Khoob nikaltaa hai!]
aaKhir meN Qaa'im hee ke aik she'er par mazmoon Khatm kartaa hooN:
mauqoof kuchh kamaal pe yaaN kaam e dil naheeN
mujh ko hee dekh le naa k naakaam reh gayaa
aadaab arz hai,
Zafar
Yashowanto N. Ghosh
is nihaayat dil-chasp qist kaa shukriya!---
za...@eurdubazaar.com (Zafar) wrote in message news:<5f2899cd.0401...@posting.google.com>...
> doostaan:
>
> BAAZYAAFT sisile ke pehle shaa'ir the Qaa'im Chandpuri.
>
<snip>
>
> dil paa ke us kee zulf meN aaraam reh gayaa
> darvesh jis jagah k huvee shaam, reh gayaa
!!! kyaa Khoob she'r hai!!
maiN ne is zameen meiN "Dard" kee Ghazal www.eUrdubazaar.com
se churaa kar post kee thee :) Qaa'im kee Ghazal bhee
behtareen hai!
>
> saiyyaad too to jaa* hai par us kee bhee kuchh Khabar [jaataa]
> jo murGh e naatavaaN k tah e daam reh gayaa
maiN ne yeh she'r kaheeN sun rakkhaa thaa (lekin shaa'ir
kaa naam ma'aloom na thaa).
>
> maiN mar chukaa hooN pe tere hee dekhne ke li'ye
> habaab-vaar* tanak** dam rahaa hai aankhoN meN [*bubule kee tarah;
> **zaraa]
is pe Meer kaa aik she'r yaad aayaa "...kariyo Tuk aik
va'adah e deedaar daikh kar!"
Qaa'im ke she'r meiN "hubaab-vaar" ke zaree'ye tasveer-kashee
Khoob hai, doosree taraf Meer ke she'r meiN inshaaiyah andaaz
Khoob hai.
>
> mavaafiqat* kee bahut shehrioN se maiN, lekin [aashnaa'yee]
> vuhee Ghazaal abhee ram* rahaa hai aankhoN meN [bas jaanaa, samaanaa.
> kyaa Ghazab kaa she'er kahaa hai. Mir bhee is she'er par naaz karte!]
>
WOOOOW!!!
>
> gandamee rang jo hai duniyaa meN
> meree chhaatee pe maung daltaa hai :)
>
LOLOL kyaa Khoob kahaa hai!!
>
> aaj Qaa'im ke she'er ham ne sune
> haaN ik andaaz to nikaltaa hai!
>
> [jee haaN, andaaz to nikaltaa hai aur bahut Khoob nikaltaa hai!]
>
Thanks to Zafar saaHab aaj Qaa'im ke she'r ham ne *bhee* sune
(aur andaaz vaaqa'ee bahut Khoob niklaa hai, mujhe to bahut pasand
aayaa)!
With best regards, aglee qist kaa muntazir
Jasho
Irfan 'Abid'
>
> BAAZYAAFT sisile ke pehle shaa'ir the Qaa'im Chandpuri.
>
Zafar Sb, aadaab arz hai!
is silsile kii pahlii qist ke donoN hisse nazar.navaaz hue. mazmuun
dilchasp hai, aur muharrir Khush.bayaaN. yaqeenan mazaa aayegaa. Qaaim
Chandpuri kaa naam to maiN ne sun rakkhaa thaa, lekin ye nahiiN
maaluum thaa ki mausuuf :itnii baRii cheez: haiN. ittilaa'a kaa
shukriya!
ain mumkin hai ki ye sher Qaaim sb kaa ho. is zameen meN Sauda kii ek
puurii Ghazal hai. ho saktaa hai ye Ghazal Sauda ne Qaaim ke sher se
mutaassir ho kar kahii ho, Qaaim ko is sher kaa credit bhii diyaa ho,
aur baad kii tasaaneef meN ye reference Ghaayab ho gayaa ho.
