Dilchasp Adabee Haqaa.eq # 9
Sarwar Alam Raz
Dilchasp Adabee Haqaa.eq kee qist #9 Haazir.e.Khidmat hai. meraa
kHayaal thaa k ab is silsile se aap kaa jee bhar gayaa hogaa. aaKhir
is kee aaTh (8) qisteN aap kee nazaroN se guzar hee chukee haiN! lekin
chand eHbaab kee raa.e hai ke abhee ise chalne diyaa jaa.e. UVR saabeb
ne mujhe isko jaaree rakhne ke liye shaa.iraana andaaz meiN Hukm diyaa
hai k:
tum bhee chale chalo yooNhee jab tak chalee chale!
pehle meraa yeh bhee iraada thaa k aise Haqaa.eq jo faarsee ash.aar se
vaabasta haiN :post: na karooN kyoNke beshtar log farsee se naa.vaaqif
haiN. ab sochtaa hooN ke agar faarsee ash.aar kaa tarjuma de diyaa
jaa.e to in ko bhee shaamil kiyaa jaa saktaa hai. aChhee Urdu
shaa.iree ke liye faarsee kaa kuChh ilm yooN bhee zarooree hai aur
maiN dekhtaa hooN ke alup meiN Abida saahiba jo Ghazaliaat :post:
kartee haiN unkee farhaNg bhee de diyaa kartee haiN. chunaanch chand
faarsee ash.aar vale vaaqi.aat darj kar rahaa hooN. Ummeed hai qubool
kareNge:
:Sarawar:
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Dilchasp Adabee Haqaa.eq # 9:
(1) taqreeban 4-5 so saal se log aise moqoN per jab zindigee kee
be.sabaatee aur us meiN aish ke lamHoN kee kamyaabee kaa zikr maqsood
ho ,aik misra paRhaa kate haiN:
Babar ba.aish kosh k aalam do.baara neest!
yeh misra Mughal baadshaah Babar kaa hai jis ne Hindustan meiN
Mughaliya saltanat kee daaGh.bel daalee thee. Babar faarsee kaa aChhaa
shaa.ir bhee thaa. pooraa sher is taraH hai:
no.roz.o.no.bahaar.o mae.o.dilbare Khush ast
Babar ba.aish kosh k aalam do.baara neest!
(no.roz kaa din ho aur bahaar kaa mosam bhee; sharaab.e.saafee bhee ho
aur Haseen ma.shooq bhee to ae Babar jee bhar ke aish.o.ishrat kar le
k yeh dunyaa phir do.baara haath naheeN aa.egee)
(2) kisee moqe per bar.jasta sher kehnaa yaa kisee doosre kaa sher
paRhnaa bhee aik fun hai. is kee do misaaleN darj kee jaatee haiN:
(a) Urdu ke mash.hoor shaa.ir ShaiKh Qalandar BaKhsh Jur.at naa.beenaa
(blind) the. aik martaba fikr.e.suKhan meiN bethe the k aik dost aa
poNhche aur Jur.at se poooChha k :Shaikh saahib ki fikr meiN haiN?:
Jur.at ne kahaa k :aik misra ho gayaa hai. uskee girah kee fikr meiN
hooN.: aur phir voh misra sunaayaa:
us zulf pe phabtee shab.e.deejoor kee soojhee (phabtee=tanziya
:simile:, deejoor=taareek)
un saaheb ne foran kahaa k :yooN keh deejiye:
aNdhe ko aNdhere meiN baRee door kee soojhee
(b) Molana Abul Kalam Azad arabee aur farsee ke aik zabardast aalim
the. un ko hazaaroN ash.aar yaad the jin ko voh bar.mahl intihaa.ee
mahaarat se istaimaal kiyaa karte the. aik martaba aik siyaasee
mas.ale per Azad saaheb kaa Molana Muhammmad Ali Johar se iKhtilaaf
huaa aur Johar saaheb unkaa saath Chhor kar doosroN se jaa mile.
Molana Azad ne is per aik mazmoon likhaa aur us meiN yeh sher shaamil
lar diyaa:
ma.shooq.e.maa ba.sheva.ee har kas muvaaqif ast
baa maa sharaab Khurd, baa zaahid namaaz kard
(hamaaraa mashooq apne sulook meiN har aik kaa saath detaa hai. jahaaN
usne hamaaare saath sharaab pee vaheeN usne zaahid ke saath namaaz
bhee paRh lee.)
Molana Johar Ghusse meiN raat ke vaqt hee apne aik dost Syed MeHfooz
Ali ke ghar poNhche aur un ko sote se uThaa kar kahaa k : dekho Abul
Kalam ne kyaa tanz kiyaa hai. Mujh ko is kaa javaab abhee chaahiye
hai.:
Syed saaheb bhee zabardast aalim the. unhoN ne usee vaqt yeh sher
javaab meiN likh kar de diyaa:
bar kafe jaam.e.sharee.at, bar kafe saNdaan.e.ishq
har havas.naa.e na daanad jaam.o.saNdaaN baaKhtan!
