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Zuhra

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Sep 27, 2009, 11:59:07 AM9/27/09
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sab ALUPers ko aadaab arz hai.

jaisa k iss thread ke unwaan se zaahir hai maiN yahaan par kuchh
shaa'iraat kaa kalaam pesh karne kaa iraadah rakhti hooN. aap bhii iss
thread meN kisi shaaira kaa kalaam jo aapko pasand ho post kar sakte
haiN - Ghazal, nazm, qata, she'r jo bhii aap chaaheN!

abhi do-ek din pehle Naseer Sahab ne ek guzashtah thread meN post kii
gaii nazm "kash-makash" ke liye ye link
http://groups.google.com.au/group/alt.language.urdu.poetry/browse_frm...
faraaham kiya thaa to iss nazm se mujhe Samina Raja ki ek Ghazal kaa
matla yaad aagaya, to chaliye aaj yehii Ghazal pesh karti hooN:

ab mire dehaan meN uss shaKhs ka chehraa bhii nahi
meN use bhool chukii hooN magar aisaa bhii nahi

roz holay se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai?
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhoNkaa bhii nahi

ghar banaaeN ge kabhi ham bhii kinare daryaa
aaj go ham ko mayassar koii qatra bhii nahi

aap kaa shehr hai yaa shehr-e-tamanna hai, yahaaN
aagae aur dam-e-waapsiiN rasta bhii nahi

woh agar rooth bhii jaae tu manaa looN gi use
itna payaraa hai wo jis se koii rishta bhi nahi

dil meN barsoN se samete hooN maiN gehraa saagar
aur bas meN mire haalaat kaa daryaa bhii nahi

Samina Raja
...............................


Regards,

Zuhra


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Naseer

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Sep 27, 2009, 4:01:48 PM9/27/09
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Zuhra Sahiba, aadaab.

qaari'iin kii KHaatir agar aap Samina Raja ke baare meN kuchh
ma'luumaat bhii pesh kar deN to achchii baat ho gii. agar ho sake to..

KHair-andesh,
Naseer

B.G.M.

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Sep 27, 2009, 4:04:52 PM9/27/09
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On Sep 27, 3:53 pm, "B.G.M." <b_manejw...@yahoo.com> wrote:

> "woh agar rooTh bhi jaaye tau manaa looN gi usay
> itna payaraa hai woh jis se ko`ii rishtah bhi nahiiN"
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Waa..h!
>
> ================================================

Leejiye, ab Haazir-e-Khidmat hai,

SheHnaaz “Noor” ki ik Ghazal,
(jo unn ke dil-kash tarannum meN, piChhle saal, AliGhaR alumni ke
saalanah mushaa`ire meN sun_ne kaa mauqaa milaa thaa)

Ghazal

muHabbat laaye ab sauGhaat ko`ii
badal de suurat-e-Haalaat ko`ii

ye kaisaa iKhtiyaar-e-zindagi hai
din apna hai, nah apni raat ko`ii

Ghubaar-aaluud subH-e-shahr-e-jaaN hai
safar meN qaafilah thaa raat ko`ii

maiN jo kuChh huuN, tiri hi zaat se huuN
miri apnii nahiiN hai zaat ko`ii

maiN baar-e-Gham uThaa saktii huuN tanhaa
mire shaane pe rakh de haat ko`ii

maiN ojhal ho gayii maaN ki nazar se
galee meN aa`ii jab baaraat ko`ii

zameen-e-dil baRii zarKhez thii, “Noor”
baras jaatii agar barsaat ko`ii


~Shehnaaz “Noor”

==================================================


Zuhra

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Sep 29, 2009, 9:41:51 PM9/29/09
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Zahra Nigah ek naam-war aur maqbool Pakistani shaaira haiN jin kaa
kalaam nehaayat pur-asr aur Khoobsoorat hota hai. aaj unki ek bohat
mash'hoor (aur maamta se bhar-poor) nazm pesh hai jo k ek nau-umr
Daakoo ke baare meN hai!