>
>
>
> ***
>
> shab jo dil bai-qaraar thaa, kyaa thaa
> kisee kaa intizaar thaa, kyaa thaa
>
> chashm dar par thee sub'h tak shaayad
> kuchh kisee se qaraar* thaa, kyaa thaa [va'ada]
>
> na diyaa dil jo phir too [ne] le ke, maiN kuchh [Jasho jee, aap kaa
> qiyaas 100% dursut thaa]
> aisaa bai-'aitibaar thaa, kyaa thaa
>
> dekh mujh ko jo bazm se too uThaa
> kuchh tujhe mujh se 'aar thaa, kyaa thaa
>
> raat Qaa'im too is mizaaj pe vaaN
> saKht bai-iKhtiyaar thaa, kyaa thaa
>
> [Irfan Abid saahib, dekhaa Mus'hafee ne zameeN kahaaN se uThaa'yee
> thee!]
>
> ***
ta.ajuub sad ta.ajjub! mere vahm-o-gumaan meN bhii na thaa ki ye
zameen Qaaim kii hogii. vaqaaii, taareeKh kaise kaise kaarnaamoN par
Khaak Daal detii hai! maiN aaj tak is shaahkaar kaa sahraa Mushafii ke
sar hii baaNdhataa aayaa huuN. lekin ab maaluum huaa ki mausuuf to
Qaaim kii zameen par khetii kar rahe the!
>
> aaKhir meN Qaa'im hee ke aik she'er par mazmoon Khatm kartaa hooN:
>
> mauqoof kuchh kamaal pe yaaN kaam e dil naheeN
> mujh ko hee dekh le naa k naakaam reh gayaa
>
> aadaab arz hai,
>
> Zafar
aap kii aglii post kaa intizaar rahegaa.
niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:
Sarwar Alam Raz
> za...@eurdubazaar.com (Zafar) wrote in message news:<5f2899cd.0401...@posting.google.com>...
> > doostaan:
> >
> > BAAZYAAFT sisile ke pehle shaa'ir the Qaa'im Chandpuri.
> >
>
> Zafar Sb, aadaab arz hai!
>
> is silsile kii pahlii qist ke donoN hisse nazar.navaaz hue. mazmuun
> dilchasp hai, aur muharrir Khush.bayaaN. yaqeenan mazaa aayegaa. Qaaim
> Chandpuri kaa naam to maiN ne sun rakkhaa thaa, lekin ye nahiiN
> maaluum thaa ki mausuuf :itnii baRii cheez: haiN. ittilaa'a kaa
> shukriya!
janaab.e.Irfan saaHeb: aadaab!
aap kaa kehnaa k aap ko yeh ilm naheeN thaa k Qaa'im Chandpuri :itnee
baRee cheez: haiN baa'is.e.Hairat bilkul bhee naheeN hu'aa. aisee
misaaleN to Urdu meiN sekRoN mil jaa'eN gee aur mujh ko yaqeen hai k
zer.e.nazar silsile meiN Zafar saaHeb bohat se azeem lekin gumnaam
ahl.e.fikr.o.nazar se ham ko muta'aairf karvaa'eN ge.
maiN ne Hazrat Qaa'im Chandpuri kaa naam bachpan se hee sun rakhaa
thaa. iss kee Khaas vajh yeh thee k waalid.e.marHoom Hazrat Abul-Fazil
Raz Chandpuri bhee usee Chandpur se ta'alluq rakhte thay jahaaN Hazrt
Qaa'im Chandpuri pedaa hu'e thay. maiN ne puraane risaaloN meiN un ke
naam ke saath aksar :ustaad.ul.asaatiza: laqab likhaa hu'aa dekhaa.
afsos k mausoof kaa kalaam bohat kam hee istifaade ko mil sakaa hai.
mumkin hai Zafar saaHeb kisee kitaab kee nishaan.dehee kar deN jo iss
kamee ko pooraa kar saktee hai.
Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:
Zafar
> > darvesh jis jagah k huvee shaam, reh gayaa
>
> !!! kyaa Khoob she'r hai!!
>
> maiN ne is zameen meiN "Dard" kee Ghazal www.eUrdubazaar.com
> se churaa kar post kee thee :) Qaa'im kee Ghazal bhee
> behtareen hai!
jee haaN, Qaa'im kuchh arsa Dard ke bhee shagird rahe the, lagtaa hai
ye Ghazal usee daur kaa faizaan hai.