(mere aik haath meiN sharaab kaa jam hai aur doosre meiN ishq kaa
baTTa (anvil). Aik havas.parast insaan kab samajh saktaa hai k
sharee.at aur ishq meiN kis taraH tavazun barqaraar rakhaa jaa saktaa
hai!)
(3) Mughal baadshaah AuraNgzeb apnee tabee.at kaa bohat saKht thaa aur
Hukoomat un usooloN per chalaanaa chaahtaa thaa jo us ke Khayaal meiN
Islamee the. usee ke muta.alliq yeh mash.hoor hai k us ne mosooqee ko
mamnoo qaraar diyaa thaa. jab kuChh meeraasee aik farzee janaaza lekar
us ke saamne se guzre aur us ke pooChhne per logoN ne yeh kahaa ke
‘yeh mosooqee kaa janaaza hai to us ne muskuraa kar kahaa thaa k
:is ko aisaa gehraa dafn karnaa k phir nikal na sake!:
AuraNgzeb ne aik martaba Hukm jaaree kiyaa k tamaam :zanaan.e
baazaaree:. fulaaN taareeKh tak nikaaH kar leN varna sab ko kashtee
meiN biThaa kar daryaa meiN dubo diyaa jaa.egaa. bohat see aisee
auratoN ne jaldee jaldee nikaaH kar liye lekin kuChh reh bhee gayeeN
yahaaN tak ke us taareeKh ke aane meiN sirf aik din reh gayaa.
un auratoN meiN aik aurat thee jo aik muqaamee buzurg ShaiKh
Kaleem.ullah ke paas roz Haazir huaa kartee thee. us din voh gayee to
ShaiKh saaheb se kahaa k
:baaNdee kaa aaKhree salaam qubool farmaaiye:.
Shaikh saaheb ke pooChhne per us ne Haal sunaayaa to aap ne kahaa ke
kal jab tum log daryaa kee taraf jaa rahee ho to Hafiz Shirazi kaa yeh
sher paRhtee jaanaa:
dar koo.e.nek.naamee maa raa guzar na daadand
gar too na mee pasandee, taGh.eer kun qazaa raa!
(ham ko nek.naamee ke kooche meiN to jaane naheeN diyaa gayaa. ab agar
tujh ko yeh pasand naheeN hai to phir qazaa ko badal de!)
doosre din jab sab aurateN yeh zor zor se paRhtee AuraNgzeb ke saamne
se guzreeN to voh is qadar muta.assir hu.aa ke us ne apnaa Hukm
mansooKh kar diyaa!
(4) Urdu shaa.iree ke do :school: mash.hoor haiN, Luchnow aur Delhi.
Luchnow ko do asaatiza Khwaaja Haidar Ali Atish aur Imam BaKhsh NasiKh
kee adabee chashmakeN adab kee taaReeKh meiN bohan maroof haiN. aik
zamaane meiN Atish ne NasiKh kee GhazaloN kee zameen meiN kaee
GhazaleN kaheeN. us per NasiKh ne jhuNjhlaa kar tanzan aik sher kahaa
k:
likh rahaa hai aik jaahil mere deevaaN kaa javaab
Bu Musailim ne(*) likhaa thaa jaise Qur.aaN kaa javaab (*)aik Arab
shaa.ir
Jab Atish ne yeh sher sunaa to foran yeh sher keh diyaa:
kyoN na de her momin us mulHid (*) ke deevaaN kaa javaab (* Khudaa se
inkaaar
jis ne deevaaN apnaa Theraayaa hai Qur.aaN kaa javaab karne
vaalaa)
(5) Lucknow ke aik mushaa.ire meiN NasiKh aise vaqt poNhche jab meHfil
taqreeban Khatm hone vaalee thee. Khwaaja Atish aur chand doosre
shoraa mojood the. mizaaj pursee ke bad logon ne arz kiyaa k
:Hazzat, mushaa.ira to ho chukaa hai lekin sab ko aap kaa baRaa
intizaar rahaa:
ShaiKh NasiKh ne foran yeh matla keh kar sunaa diyaa aur is taraH apne
der meiN aane kaa javaaz paidaa kiyaa k:
jo Khaas haiN voh shareek.e.giroh.e.aam naheeN
shumaar.e.daana.e.tasbeeH meiN imam naheeN!