Daakoo

kal raat mira beTaa mire ghar
chehre pe manDhe Khaakee kapRa
bandooq uThaa’e aa ponhchaa

nau-umri ki surkhi se rachi
usski aankheN maiN jaan gaii
aur bachpan ke sandal se manDhaa
uss kaa chehra pehchaan gaii

wo aayaa thaa khud apne ghar
ghar ki cheezeN le jaane ko
ankahi, kahi manwaane ko

baatoN meN doodh ki Khushboo thi
jo kuchh bhi saint ke rakhkha thaa
maiN saaari cheezeN le aaii

ek laal-e-badaKhshaaN ki chiRyaa
sone kaa haathi chhooTa saa
chaandi ki ik nanhi taKhti
resham ki phool bhari Topi
atlas kaa naam likha juzdaan
juzdaan meN lipTa ek qur`an

par woh kaisaa deewaanaa thaa
kuchh toR gayaa, kuchh choR gayaa!

aur le bhi gayaa hai woh to kyaa
lohe ki bad-soorat gaaRi?
petrol ki boo bhi aaye gii
jis ke pehiye bhi rubber ke haiN
jo baat nahiN kar paa’e gii!

bachcha phir aakhir bachcha hai!

Zahra Nigah
.....................

Zuhra

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Sep 29, 2009, 9:54:13 PM9/29/09
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Samina Raja ek mash'hoor shaaira haiN Pakistan se. unke baare meN
Wikipedia link aap sab ke liye pesh hai:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samina_Raja

Naseer saahab, agar ab aap bhii Abul Inshaa ke baare meN, jin kaa
kalaam aap aajkal post kar rahe haiN, ALUPers ke liye thoRa-bohat
ma'luumaat pesh kar sakeN to nawaazish hogi :)
..................

BGM saahab,

bohat shukria Shehnaz Noor ki Ghazal share karne ke liye, ummeed hai
aap aaindah bhii iss thread meN shirkat karte raheN ge.

Zuhra

B.G.M.

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Sep 29, 2009, 10:54:03 PM9/29/09
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Noshi Gilani ki yeh musalsal Ghazal dekhiye.

Bilaa-jawaaz rakheN Khud ko be-qaraar bhi kyuuN
Jo tuu nahiiN hai, to phir tera intezaar bhi kyuuN

akelepan ka safar jab mira muqaddar hai
tau phir, ai wa`adah-shikan, teri reh-guzaar bhi kyuuN

usay gaNwaa ke raho ab Khizaa`oN ki zad meN
Jo woh nahiiN hai, to phir mausam-e-bahaar bhi kyuuN

agar bhulaaye hu`e us ko aik umr hu`ii
tau phir yeh aaj tabeeyet hai sogwaar bhi kyuuN

woh jin laboN peh yaqeenee wafaa mehek nah sakay
Phir un ke lams ki Khwaahish ho aik baar bhi kyuuN

Jab us ko shauq thaa rastoN ki dhool honay kaa
Palat ke dekhtaa jaataa thaa baar baar bhi kyuuN


~Noshi Gilani

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Naseer

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Sep 30, 2009, 4:38:44 PM9/30/09
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On Sep 27, 9:04 pm, "B.G.M." <b_manejw...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> On Sep 27, 3:53 pm, "B.G.M." <b_manejw...@yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> >    "woh agar rooTh bhi jaaye tau manaa looN gi usay
> >    itna payaraa hai woh jis se ko`ii  rishtah  bhi nahiiN"
>
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> > Waa..h!
>
> > ================================================
>
> Leejiye, ab Haazir-e-Khidmat hai,
>
> SheHnaaz “Noor” ki ik Ghazal,
> (jo unn ke dil-kash tarannum meN, piChhle saal, AliGhaR alumni ke
> saalanah mushaa`ire meN sun_ne kaa mauqaa milaa thaa)
>

> maiN ojhal ho gayii maaN ki nazar se


> galee meN aa`ii  jab  baaraat  ko`ii

bahut achchhaa shi'r hai.