> > saiyyaad too to jaa* hai par us kee bhee kuchh Khabar [jaataa]
> > jo murGh e naatavaaN k tah e daam reh gayaa
>
> maiN ne yeh she'r kaheeN sun rakkhaa thaa (lekin shaa'ir
> kaa naam ma'aloom na thaa).
> > aaj Qaa'im ke she'er ham ne sune
> > haaN ik andaaz to nikaltaa hai!
> >
> > [jee haaN, andaaz to nikaltaa hai aur bahut Khoob nikaltaa hai!]
> >
> Thanks to Zafar saaHab aaj Qaa'im ke she'r ham ne *bhee* sune
> (aur andaaz vaaqa'ee bahut Khoob niklaa hai, mujhe to bahut pasand
> aayaa)!
Jasho saahib: maiN pichhle chand maah ghar se baahar, apnee kitaaboN
aur adabee raabitoN se yaksar door rahaa. aik din maiN ne "footpath
bookstall" par kulliyaat e Qaa'im kaa aik nusKha paRaa dekh liyaa.
kutub-firosh ne Rs. 150 bataa'ye lekin maiN ne Rs. 80 par "muk-mukaa"
kar liyaa :)) is se pehle Mir ke gehre mutaa'iye ke dauraan meraa baar
baar vaasta Qaa'im se paRtaa rahaa thaa lekin kabhee bil-isti'aab
mutaa'iye kaa mauqa naheeN milaa thaa. baare pichhle do maah meN ye
mauqa haath aayaa. paRh kar aik qarz apne oopar mehsoos kiyaa k --
apnee bisaat ke mutaabiq -- is jauhar e raKhshaaN par se gard e
gumnaamee kee taheN haTaa'yee jaa'yeN (yehee silsila adabee jaraa'id
meN bhee shuru' karne kaa iraada hai).
aglee qist ke shaa'ir hoN ge .... are re re, ye to "secret" hai naa!
Zafar
Zafar
> > doostaan:
> >
> > BAAZYAAFT sisile ke pehle shaa'ir the Qaa'im Chandpuri.
> >
>
> Zafar Sb, aadaab arz hai!
>
> is silsile kii pahlii qist ke donoN hisse nazar.navaaz hue. mazmuun
> dilchasp hai, aur muharrir Khush.bayaaN. yaqeenan mazaa aayegaa. Qaaim
> Chandpuri kaa naam to maiN ne sun rakkhaa thaa, lekin ye nahiiN
> maaluum thaa ki mausuuf :itnii baRii cheez: haiN. ittilaa'a kaa
> shukriya!
>
> > tazkiroN meN is masnavee ko Qaa'im kee taKhleeq bataayaa hai.
> >
> > she'er e mazkoor ko Qaa'im ke aik aur ham'asr Lachhmee Naraayan
> > 'Shafeeq' ne apne tazkire "chamanistaan e shu'araa" meN Qaa'im se
> > mansoob kiyaa hai. ye she'er kulliyaat e Qaa'im meN fard (akele
> > she'er) kee haisee'at se shaamil hai.
>
> ain mumkin hai ki ye sher Qaaim sb kaa ho. is zameen meN Sauda kii ek
> puurii Ghazal hai. ho saktaa hai ye Ghazal Sauda ne Qaaim ke sher se
> mutaassir ho kar kahii ho, Qaaim ko is sher kaa credit bhii diyaa ho,
> aur baad kii tasaaneef meN ye reference Ghaayab ho gayaa ho.
jee haaN, ye 'ain mumkin hai. Dr. Iqtida Hussain, jinhoN ne Kulliyaat
e Qaa'im murattab kee hai, ne is mauzoo' (Qaa'im ke kalaam kee Saudaa
se nisbat) par kaafee kaam kiyaa hai. bazaahir unheN is she'er ke
Qaa'im kaa hone meN ko'yee shak naheeN hai.