is matle meiN tasbeeH (worry beads!) kaa zikr hai jis meiN jaa.ba.jaa
Chhote daanoN ke bad aik baRaa daana hotaa hai jo :imam: kahaa jaata
hai aur jisko tasbeeH paRhte vaqt gintee meiN naheeN shumaar kiyaa
jaataa hai. yeh bhee yaad rahe ke ShaiKh NasiKh kaa naam Imam BaKhsh
thaa, goyaa is sher meiN unhoN ne apne naam se faaida bhee uThaayaa
hai. sab ne sher kee tareef kee. Atish ne foran javaab meiN tanzan
kahaa k:
yeh bazm voh hai k taaKheer kaa muqaam naheeN
hamaare gaNjafe meiN baazee.e.Ghulaam naheeN
us ke javaab meiN NasiKh ke aik shaagird Khwaaja Vazeer ne aik sher
paRhaa jo aaj bhee ba.tor zarb.ul.misl istaimaal hotaa hai:
jo Khaas baNde haiN voh baNda.e.avaam naheeN
hazaar baar jo Yusuf bike Ghulaam naheeN
(6) Lucknow ke aik mushaa.ire meiN NasiKh aur Atish apne apne
shaagirdoN ke saath mojood the. MusHafee (Atish ke ustaad) kee aamad
bhee mutavaqqe thee lekin voh abhee aaye naheeN the. aik kamsin laRke
ne aik Ghazal kaa matla pesh kiyaa:
jis be.dehan se main karooN taqreer bol uTThe
mujh meiN kamaal yeh hai ke tasveer bol uTThe
mushaa.ir meiN shor mach gayaa aur matle kee sab ne bohat ta.reef kee.
NasiKh ne bhee use kaee baar paRhvaa kar daad dee. itne meiN MusHafee
aa pohNche. NasiKh kisee taraH Atish ko ChheRnaa chaahte the,
chunaanche jab shama MusHafee ke saamne aayee to NasiKh ne un se kahaa
k
: abhee aap kee aamad se qabl aik laRke ne aik be.misaal matla paRhaa
hai.maiN chaahtaa hooN ke aap bhee sun leN:
shama uThaa kar us laRke ke saamne rakh dee gayee aur us ne phir apnaa
matla paRh kar sunaayaa. Atish ko apne ustaad ke saamne se shama is
taraH uTh jaane per Ghussa aagayaa aur unhoN ne NasiKh se kahaa k
:aik Ghalat matle per is qadar daad kyaa manee? Tasveer ko be.dehan
kehnaa bilkul Ghalat hai. Is ko yooN kehnaa chaahiye.:
jis be.zubaaN se main karooN taqreer bol uTThe
mujh meiN kamaal yeh hai ke tasveer bol uTThe
aur is taraH aik lafz ko badal kar sher ko bulaNd kar diyaa.
(7) aik sher Gham.o.raNj ke moqe per paRhaa jaataa hai:
dil kaa ujaRnaa sehl sahee, basnaa sehl naheeN zaalim
bastee basnaa khel naheeN, baste baste bastee hai
aam tor par is ko Mir kaa sher samjhaa jaataa hai. yeh dar.asl Shokat
Ali Khan :Fani: kaa sher hai. Is Ghazal ke kuChh aur ash.aar suniye:
dunyaa meree balaa jaane,mehNgee hai yaa sastee hai
mot mile to muft na loon, hastee kee kyaa hastee hai
jag soonaa hai tere baGhair,aaNkhoN kaa kyaa Haal huaa
jab bhee dunyaa bastee thee, ab bhee dunyaa bastee hai
aaNsoo the so Khushk hue, jee hai k umdaa aataa hai
dil pe ghataa see Chha.ee hai, khultee hai na barastee hai
dil kaa ujaRnaa sehl sahee, basnaa sehl naheeN zaalim
bastee basnaa khel naheeN, baste baste bastee hai
:Fani: jis mein aaNsoo kyaa, dil ke lahoo kaa kaal na thaa
haae vob aaNkh ab paanee kee do booNdoN ko tarastee hai
(8) Mir Taqi Mir ke yeh ash.aar aik qite kee soorat meiN paRhe jaate
haiN:
kal paaooN aik kaasa.e.sar par jo aa gayaa
yaksar voh ustuKhaan.e.shakasta se choor thaa
kehne lagaa k dekh ke chal raah be.Khabar
main bhee kabhoo kasoo kaa sar.e.pur.Ghuroor thaa
yeh ash.aar Mir kee aik Ghazal meiN qita.band kee taraH diye gaye
haiN. is Ghazal ke chand aur ash.aar mulaaHiza keejiye:
thaa must.aar Husn se us ke jo noor thaa
Khursheed mein bhee us hee kaa zarra zahoor thaa
pohNchaa jo aap ko to main pohNchaa Khudaa ke ta.eeN
maloom ab huaa ke bohat maiN bhee door thaa
majlis mein raat aik tire partave baGhair
kyaa shama, kyaa pataNg, her ik be.Huzoor thaa
ham Khaak meiN mile to mile, lekin ae sipahr
us shoKh ko bhee raah pe laanaa zaroor thaa
kal paaooN aik kaasa.e.sar pe jo aa gayaa
yaksar voh ustuKhaan.e.shakasta se choor thaa
kehne lagaa k dekh ke chal raah beKhabar
main bhee kabhoo kasoo kaa sar.e.pur.Ghuroor thaa
(9) aik misra aksar log tanzan paRhte haiN:
aashiq kaa janaaza hai zaraa dhoom se nikle!
yeh matla aaKhree Mughal baadshaah Zafar ke zamaane ke aik shaa.ir
Mirza Muhammad Ali :Fidvi: kaa hai jo Mirza :hajv: ke naam se bhee
mash.hoor the. pooraa sher yooN hai:
chal saath k Hasrat dil.e.meHroom se nikle
aashiq kaa janaaza hai zaraa dhoom se nikle!
(10) log kisee shaKhs ko tanbeeh ke tor par aik misra sunaate haiN.
Aap ne :election: yaa aise hee kisee aur siyaasee moqe par is ko idhar
udhar likhaa dekhaa hogaa:
doRo, zamaana chaal qayaamat kee chal gayaa!
yeh sher Justice Shah Deen :humaayuN: kaa hai. aap 12 April 1868 ko
BaGhbaan.pura (Lahore) meiN paida hur aur 2 July 1918 ko Lahore meiN
hee Allah ko pyaare hue. pooraa sher is tarah se hai:
uTTho vagarna Hashr naheeN hogaa phir kabhee
doRo, zamaana chaal qayaamat kee chal gayaa!
(11) kisee shaKhs kaa intiqaal ho jaa.e to log yeh misra paRhte haiN:
kyaa Khoob aadmee thaa, Khudaa maGhfirat kare!
yeh ShaiKh Muhammad Ibrahim 'Zoq' (1789-1854) kaa aik maqta hai. Zoq
aur Ghalib ham.asr the aur donoN muKhtalif vaqtoN meiN Bahadur Shah
'Zafar' ke ustaad bhee rahe the. pooraa maqta is taraH hai:
kehte haiN aaj :Zoq: jahaaN se guzar gayaa
kyaa Khoob aadmee thaa!, Khudaa maGhfirat kare
(12) aik misra taqreeban 1856 se zarb.ul.misl ke tor per mustamil hai
aur insaan ke urooj.o.zavaal kee ibrat.aNgez akkaasee kartaa hai. is
ko shaa.ir ne Mughal saltanat kee bujhtee huee shama ke pas.manzar
meiN kahaa thaa lekin yeh ab bhee apnee mana.viyyat meiN yaktaa hai:
ik dhoop thee k saath gayee aaftaab ke!
yeh Munshi Khush BaKht Ali Khan 'Khursheed' Lakhnavi ke aik sher se
maaKhooz hai. Khursheed saaheb Muhammad Raza 'Barq' Lakhnavi ke
shaagird the. matla is taraH se hai:
peeree meiN valvale voh kahaaN haiN shabaab ke
ik dhoop thee k saath gayee aaftaab ke!
(13) jab koee shaKhs :aadhee ko ChhoR kar pooree: ke peeChhe bhaage
aur us ke haath un meiN se aik bhee na lage to log Hasrat yaa tanz se
kehte haiN k:
na Khudaa hee milaa, na visaal.e.sanam, na idhar ke rahe, na udhar ke
rahe!
yeh misra Mirza Sadiq 'Sharar' kaa hai. pooraa sher suniye:
gaye donoN jahaan ke kaam se ham, na idhar ke rahe, na udhar ke rahe
na Khudaa hee milaa na visaal.e.sanam, na idhar ke rahe na udhar ke
rahe!
(14) kisee kee vafaat ho jaaye to aam tor par log ta.ziyat ke vaqt
izhaar.e.Haqeeqat aur tasallee ke liye kehte haiN:
aaj voh, kal hamaaree baaree hai!
yeh Urdu kee (Ghaaliban) sab se mash.hoor masnavee 'Zehr.e.Ishq'
(Hakim Tasadduq Husain, al ma.roof ba Mirza Shoq Lakhnavi:1783-1871)
ke haiN. poora sher aur isee maznavee ke chand aur ash.aar darj.e.zail
haiN:
mot se kis ko rustgaaree hai
aaj voh kal hamaaree baaree hai
ishq meiN ham ne yeh kamaa.ee kee
dil diyaa, Gham se aashnaa.ee kee
jaa.e ibrat saraa.e.faanee hai
moorid.e.marg.e.naagehaanee hai
ooNche ooNche makaan the jin ke
aaj voh taNg gor meiN haiN paRe
har ghaRee munqlib zamaana hai
yehee dunyaa ka kaar.Khaana hai
Mirza Shoq ke pote Ahsan Lukhnavee kaa kehnaa hai ke masnavee
'Zehr.e.Ishq' aik sachche vaaqi.e per mabnee hai. un ke bayaan ke
mutaabiq Mirza Shoq ke biraadar.e.nisbatee (saale!) aur aik Khaatoon
Sitaara kee muHabbat apne anjaam meiN naakaam saabit huee thee. Mirza
Shoq ne in donoN kee Gham.aNgez guftugoo kisee taraH sun lee thee aur
us se muta.assir hokar apnee masnavee kaa aaGhaaz usee raat deevaar
par ko.ele se masnavee ke ibtidaa.iya ash.aar likh kar kiyaa thaa.
(15) mot aur zindigee ke Havaale se darj.e.zail misra muddat se
zarb.ul.misl ho kar reh gayaa hai:
zindigee naam hai mar mar ke jiye jaane kaa!
yeh naamvar shaa.ir Shokat Ali Khan Fani ke aik sher kaa misra hai.
Fani kaa kalaam apnee Hasrat.aamezee aur soz ke liye nihaayat
mash.hoor hai aur mosoof kaa shumaar Jigar Muradabadi, AsGHar Gondvi
aur Hasrat Mohani ke saath piChhlee sadee ke azeem shoraa meiN liyaa
jaataa hai. Fani qasba Islam Nagar, zila Badayun meiN 13 September
1879 ko paidaa hue the aur aap ne 27 August 1941 ko Hyderabad (Deccan)
meiN intiqaal farmaaya. aap Arabee, Farsee aur Urdu ke aalim the, aur
saath hee 1901 meiN Bareilly College se BA aur 1908 meiN Aligarh
University se LLB kee asnaad bhee Haasil kar rakhee theeN. un kaa
pooraa sher suniye:
har nafas umr.e.guzishta kee hai mai.yyat Fani
zindigee naam hai mar mar ke jiye jaane kaa!
Fani ke yeh do ash.aar bhee bohat mash.hoor haiN:
zikr jab ChhiR gayaa qayaamat kaa
baat pohNchee tiree javaanee tak
sune jaate na the tum se mire din raat ke shikve
kafan sarkaa.o meree bezubaanee dekhte jaa.o
(16) seHat kee ahmiyat ke Havaale se yeh sher aksar paRhaa jaataa hai:
taNgdastee agar na ho Ghalib
tandurustee hazaar ne.mat hai
yeh sher Mirza Ghalib kaa naheeN hai bal.k Mirza Qurban Ali Beg
'Salik' kaa hai jo Ghalib ke shaagird the. Delhi meiN 1824 meiN paidaa
hue the aur 1881 meiN Hyderabad (Deccan) meiN intiqaal kiyaa. aap kee
betee Ruqaiyya Begam Hind.o.Pak ke mash.hoor aalim.e.Islam Molana Abul
Ala Modoodi kee vaalida theeN. saHeeH sher yooN hai:
taNgdastee agar na ho Salik
tandurustee hazaar ne.mat hai
Sarwar Raz :Sarwar:
Zafar
aap kee aik aur ilm-afroz tehreer paRhne ko milee. kuchh baateN to
pehle sun rakhee theeN lein yahaaN ALUP meN parhne se qand e mukarrar
kaa lutf aayaa. bahut see cheezeN mere kaanoN ke liye na'ee bhee
theeN.
mujhe to lagtaa hai k aaj kal ALUP par aap aur maiN hee reh gaye haiN.
is liye kabhee kabhaar lagtaa hai k "man turaa mullah ba-goyam, too
maraa haajee bagau!!!" kee soorat e haal paidaa ho rahee hai. lekin
Khair:
maiN intizaar karooN gaa agar miree aawaaz
abhee sukoot ba gulshan, sadaa ba-sehraa hai!
maiN kuchh nikaat par aap kee ijaazat se izhaar e Khayaal karnaa
chaahooN gaa.
> (a) Urdu ke mash.hoor shaa.ir ShaiKh Qalandar BaKhsh Jur.at naa.beenaa
> (blind) the. aik martaba fikr.e.suKhan meiN bethe the k aik dost aa
> poNhche aur Jur.at se poooChha k :Shaikh saahib ki fikr meiN haiN?:
>
> Jur.at ne kahaa k :aik misra ho gayaa hai. uskee girah kee fikr meiN
> hooN.: aur phir voh misra sunaayaa:
>
> us zulf pe phabtee shab.e.deejoor kee soojhee (phabtee=tanziya
> :simile:, deejoor=taareek)
ye waaqia "Aab e Hayaat" meN darj hai. doosre shaa'ir Urdu ke naabGha
e rauzgaar shaa'ir Inshaullah Khan Insha the.
>
> (b) Molana Abul Kalam Azad arabee aur farsee ke aik zabardast aalim
> the. un ko hazaaroN ash.aar yaad the jin ko voh bar.mahl intihaa.ee
> mahaarat se istaimaal kiyaa karte the.
jee haaN, aap ne bilkul durust likhaa hai, janaab Azad ke ilm o
haafize kaa maiN bhee "saKht" maddaah hooN. unkee shuhra e aafaaq
kitaab "Ghubaar e Khaatir" maiN ne apnee "site" meN bhee shaamil kee
hai. ye kitaab aik farzee dost "Sideeq" ke naam likhe gaye un Khutoot
kaa majmoo'a hai jo Azad ne Qila e Ahmed Nagar meN qaid ke dauraan
likhe the. jail meN baGher kisee kutub Khaane kee madad ke mahaz apne
haafize ke zaur par muKhtalif masaa'il par guhar afshaanee kee hai,
aur us meN Arabi, Farsi aur Urdu ke ash'aar is tarah khapaaye haiN k
lagtaa hai 500 saal pehle kisee shaa'ir ne Khaas isee mauqe ke liye
she'er kahaa ho gaa!!! maiN bahut jald un ke Khutoot kaa aik intiKhaab
site par dooN gaa.
>
> (4) likh rahaa hai aik jaahil mere deevaaN kaa javaab
> Bu Musailim ne(*) likhaa thaa jaise Qur.aaN kaa javaab (*)aik Arab
> shaa.ir
>
Musailima shaa'ir naheeN balke nabuwwat kaa jhooTaa da'awe daar thaa.
wo aam taur par Musailima "Kazzab" (jhooTaa) ke naam se jaanaa jaataa
hai. us ne Huzoor (pbuh) kee zindagee hee meN da'awa kar diyaa thaa
aru Qur'an ke radd meN aik kitaab bhee likhee thee. ba'ad meN Hazrat
Abu Bakr ke daur meN Jang e Hadeeqa ke dauraaN wo "Wahshee" (Hazrat
Amir Hamza kaa qaatil) ke haathoN maaraa gayaa thaa.
> (8) Mir Taqi Mir ke yeh ash.aar aik qite kee soorat meiN paRhe jaate
> haiN:
>
> kal paaooN aik kaasa.e.sar par jo aa gayaa
> yaksar voh ustuKhaan.e.shakasta se choor thaa
>
doosre misre kee durust shakl ye hai:
yak sar wo astaKhwaan shikastoN se choor thaa
Urdu meN ye Ghazal mulaahiza farmaaiye:
http://www.eurdubazaar.com/images/meer/g16.html
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> aaj voh, kal hamaaree baaree hai!
> yeh Urdu kee (Ghaaliban) sab se mash.hoor masnavee 'Zehr.e.Ishq'
> (Hakim Tasadduq Husain, al ma.roof ba Mirza Shoq Lakhnavi:1783-1871)
> ke haiN.
"Zehr e Ishq" ko Urdu kee sab se mash-hoor masnawee to naheeN kahaa
jaa saktaa (k ye sehraa "Sahrul Bayaan" yaa phir "Gulzaar e Naseem" ke
sar bandhnaa chaahiye) taaham aap ise Urdu kee sab se bandaam -- ya
phir sab se ma'atoob --masnawe zaroor keh sakte haiN.
is masnawee ke ka'ee misre zubaan zad e aam haiN. eUrdubazaar par
taqreeban aadhee masnwee maujood hai:
http://www.eurdubazaar.com/showk.asp
aaKhir meN aik baar phir aik umda aur ma'aloomaatee post ke liye
shukriya.
Sincerely,
Zafar
Sarwar Alam Raz
> janaab e Sarawar, aadaab arz hai:
>
> aap kee aik aur ilm-afroz tehreer paRhne ko milee. kuchh baateN to
> pehle sun rakhee theeN lein yahaaN ALUP meN parhne se qand e mukarrar
> kaa lutf aayaa. bahut see cheezeN mere kaanoN ke liye na'ee bhee
> theeN.
> mujhe to lagtaa hai k aaj kal ALUP par aap aur maiN hee reh gaye haiN.
> is liye kabhee kabhaar lagtaa hai k "man turaa mullah ba-goyam, too
> maraa haajee bagau!!!" kee soorat e haal paidaa ho rahee hai. lekin
> Khair:
>
> maiN intizaar karooN gaa agar miree aawaaz
> abhee sukoot ba gulshan, sadaa ba-sehraa hai!
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Zafar saaheb aadaab aap kee haimmat afzaaee kaa shukriya!
alup par aaj kal jo be.ronaqee musallat hai us kaa sabab shaayad logoN
kee masroofiyat hai. zaahir hai k har shaKhs meree taraH kaahil to
naheeN hosaktaa! sab yaaraan.e.alup se darKhwaast hai k thoRaa saa
vaqt nikaal kar Zafar saaheb ko sharminda kareN aur alup ko usee ronaq
se phir jagmagaa deN jis kee voh :aadee: ho chukee hai!!
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> maiN kuchh nikaat par aap kee ijaazat se izhaar e Khayaal karnaa
> chaahooN gaa.
> > (b) Molana Abul Kalam Azad arabee aur farsee ke aik zabardast aalim
> > the. un ko hazaaroN ash.aar yaad the jin ko voh bar.mahl intihaa.ee
> > mahaarat se istaimaal kiyaa karte the.