Ghazal pesh karne par shukriyah qubuul kiijiye.

Naseer


> ==================================================

Naseer

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Sep 30, 2009, 4:44:12 PM9/30/09
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Zuhar Sahiba, aadaab.

bahut achchhii nazm pesh kii hai aap ne. shukriyah.

ek lafz kii samajh nahiiN aa'ii.."saint"??

Naseer

B.G.M.

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Sep 30, 2009, 7:40:31 PM9/30/09
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Ik Ghazal New York ki Dr. Sabiha Khatun "Saba" ki pesh kar rahaa
huuN.

Ummid hai aap ko pasand aayegi.

(Is ki Khaas kaafiyabandii qaabil-e-Ghaur hai)

Ghazal

Hayaat! tere / naye taqaaze, / hameN tau be-maut / maar deNge
zaraa ye qarz-e-/ jahaaN chukaa leN, / tau qarz-e-hastii / utaar deNge


milegi fursat / Gham-ejahaaN se, / tau unn ki zulfeN / saNvaar deNge
khizaaN rutoN se, / jo bach raheNge, / woh phuul ham un / pe vaar
deNge


jo waqt-e-rukhsat,/ qaraar-e-jaaN ki / dua`a se ham ko / navaazte ho
qaraar-e-jaaN! / uss dua`a pe ham bhi,/ tumhe, dua`a-e / -qaraar deNge


kahiiN havaaoN / ka ishtiaarah, / kahiiN kisii dard kaa ishaarah
sunaa hai woh ruu- / e-fikr-o-fann ko, / hamaare Gham se / nikhaar
deNge


kisii ke guldasta /-e-muhabbat se bas / yeh paiGhaam mun / salik thaa
yeh niim- vaa,Nar/gisii shaguufe,/ saleeka-e-intezaar deNge

yeh furqatoN ke / azaab mausam, / kahiiN tumhe be- / yaqiiN na kar deN
hameN tau jaanaaN! / ye hijr ke din / guzaarne haiN,/ guzaar deNge


samandaroN ke / safar se pehle, / wo qariya-e-jaaN / se ho ke guzre
hawaa-e-shab ko / payaam, ham bhi,/ ba naam-e-shahr-e / -nigaar deNge


'sabaa' ke paikar / ko, phir ko`ii zaKhm-/ -e-aarzuu se / sajaa gayaa
hai
chalo`, Ganiimat / hai, aur kuChh din,/ yeh gul, fareb-e- / -bahaar
deNge


~Dr. Sabiha 'sabaa'

=========================================================

UVR

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Sep 30, 2009, 8:16:45 PM9/30/09
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meraa Khayaal hai, Naseer saahib, k Zuhra saahiba ki muraad "seNtne"
se thi. seNt ke rakhnaa, ya'ani saNbhaal ke rakhna, bachaa ke/sameT
ke rakhna, wG.

-UVR.

Zuhra

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Oct 2, 2009, 12:40:02 PM10/2/09
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aaj Zahra Nigah kii ek aur nazm pesh karoN gii. ye maiN ne kuchh arsah
pehle Geo par kisi adabi show meN sunii thii aur ise likh liya thaa.
chooNke jaldi meN likha thaa to bohat mumkin hai mujh se kuchh alfaaz
adal-badal ho ga'e hoN. agar aapko kisi misre meN Ghalati nazar aa'e
to zaroor nishaan-dahi kijiye ga. shukria.

sunaa hai....

sunaa hai jangaloN kaa bhii koii dastoor hotaa hai
sunaa hai sher kaa jab pet bhar jaae
to woh hamlah nahi karta
darkhtoN kii ghanii chhaoN meN jaa kar let jaataa hai

hawaa ke tez jhonke jab daraKhtoN ko hilaate haiN
to mainaa apne bachche chhoR kar
kavve ke anddoN ko paroN se thaam leti hai

sunaa hai ghoNsle se koii bachcha gir paRe to
saaaraa jungle jaag jaataa hai

sunaa hai jab kisi naddi ke paani meN
ba’e ke ghoNsle kaa gandamii saayaa laraztaa hai
to naddi ki ro-pehli machhliyaaN usko paRosii maan leti haiN

koii tofaan aa jaa’e
koii pul toot jaa’e
to kisi lakRi ke taKhte par
gulehri, saanp, bakri aur cheetah, saath hote haiN
sunaa hai jangaloN kaa bhii koii dastoor hota hai!