> > shab jo dil bai-qaraar thaa, kyaa thaa
> > kisee kaa intizaar thaa, kyaa thaa
> >
> > chashm dar par thee sub'h tak shaayad
> > kuchh kisee se qaraar* thaa, kyaa thaa [va'ada]
> >
> > na diyaa dil jo phir too [ne] le ke, maiN kuchh [Jasho jee, aap kaa
> > qiyaas 100% dursut thaa]
> > aisaa bai-'aitibaar thaa, kyaa thaa
> >
> > dekh mujh ko jo bazm se too uThaa
> > kuchh tujhe mujh se 'aar thaa, kyaa thaa
> >
> > raat Qaa'im too is mizaaj pe vaaN
> > saKht bai-iKhtiyaar thaa, kyaa thaa
> >
> > [Irfan Abid saahib, dekhaa Mus'hafee ne zameeN kahaaN se uThaa'yee
> > thee!]
> >
> > ***
>
> ta.ajuub sad ta.ajjub! mere vahm-o-gumaan meN bhii na thaa ki ye
> zameen Qaaim kii hogii. vaqaaii, taareeKh kaise kaise kaarnaamoN par
> Khaak Daal detii hai! maiN aaj tak is shaahkaar kaa sahraa Mushafii ke
> sar hii baaNdhataa aayaa huuN. lekin ab maaluum huaa ki mausuuf to
> Qaaim kii zameen par khetii kar rahe the!
Mus'hafee aur Qaa'im Tanda ke navaab Amir Yar Khan ke haaN ka'yee saal
ikaTThe rahe the. Mus'hafee apne tazkire meN us daur kee suhbatoN ko
baRee hasrat se yaad karte haiN aur Qaa'im kaa zikr baRee 'aqeedat se
karte haiN. ho saktaa hai k mazkoora zameen (ba-taGhayyur e qaafiya)
meN donoN ne GhazleN usee daur meN kahee hoN. lekin chooN k Qaa'im umr
meN Mus'hafee se 21,22 saal baRe the, is li'ye bazaahir ye zameen
unhee kee mazroo'ya lagtee hai.
vallahu a'alam!
Zafar
Zafar
> thaa. iss kee Khaas vajh yeh thee k waalid.e.marHoom Hazrat Abul-Fazil
> Raz Chandpuri bhee usee Chandpur se ta'alluq rakhte thay jahaaN Hazrt
> Qaa'im Chandpuri pedaa hu'e thay. maiN ne puraane risaaloN meiN un ke
> naam ke saath aksar :ustaad.ul.asaatiza: laqab likhaa hu'aa dekhaa.
janaab Sarwar saahib:
maiN mazmoon kee teesree (aur aaKhiree) qist meN is baat par raushnee
Daalne kee maqdoor bhar kaushish karooN gaa k aisaa kyoN hai k aik
"ustaad ul asaatiza" se 'aam log to alag rahe, vo bhee kam kam hee
shanaasaa haiN jo maidaan e adab ke shahsavaar haiN {lekin ye Eid kee
chuTTioN ke ba'ad hee mumkin ho sake gaa.)
fan o adab kee duniyaa meN ajeeb mazaahir dekhne meN aate haiN.
angrezee meN John Donne kee misaal aik "classic" kaa darja rakhtee
hai. mausoof (1572-1621) taqreeban 300 saal gumnaamee ke andhere meN
gum rahe. phir kaheeN jaa kar 20veeN sadee meN TS Eliot ne logoN ko
bataayaa k vo kitaan baRaa shaa'ir hai. aaj har ko'yee use Angrezee ke
azeem tareen shaa'iroN meN shumaar kartaa hai! kyaa Khabar 100 saal
ba'ad Qaa'im kaa kyaa martaba bantaa hai!
Qaa'im par bahut kam likhaa gayaa hai. Urdu meN mere ilm kee had tak
sirf aik mazmoon hai jo janaab e Raz Chanpuri ne likhaa thaa. is ke
ilaava Hindi meN Pundit Padam Singh Sharma (ye bhee Bijnor ke rehne
vaale the) kaa aik taveel mazmoon hai. baaqee Allah hee Allah hai!
> afsos k mausoof kaa kalaam bohat kam hee istifaade ko mil sakaa hai.