>
> jee haaN, aap ne bilkul durust likhaa hai, janaab Azad ke ilm o
> haafize kaa maiN bhee "saKht" maddaah hooN. unkee shuhra e aafaaq
> kitaab "Ghubaar e Khaatir" maiN ne apnee "site" meN bhee shaamil kee
> hai. ye kitaab aik farzee dost "Sideeq" ke naam likhe gaye un Khutoot
> kaa majmoo'a hai jo Azad ne Qila e Ahmed Nagar meN qaid ke dauraan
> likhe the. jail meN baGher kisee kutub Khaane kee madad ke mahaz apne
> haafize ke zaur par muKhtalif masaa'il par guhar afshaanee kee hai,
> aur us meN Arabi, Farsi aur Urdu ke ash'aar is tarah khapaaye haiN k
> lagtaa hai 500 saal pehle kisee shaa'ir ne Khaas isee mauqe ke liye
> she'er kahaa ho gaa!!! maiN bahut jald un ke Khutoot kaa aik intiKhaab
> site par dooN gaa.
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aap ko Ghalat fehmee ho gayee hai.
ba.Havaala.e Ghubaar.e.Khaatir, murattaba Malik Ram, Sahitya Academy,
Delhi (1991 edition):
Molana Azad ne yeh Khutoot apne azeez dost Molana Habeeb.ur.Rehman
Khan Sherwani ko tasavvur meiN muKhaatib kar ke qaid.Khaane meiN likhe
the.
:Sadeeq:--> dost, Habeeb
:Siddeeq:--> nehaayat sachcha shaKhs
Molana Azad, Sherwani saaheb ko :Sadeeq.e.mukarram: ke laqab se
pukaarte the.
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doosre :comments: aur tasHeeH ke liye mamnoon hooN
Sarwar Raz :Sarwar:
Zafar
> Delhi (1991 edition):
>
> Molana Azad ne yeh Khutoot apne azeez dost Molana Habeeb.ur.Rehman
> Khan Sherwani ko tasavvur meiN muKhaatib kar ke qaid.Khaane meiN likhe
> the.
> :Sadeeq:--> dost, Habeeb
> :Siddeeq:--> nehaayat sachcha shaKhs
>
> Molana Azad, Sherwani saaheb ko :Sadeeq.e.mukarram: ke laqab se
> pukaarte the.
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------
mukarramee Sarwar saahib, aadaab:
mere paas "Ghubaar e Khaatir" kaa puraanaa edition thaa jo Maulaanaa
ke secretary ne murattib kiyaa thaa (Ghaliban Ajmal Khan naam thaa).
us edition meN unhoN ne aik jagah kuchh is tarah kee baat kahee hai k
ye Khutoot farazee maktoob alaih ke naam likhe gaye haiN. afsos mere
paas wo edition ab naheeN hai. albata Malik Ram ne waazih taur par
likhaa hai k ye Khutoot HRS ke naam likhe gaye the. taaham ye baat
bhee mahal e nazar hai k is (Malik Raam edition) kitaab ke deebaache
meN Maulaanaa ne likhaa hai k (yaaddaasht ke sahaare likh rahaa hooN
is liye alfaaz aage peechhe ho sakte haiN, taaham nafs e mazmoon wahee
hai) "ye Khutoot niji haisiyat meN likhe gaye the aur in ko shaa'e
karne kaa iraada naheeN thaa, lekin Ajmal Khan (Ghaliban personal
secretary) ne dekh liye aur inko shaa'e karwaane par zor diyaa." is se
ye zaahir hotaa hai k ye Khutoot Maulaanaa kee rihaa'ee ke ba'ad bhee
"deliver" naheeN kiye gaye the.
Khair, jo bhee soorat e haal rahee ho, is baat meN koee kalaam naheeN
k ye Khutoot Urdu nasr meN numaayaaN muqaam rakhte haiN.
Zehr e Ishq
aap ne yaad dilaayaa to mujhe yaad aayaa! aik baRee dil-Khush kun
Khabar ye hai k maiN parsoN Pakistan ke "one of the biggest"
publishers se milaa to baatoN baatoN meN maiN ne un se "Masnawee Zehr
e Ishq" kaa zikr kiyaa. maiN ne shikaayat kee k itnee aham kitaab aur
ko'ee is ko chhaaptaa naheeN. maze kee baat dekhiye ko unhoN ne foran
kahaa, "aap is ko murattib kar dijiye, maiN chhaap detaa hooN!!!"
chunaanche maiN aik do din ke andar andar mushkil alfaaz kee farhang
tayyaar kar ke aur aik "introductory note" likh ke musawada kitaabat
ke liye bhej dooN gaa :)
maiN ne apnee website ke liye ye masnawee intihaa'ee dushwaaree se
haasil kee thee. jab aur kaheeN na milee to aik saahib ko Lahore
bheejaa aur wo Punjab University kee library se photocopy karwaa laaye
thee. agar aap is post meN is Zehr e Ishq kaa zikr na karte to shaayad
mujhe bhee us meeting meN ye yaad na aatee.
Sincerely,
Zafar
Sarwar Alam Raz
> haasil kee thee. jab aur kaheeN na milee to aik saahib ko Lahore
> bheejaa aur wo Punjab University kee library se photocopy karwaa laaye
> thee. agar aap is post meN is Zehr e Ishq kaa zikr na karte to shaayad
> mujhe bhee us meeting meN ye yaad na aatee.
