On Thursday, May 6, 2021 at 2:24:18 PM UTC-5, Khalid Siddiqui wrote:
Khalid sahib,
aadaab,
I do not have any answers to your query, but I have a comment and a question.
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Comment:
> > 2. Lala Ram Rakha Barq
Just as you wrote in your original post, the name here is indeed 'Ram Rakkha', in the same vein as 'Allah Rakkha'.
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Question:
> > 12. Lala Madhuram Jauhar Farrukhabadi
There is one famous she'r associated with Madho Ram Jauhar. I have generally heard the first misra'a in a slightly different version than quoted on some internet sites, in particular Rekhta. Late Azhar sahib used to quote this she'r often, and I remember it like this:
ab i'tr bhi malo to muhabbat ki buu nahiiN
voh din hava hue k pasiina gulaab thaa
The slightly different version is:
ab i'tr bhi malo to takalluf ki buu kahaaN
voh din hava hue k pasiina gulaab thaa
Meter wise, both versions fit perfectly.
Will you please check with your friend Dr Maqbool and ask what is the correct version according to his hard copy sources?
Thank you.
______Zoya