Khuda-wandah, jaleel o mot’abr, daanaa o beena, munsaf o akbar
mire iss shehr meN
ab jangaloN hii kaa koii qanoon naafiz kar!

Zahra Nigah
..........................................

Zuhra

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Oct 2, 2009, 12:44:45 PM10/2/09
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shukria BGM saahab Ghazals ke liye. aur Noshi Gilani kii Ghazal ke
dosre she'r se Ghaalib kaa ek she'r yaad aaya, pesh karti hooN:

wafaa kesi, kahaN ka ishq, jab sar phoRnaa Thehraa
to phir ae saNgdil, teraa hii sang-e-aastaaN kyoN ho?

Zuhra

Naseer

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Oct 2, 2009, 1:15:52 PM10/2/09
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aamiin! laa-qaanuuniyat se jangal kaa qaanuun bihtar hai. bahut
achchii nazm pesh kii hai aap ne.

Naseer

B.G.M.

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Oct 2, 2009, 3:05:06 PM10/2/09
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eik deegar meHfil se churaaya hu`a yeh NaGheenah,
ummiid hai aap ko pasand aayega!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

tashngii merii taqdeer hai, meraa baadal salaamat rahe!
ko`ii saayaa nahiiN hai to kyaa, sar pe aanchal salaamat rahe!

tere Gham, zindgaanii ke Gham, apne Gham aur zamaane ke Gham!
itne aansuu hoN jab aankh meN, kaise kaajal salaamat rahe?!

be gharoN kaa sahaara hai woh, raat bhar ko hamaara hai woh,
hai parindoN ke lab peh dua'a, apnaa peepal salaamat rahe!

us ne KhushiyaaN bhii dii haiN mujhe, bhiigii aankhoN ka shikvah
nahiiN!
mere aansuu salaamat raheN meraa paagal salaamat rahe!!

dasht-e-Gham meN sulagte rahe, phir bhi 'NikHat' mehakte rahe!
saaNp daaman se lipTe raheN, shaaKh-e-sandal salaamat rahe!!


~Naseem NikHat

=========================================================

(coutesy;- Zoya)

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Zoya

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Oct 4, 2009, 9:13:36 AM10/4/09
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On Oct 2, 11:40 am, Zuhra <venus_...@live.com> wrote:

> aaj Zahra Nigah kii ek aur nazm pesh karoN gii.

> Zuhra

Zuhra jii,

aap kii post kii huii Zahra Nigah kii donoN nazmeN mere liye nayi
haiN, aur mujhe bahut pasand aayi haiN. bahut bahut shukriyah. mere
paas Zahra Nigah kaa koii bhii sh'eri majmua nahiiN hai, aur ek arse
se soch rahii huuN k kahiiN se mangvaauuN. jab tak aisaa hotaa hai,
ummiidd kartii huuN k aap in kaa kuCc aur kalaam bhii yahaaN pesh
kareN gi.

shukriyah.

__Zoya

B.G.M.

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Oct 4, 2009, 1:15:12 PM10/4/09
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Leejiye, Zehra Nigah ki eik Ghazal mere paas thii, jo pesh kar rahaa
huuN.

(Inn kaa kehne kaa andaaz kuChh kuChh Parveen Shaakir se milta hai?
Yaa yeh sirf mera hi Khayaal hai!)

Ghazal

biChhaRnaa thaa, bahot pehle biChhaRte
yeh rastaa aaKhirii thaa, saath chalte

milay thay raah meN apne-paraaye
kaheeN rukte, kisii se baat karte

ab aankheN Khushk-saali kaa nishaaN haiN
yeh baadal raat din kab tak baraste

badalte mausam`oN meN khiRkiy`oN se
bahot logoN ko dekhaa saath chalte

dhuwaaN hai roz-o shab, dam ghuT rahaa hai
tum aa jaate tau meHr-o maH nikalte

nah milte tum tau vehshat meN guzartii
dar-o deewaar ke phande nah paRte

akele meN Ghazal kehne ko keh lee
mua`anii jab woh sunte , tab nikalte


~Zahra Nigah

=======================================================


B.G.M.

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Oct 5, 2009, 12:36:37 PM10/5/09
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Ab,hamaare `eilaaqe ki ik maruuf shaa`iraa, MoHtarmaa Mona Shahaab ki
ik Ghazal dekhiye.

MaiN ne yeh Ghazal unn ke dil-kash tarnnum meN sunii tau Bahot pasand
aayii..


Ghazal


mujhe tan se ziyaada, uss ka mann achchhaa lgaa thaa
aur uss ki shakhsiyat kaa baaNkpan achchhaa lagaa thaa

Gharaz mujh ko nahiin thii zaahirii surat se uss ki
mujhe tau sirf andaaz-e-suKhan achchhaa lagaa thaa

wo siidhii baat bhi kartaa thaa aksar shaa`irii meN
mujhe uss kaa yehii deevaanapan achchhaa lagaa thaa

zamaanaa keh rahaa thaa uss ke baare meN fasaane
magar mujh ko tau uss kaa har chalan achchhaa lagaa thaa

dhanak ke rang hi bhaate haiN aksar laRkiyoN ko
mujhe tau eik saadaa pairhan achchhaa lagaa thaa

bane alfaaz aNgaare tau ab hairaan huuN maiN
k uss lehje kaa mujh ko dheemaapan achchhaa lagaa thaa

mire baaloN ki chaaNdii se gurezaaN aaj hai wo
jise kal mera chaaNdii saa badan achchhaa lagaa thaa

wo jis dam uss ne mujh se khailne ko chaaNd maaNgaa
mujhe bachche ka apne, bholpan achchhaa lagaa thaa

pariindaa laut ke vaapas qafas meN aa gayaa hai
jise phailaa huvaa neelaa gagan achchhaa lagaa thaa

~Mona Shahaab (Maryland, U.S.A)

[Unn ki kitaab ~Sadaa jab lauT ke aayii~ se]

==========================================================


Zuhra

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Oct 8, 2009, 10:40:33 AM10/8/09
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On Oct 4, 9:13 am, Zoya <zbi...@yahoo.com> wrote:

> Zuhra jii,
>
> aap kii post kii huii Zahra Nigah kii donoN nazmeN mere liye nayi
> haiN, aur mujhe bahut pasand aayi haiN. bahut bahut shukriyah. mere
> paas Zahra Nigah kaa koii bhii sh'eri majmua nahiiN hai, aur ek arse
> se soch rahii huuN k kahiiN se mangvaauuN. jab tak aisaa hotaa hai,
> ummiidd kartii huuN k aap in kaa kuCc aur kalaam bhii yahaaN pesh
> kareN gi.

Actually, mere paas bhi Zahra Nigah ki koi kitaab nahi hai. bas thoRa
bohat unheN paRha yaa sunaa hai, magar jab bhii unkaa kalaam nazar se
guzra hai, pasand aayaa hai. mere paas unki jo chand nazmeN aur
GhazaleN haiN wo zaroor aapke liye post karooN gi. unke baare meN ek
link bhii pesh kar rahi hooN:

http://65.175.69.196/wps/wcm/connect/dawn-content-library/dawn/in-paper-magazine/books-and-authors/ink-paper-think#
....................................

BGM saahab,

ek baar phir aapka shukria iss thread/mauzu meN dilchaspi lene ke liye
aur Mona Shahaab aur Sabiha Sabaa ke kalaam se muta'araf karwaane ke
liy bhii.

Zuhra
...........................

aur ab zahra Nigah ki nazm:

dosti kaa samandar

dosti kaa ik samandar
an-ginat saahil wafaa ke
apne siine meN chhupaa’e
jaane kab se beh rahaa thaa
daf'atan
ik mauj ubhri
motioN k roop meN
dhalte hue alfaaz, jumle
Khud-ba-Khud dil se uThe
lab tak ga’e
dil ka har ik bojh
lafzoN ne uThaayaa!
fikr ka har lamha
ik jumle se Takraayaa
bikhar k kho gayaa
Gham ka rezah rezah
kuch baatoN ki ro meN beh gaya.........

Zahra Nigah

B.G.M.

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Oct 8, 2009, 12:12:47 PM10/8/09
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On Oct 8, 10:40 am, Zuhra <venus_...@live.com> wrote:
> On Oct 4, 9:13 am, Zoya <zbi...@yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> > Zuhra jii,
>
> > aap kii post kii huii Zahra Nigah kii donoN nazmeN mere liye nayi
> > haiN, aur mujhe bahut pasand aayi haiN. bahut bahut shukriyah. mere
> > paas Zahra Nigah kaa koii bhii sh'eri majmua nahiiN hai, aur ek arse
> > se soch rahii huuN k kahiiN se mangvaauuN. jab tak aisaa hotaa hai,
> > ummiidd kartii huuN k aap in kaa kuCc aur kalaam bhii yahaaN pesh
> > kareN gi.
>
> Actually, mere paas bhi Zahra Nigah ki koi kitaab nahi hai. bas thoRa
> bohat unheN paRha yaa sunaa hai, magar jab bhii unkaa kalaam nazar se
> guzra hai, pasand aayaa hai. mere paas unki jo chand nazmeN aur
> GhazaleN haiN wo zaroor aapke liye post karooN gi. unke baare meN ek
> link bhii pesh kar rahi hooN:
>
> http://65.175.69.196/wps/wcm/connect/dawn-content-library/dawn/in-pap...

Leejiye, ik aur Ghazal, Zahra Nigaah ki, abhi abhi haath lagii hai,
pesh-e-Khidmat hai.

Ik deegar mehfil meN, 2005 meN Chhapii thii,(Courtesy: Balvinder
Singh)

Ghazal

Chhalak rahee hai mai-e-naab, tishngee ke liye
saNvar rahee hai tiri bazm, barhamee ke liye

naheeN-naheeN, hameiN ab teri just-joo bhi naheeN
tujhe bhi bhuul gaye ham, tiri Khushee ke liye

jahaan-e-nau ka tasavvur, Hayaat-e-nau ka Khayaal
baRe fareb diye tum ne bandagee ke liye

kahaaN ke ishq-o-muHabbat, kidhar ke hijr-o-visaal
abhee to log taraste haiN zindagee ke liye

jo zulmatoN meN hovaidaa ho qalb-e-insaaN se
ziyaa-navaaz woh sholaa hai teergii ke liye

nah manziloN ki tamannaa, nah rah-guzar ki talaash
nah jaane kis peh bharosaa hai rahbaree ke liye

jo kar rahe haiN pas-e-pardah, dushmanee ab-tak
baRe Khuluus se aaye thay dostee ke liye


~Zahra Nigah

==========================================================

Naseer

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Oct 24, 2009, 5:41:22 PM10/24/09
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tum ne to kah diyaa kih muHabbat nahiiN milii
mujh ko to yih bhii kahne kii muhlat nahiiN milii

niiNdoN ke des jaate ko'ii KHvaab dekhte
lekin diyaa jalaane se fursat nahiiN milii

tujh ko to KHair shahr ke logoN kaa KHauf thaa
awr mujh ko apne ghar se ijaazat nahiiN milii

phir iKHtilaaf-i-raae kii suurat nikal paRii
apnii yahaaN kisii se 'aadat nahiiN milii

be-zaar yuuN hu'e kih tere 'ahad meN hameN
sab kuchh milaa sukuun kii daulat nahiiN milii


Noshi Gilani
............................................................................

Naseer

B.G.M.

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Oct 24, 2009, 7:56:18 PM10/24/09
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munsifoN! saliiboN par faisale nahiiN hote.

munsifoN! saliiboN par faisale nahiiN hote
be-sabab baGhaavat ke saanihe nahiiN hote

jhuuTh aur sadaaqat ki jang to azal se hai
phir bhii sach pe jeene ke Hausale nahiiN hote

soach kar judaa honaa, phir k mil na paayeNge
kyuuN k is zamaane meN mo`jeze nahiiN hote

jo bhii thay gile-shikave, duur kar ke jaanaa thaa
kam se kam biChhaRane par, dil bure nahiiN hote

chaand se kahaa ham ne, tum hii raat bhar jaago
ham se uss ki yaadoN meN rat_jage nahiiN hote


~Zakia "Ghazal"

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Naseer

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Oct 25, 2009, 5:36:34 AM10/25/09
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B.G.M Sahib, salaam 'arz hai.

Thank you for presenting Zakia Ghazal's Ghazal. A couple of
corrections are necessary.

munsifo!

jhuuT

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Naseer

B.G.M.

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Oct 27, 2009, 9:10:54 PM10/27/09
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Najmah Ansar "Najmah" saahibaa ne mujhe apni ik kitaab U.K. se bhejii
thii.

KuChh din hu`e unn ki eik Ghazal yahaaN pesh karnaa chaahtaa thaa,
magar Urdu rasm-ul-Khat ki jaankaari mire paas itni achChhii nahiiN
hai, is liye aaj kuChh koshish kar ke yahaaN likh rahaa huuN. Ummid
kartaa huuN aap aGhlaat ki nishaandihi kar deNge.

Ghazal

kis qadar gumraah thay ham kyaa nah kyaa kehte rahe
muddatoN tak eik pat`thar ko Khuda kehte rahe

ham tujhe DhuunDaa kiye, har raah par har mo`R par
tuu nah mil paayega, dil ko baarhaa kehte rahe

vaa-ye naa kaamii, k woh ik shakhs bhi meHram nah thaa
jis ko ab tak zindagi kaa aasraa kehte rahe

Duubne waalaa tau kosoN duur jaa pahuNchaa magar
ahl-e-saaHil der tak Haafiz Khuda kehte rahe

woh tau unn kaa zarf thaa, aur yeh hamaaraa Hausalah
zulm woh karte rahe, ham marHabaa kehte rahe

dekh leN woh aasmaaN ki qahr aaluudah-nazar
aah ko meri jo aah-e-naarasaa kehte rahe

dard-o-Gham, ranj-o-alam, aah-o fuGhaaN thay mere saath
aap phir kaise mujhe tanhaa, bhalaa, kehte rahe?

bijliyaaN jo aayiiN thiiN chilman jalaane ke liye
unn ko bhi ham zer-e-daamaaN kaa diya kehte rahe

yuuN gaye, muR kar nah dekhaa, raahi-e-mulk-e-`adam!
dekhiye! mat jaay`iiye!! ham barmalaa kehte rahe

zindagi meN ham ne paiham iss qadar kaaye fareb
har qadam par rahzanoN ko rahnumaa kehte rahe

sun_ne waale tau nah jaane kaun se aalam meN thay
Najmah! Apne she`r par ham marHabaa kehte rahe

~Najmah Ansar “Najmah” (wesr Yorkshire, U.K.)

[ unn ki kitaab, “Zakhm-e-aHsaas” se]

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Zuhra

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Nov 5, 2009, 12:54:10 PM11/5/09
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On Oct 27, 8:10 pm, "B.G.M." <b_manejw...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> Najmah Ansar "Najmah" saahibaa ne mujhe apni ik kitaab U.K. se bhejii
> thii.
>
> KuChh din hu`e unn ki eik Ghazal yahaaN pesh karnaa chaahtaa thaa,
> magar Urdu rasm-ul-Khat ki jaankaari mire paas itni achChhii nahiiN
> hai, is liye aaj kuChh koshish kar ke yahaaN likh rahaa huuN. Ummid
> kartaa huuN aap aGhlaat ki nishaandihi kar deNge.
>
> Ghazal
>
> kis qadar gumraah thay ham kyaa nah kyaa kehte rahe
> muddatoN tak eik pat`thar ko Khuda kehte rahe
>
> ham tujhe DhuunDaa kiye, har raah par har mo`R par
> tuu nah mil paayega, dil ko baarhaa kehte rahe

BGM saahab, Ghazal pesh karne ke liye bohat shukria. vaise, sher # 2
meN lafz DhooNDne se mujhe Majeed Amjad kaa ek she'r yaad aayaa:

tum phir na aa sako ge bataanaa to thaa mujhe
tum dooor jaa ke bas gae, maiN DhooNDtaa phiraa

aur ab Zehra Nigah ki ek muKhtasar nazm:

mujhe fursat hii fursat hai

mujhe fursat hii fursat hai
sawere jald uThnaa hai
na shab ko der se sonaa
kahiiN baahar nahiiN jaanaa
kisii se bhii nahiiN milna
na koii fikr laahaq hai
na koii yaad baaqi hai

magar ye aaKhri misra
zaraa saa jhooT lagta hai!

Zehra Nigah
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B.G.M.

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Nov 5, 2009, 2:22:23 PM11/5/09
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On Nov 5, 12:54 pm, Zuhra <venus_...@live.com> wrote:


> BGM saahab, Ghazal pesh karne ke liye bohat shukria. vaise, sher # 2
> meN lafz DhooNDne se mujhe Majeed Amjad kaa ek she'r yaad aayaa:
>
> tum phir na aa sako ge bataanaa to thaa mujhe
> tum dooor jaa ke bas gae, maiN DhooNDtaa phiraa

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Shukriya.

ab leejiye is laRii men ik aur izaafah.

Ghazal

aHsaas dil meN, jazboN meN shiddat usii ki hai
har shay meN noor hai ye inaayat usii ki hai

daanishwaraN-e-sheher meN meri bisaat kyaa
mujh meN nihaaN jo hai, wo zaHaanat usii ki hai

ye lafz- lafz uss ke haiN, sab fann usii kaa hai
meri ye shaa`iirii bhi amaanat usii ki hai

yuuN to Haseen log bhi meHfil meN haiN, magar
chehraa usii kaa hai, qad-o-qaamat usii ki hai

wo bhi to lauT aataa hai har ik safar ke b`aad
maiN kyaa karooN, mujhe bhi to aadat usii ki hai

maiN ik Darii si, sehmi si, laRki thii aam sii
ye Hauslah usii kaa hai, himmat usii ki hai


- Dr. Naseem Nikhat
-----------------------------------------(courtesy: Balvinder Singh)

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Zuhra

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Nov 13, 2009, 11:56:04 AM11/13/09
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Samjhota

mulaaim, garm, samjhote ki chaadar
yeh chaadar maiN ne barsoN meN buni hai
kahiiN bhi sach ke gul-booTe nahiiN haiN
kisi bhi jhooT ka TaaNka nahiN hai

isi se maiN bhi tan Dhak looNgi apna
isi se tum bhi aasooda raho ge
na Khush hoge , na pazhmurdah rahoge

isi ko taan kar ban jaaye gaa ghar
bichhaa leN ge to khil uThThe gaa aangan
uThaa leN ge to gir jaaye gi chilman

Zehra Nigah
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Zuhra

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Nov 13, 2009, 12:06:07 PM11/13/09
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Kashf

mujhe mehsoos hota hai
jahaaN maiN aaNkh jhapkooN gi
wahiiN par haadesa hoga

Noshi gilani
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