>
> Sincerely,
>
> Zafar
Zafar saab! aadaab arz
kaam hone ke aise hee bahaane banaa karte haiN. Khushee kee baat hai
k aap aik aChhe kaam se lag gaye- is kaa yeh matlab naheeN hai k ab
tak fuzooliyaat meiN masroof the! lafz fuzooliyaat par yaad aayaa k
maiN aik mazmoon :jadeed Ghazal meiN fuzooliyaat: likh rahaa hooN,
magar alup meiN :post: karte hu.e hichkichaa rahaa hooN kyoN.k aap
dekh hee rahe haiN k ab meree :posts: par Khaal Khaal log hee likhte
haiN. yaa to voh is qaabil hee naheeN hote haiN (aur yeh ain mumkin
hai) yaa phir voh vajh hai jis ke baare meiN sochnaa naheeN chaahtaa
hooN. Khair, mazmoon mukammal ho jaae to phir faisila karooNgaa.
masnavee shaa.e ho jaae to e-mail se aagaah keejiyegaa. shukriya!
Sarwar Raz :Sarwar:
ps: yeh Niranjan Pidanekar, UVR, Kalsi, Afzal Khan vaGhaira saahebaan
aaKHir kahaaN haiN? bhaa.ee aaiye, alup ko aap kee saKht zaroorat hai!
Zafar
> magar alup meiN :post: karte hu.e hichkichaa rahaa hooN kyoN.k aap
> dekh hee rahe haiN k ab meree :posts: par Khaal Khaal log hee likhte
> haiN. yaa to voh is qaabil hee naheeN hote haiN (aur yeh ain mumkin
> hai) yaa phir voh vajh hai jis ke baare meiN sochnaa naheeN chaahtaa
> hooN. Khair, mazmoon mukammal ho jaae to phir faisila karooNgaa.
>
maiN aap se darKhaast karooN gaa k apnee posts kaa silsilaa jaaree
rakhiye. asl meN Internet par kuchh likhnaa, chaahe wo aik saada saa
form bharnaa hee kyoN na ho, log katraate haiN. wo sites jo kisee qism
kee "likhat paRhat" kaa mutaaliba kartee haiN, un par "traffic" bahut
kam reh jaataa hai. yahee haal shaayad ALUP kaa bhee hai. log paRhte
sab kuchh haiN lekin likhne se aise katraate haiN jaise koee afeemee
nahaane se! :))
lekin Khair, parwarish e loh o qalam karte rehnaa chaahiye:
itne sawaal dil meN haiN aur wo Khamosh dar
us dar se haT hee jaayeN ge, aise bhee ham naheeN
haiN saKhtee e safar se bahut tang, par Munir
ghar ko palaT hee jaaeN ge, aise bhee naheeN
aap jadeed Ghazal par zaroor likhiye. ye meraa bhee Khaasul Khaas
mauzoo' hai aur ummeed hai is behes meN maiN bhee kuchh "contribute"
kar sakooN gaa.
Sincerely,
Zafar
PS. aap ne fazooliyaat kaa zikr kiyaa, arz hai k "Zehr e Ishq" hee
naheeN balke kul 5 kitaaboN par "go ahead" milaa hai jin meN se 2
taba' zaad haiN aur baaqee kee tarteeb o tadween waGhera karnee hai.
Tejjit Singh Kalsi
> ps: yeh Niranjan Pidanekar, UVR, Kalsi, Afzal Khan vaGhaira saahebaan
> aaKHir kahaaN haiN? bhaa.ee aaiye, alup ko aap kee saKht zaroorat hai!
Janaab Sarwar Saahib, aadaab arz hai!
yaad karne kaa shukriya! is nihaayat dilchasp qist ke liye
mubaarakbaad qubool keejiye.
is qist meN mere liye ek Khaas dilchaspee ki baat yeh hai k baadshah
Babur ne faarsi meN bhi shaa'yari kee hai. mujhe to itnaa ma'aloom
thaa k us ne Baburnaama turki meN likhaa thaa,jiskaa faarsi tarjuma
Abd ar-Rahim Khan (Bayram Khan ka farzand) ne baadshah Akbar ke
zamaane meN kiyaa thaa.
Regards
T. S. Kalsi
UVR
>
> ps: yeh Niranjan Pidanekar, UVR, Kalsi, Afzal Khan vaGhaira saahebaan
> aaKHir kahaaN haiN? bhaa.ee aaiye, alup ko aap kee saKht zaroorat hai!
Sarwar sahib, aadaab! yaad aavaree kaa shukriyaa. maiN to,
janaab-e-mukarrami, yahiiN hooN, aur ALUP ki tamaam posts
paRh bhi rahaa hooN. bas, is beech yakaayak masroofiyat meiN
Khatarnaak izaafah ho gayaa, so kuchh kahne kaa mauqaa nahiN
mil rahaa hai.
aur phir yeh baat k mujh jaise kahne waale Khaamosh hi raheN
to behtar hai! :-)
-UVR.