> mumkin hai Zafar saaHeb kisee kitaab kee nishaan.dehee kar deN jo iss
> kamee ko pooraa kar saktee hai.
Majlis e Taraqqe e Adab, Lahore, ne 1965 meN Kulliyaat e Qaa'im (2
jildeN) shaa'e kee thee jise Dr. Iqtida Hassan ne baRee 'arq raizee se
murattab kiyaa hai. taaham is meN haalaat o vaaqiyaat to baRee tafseel
se di'ye ga'ye haiN lekin jahaaN Qaa'im kaa shaa'irana maqaam
muta'yyin karne kaa vaqt aataa hai vahaaN Dr. saahib kanne katraa ke
guzar jaate haiN. lekin Khair, ye bhee Ghaneemat hai k kulliyaat to
shaa'e ho ga'yee!
meree taraf se sabhee ahbaab ko paishgee Eid Mubaarak.
Zafar
Zoya
Zaf Sahib,
Alup par yeh maluumaatii silsilaa shuruu karne par merii jaanib se
dilii shukriya qubuul kiijiiye. is silsile kii pehlii qist meiN aap ne
jo ashaar quote kiye haiN, un meiN se ek mere liye bahut jaanaa
pehchaanaa thaa:
zaalim too meree saada dilee par to rehm kar
rooThaa thaa tujh se aaphee aur aap man gayaa!
In fact, I have quoted it to a friend a few times, without the desired
effect though! The response I usually get is: "saadaa_dilii, yeah
sure, try that on someone else"!!!
ek duusre sher kii aslii suurat par bhii ek mehfil meiN ik baar kaafii
discussion huii thii, aur quiz bhii huaa thaa; had your post been a
quiz, this particular sher would have definitely given away the name
of the shaayar:
>
> qismat to dekh TooTee hai jaa kar kahaaN kamand
> kuchh door apne haath se jab baam reh gayaa
>
> [ye she'er zarb ul misl kee tarah mash'hoor hai, agar che akasr log is
> kee qir'at muKhtalif tareeqoN se karte haiN, taaham asl soorat vuhee
> hai jo likhee ga'yee]
>
umiid kartii huuN k aap aiiNdaa bhii is silsile ko jaarii rakheNge,
aur hamaarii maluumaat meiN hameshaa kii tarah maziid izaafa karte
raheNge.
__________________Zoya
Sarwar Alam Raz
mukarramee Zafar saaHeb: aadaab!
ma'loom naheeN k aap Zakee Kakoravi saaHeb se vaaqif haiN k naheeN.
mausoof kuChh arse qabl tak Atlanta, Georgia (USA) meiN muqeem thay.
unhoN ne Ghazal per aik :encyclopedia: tasneef kiyaa thaa. meree
darKhwaas ke baa'vujood kitaab kee ziyaarat :door: se hee ho sakee.
chunaanche maiN uss ke muta'alliq ziyaadah naheeN keh saktaa hooN.
iss kitaab kaa ilm mujh ko yooN hu'aa k aik meHfil meiN Zakee saaHeb
ne iss kaa aik nusKha Himayat Ali Shaa'ir saaHeb ko pesh kiyaa thaa.
mushaa'ire kee hamaa.hamee meiN maiN Himayat saaHeb se le kar kitaab
naheeN dekh sakaa. iss kitaab meiN ba'qaul Zakee saaHeb Qaa'im
Chandpuri kaa zikr.e.Khair bhee hai. kitnaa hai aur kyaa hai, iss kaa
ilm naheeN hai. yeh zaroor jaantaa hooN k jab maiN ne
dauraan.e.guftugoo Zakee saaHeb se Qaa'im Chandpuri kee ta'reef kee to
mausoof bohat jhillaye aur farmaayaa k :voh kon se aise baRe shaa'ir
thay?: (yeh ba'ainehee un ke hee alfaaz haiN) jawaaban maiN ne
Khaamoshee hee behtar jaanee. buzurgoN ne aise moqoN per Khaamoshee
kee hee taakeed kee hai!
agar vahaaN yeh kitaab mil jaaye to dekh leN.
Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar: