Mazaahiya Shayeri
Khursheed Ahmed
Haal hi maiN Pakistan ke maqbool shaayir, Anwar Masood Saheb ka kalaam
Toronto ke ek mushaere maiN suna. Un ki kitab "Qata Kalaami" se kuch
ash'aar aap ki khidmat maiN pesh karta hooN - ummeed hai ke pasand aayeN
ge.
Khursheed
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Ustaad ne shaagird se ek roz yeh poocha
hai juma-e-mubaarik ke fazeelat ka tujhe ilm?
kehne lagaa shaagird ke maaloom hai mujh ko
'release' is roz to hoti hai nayee film
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lutf-e-nazzara hai aye dost isi ke dam se
yeh na ho paas to raunaq-e-duniya kiya hai
teri aankheN bhi kahaan mujh ko dikhaayee deteeN
meri aynuk ke siva duniya maiN rakhkha kiya hai
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apni zauja se kaha ek maulvi ne, Nek Bakht,
teri turbat pe likheN tehreer kis mafhoom ki?
ahliya boli ibaarat sub se mauzooN hai yehi
dafn hai bewa yahaN per maulvi marhoom ki
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guzra hooN uss gali se to phir yaad aa gaya
us ka woh iltafaat, ajab iltafaat tha
rangeen ho gaya tha bohat hi muaamla
phenka jo us ne phool to gamla bhi saath tha
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Khursheed Ahmed
> BahoT mehrbaani aap ki ...ALUP ki is sanjida /khaamosh mehfil meiN aap
> ne ye halka phulka mazaahiya rang jo daal diya .
>
> "Qata Kalaami" kitab se mazeed mazaahiya ash'aar ka ALUP par zaroor
> intezaar rahe gaa .
Bohat bohat shukriya, Abida Saheba. To lijiye, kuch aur "qata kalami"
haazir hai, Anwar Masood saheb ki kitab s:
"Aye Barq-e-rau"
Pankay ki ruki nabz chalane ke liye aa
kamre ka bujha bulb jalane ke liye aa
tamheed judayee hai agar che tera milna
"aa phir se mujhe ChoR ke jaane ke liye aa"
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Deedni
Bohat nahiN hai nayee tarz-e-perahan se gila
mujhe to sirf is se faqat ek hi shikayat hai
button wahaaN hai zaroorat nahiN button ki jahaN
wahaN nahiN hai jahaN per baRi zaroorat hai
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Mera kiya?
Aap rahiye shauq se mekay maiN jaa kar chand roz
aur in bachchoN ke choR aata hooN maiN nanhiyaal maiN
mere baaray maiN na hona jaan-e-man tashweesh mand
maiN chalaa jaaooN ga kuch din ke liye susral maiN
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ba-nam yaraN
mere ghar ke saamne hai jo saRak kahaN bane gi
koi kub siyaah marham se bhare ga is ke ghaao
mere dostoN ye misra tumhaiN likh raha hooN jal kar
"inheeN paththroN see chal kar agar aa sako to aao"
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Kuch kahaN sub
ek ghubaristaan barpa ker gayee haiN motoraiN
gard ki majeN uTheeN aur ek toofaaN ho gayeeN
rah-e-ro jitne thay sub aankhoN se ojhal ho gaye
"khaak maiN kiya soorataiN hoN gi ke pinhaaN ho gayeeN"
Ummeed hai ke pasaNd aay hoN ge...
Khursheed
A Cassam
Wah! Kya khoob likhte haiN Anwar Masood Saheb bhi. PaRh kar bahoT hi
lutf aaya . Har sher mazedaar aur qabil-e-tareef hai.
Umeed hai aap aise maze maze ke aur bhi kalaam is ALUP ki mehfil mieN,
(bina farmaaish ke hi ) waqtan fa-waqtan post karte raheN ge.
Balke jab tak "qata kalami" ke tamaam kalaam na sunaa chukeN ...har ghiz
likhna maTh chhoriye gaa!
Peshgi shukriya qabool keejiye .
Abida Sultana
Arshad
Khaas taur se yeh sher paRh kar
Pankay ki ruki nabz chalaane ke liye aa
Kamre ka bujha bulb jalaane ke liye aa
Is se mujhe naacheez ke chand sher yaad aa gaye. Arz karne ki jura'at
kar raha hoon, Faraz saheb se Ma'azrat ke saath.
Khaarish hi sahi mujh ko khujane ke liye aa
Is daad ki aatish ko bujhane ke liye aa
Is ghar men safaai ki zaroorat hai bahut ab
tu ek dafaa jhaaRu lagaane ke liye aa
(I am not a sexist, honest! )
bacche' nahin bhoole hain tujhe aaj talak bhi
tu mujh ko nahin un ko manane ke liye aa
arsay se hai bhooka yeh pappu bechaara
tu aaj ise doodh pilane ke liye aa
kucch to mere ghar baar ki izzat ka bharam rakh
too aaj faqat sab ko dikhane ke liye aa.
comments are quite welcome
Khadim
Arshad
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karac...@my-deja.com
Arshad <arsha...@my-deja.com> wrote:
> > Wah wah! bahut khoob. Shukriya khursheed sahib.
> Khaas taur se yeh sher paRh kar
>
> Pankay ki ruki nabz chalaane ke liye aa
> Kamre ka bujha bulb jalaane ke liye aa
>
> Is se mujhe naacheez ke chand sher yaad aa gaye. Arz karne ki jura'at
> kar raha hoon, Faraz saheb se Ma'azrat ke saath.
>
> Khaarish hi sahi mujh ko khujane ke liye aa
> Is daad ki aatish ko bujhane ke liye aa
>
> Is ghar men safaai ki zaroorat hai bahut ab
> tu ek dafaa jhaaRu lagaane ke liye aa
> (I am not a sexist, honest! )
>
> bacche' nahin bhoole hain tujhe aaj talak bhi
> tu mujh ko nahin un ko manane ke liye aa
>
> arsay se hai bhooka yeh pappu bechaara
> tu aaj ise doodh pilane ke liye aa
>
> kucch to mere ghar baar ki izzat ka bharam rakh
> too aaj faqat sab ko dikhane ke liye aa.
>
> comments are quite welcome
>
> Khadim
> Arshad
>
Arshad Saheb,
How utterly disgusting!
Suggest you light a bonfire in your backyard this weekend and let all
similar work/kalaams of yours go up in flames.
Ms. Karachiite
Khursheed Ahmed
> Arshad Saheb,
>
> How utterly disgusting!
>
> Suggest you light a bonfire in your backyard this weekend and let all
> similar work/kalaams of yours go up in flames.
>
> Ms. Karachiite
Arshad Saheb:
Please don't be discouraged. You have a unique talent of writing
hilarious poetry. Not everyone will appreciate it, but that's their loss.
You made it amply clear that what you wrote was in good humour and meant
to offend anyone.
Khursheed
Arshad
100...@fhs.csu.McMaster.CA>,
Khursheed Ahmed <ah...@fhs.csu.McMaster.CA> wrote:
> On Fri, 1 Oct 1999 karac...@my-deja.com wrote:
>
> > Arshad Saheb,
> >
> > How utterly disgusting!
> >
> > Suggest you light a bonfire in your backyard this weekend and let
all
> > similar work/kalaams of yours go up in flames.
> >
> > Ms. Karachiite
>
Khursheed saheb
Thank you for your encouragement in this matter. You are right. Not
everyone is blessed with a sense of humour. Those of us who are should
be thankful specially on this Thanksgiving Weekend.
I would like to quote the great FAIZ saheb hoping no one will possibly
be offended by him.
Woh baat jis ka fasaane men koi zikr na tha
Woh baat un ko bahut nagawaar guzri hai
Happy Thanksgiving
Khadim
Arshad
> Arshad Saheb:
>
> Please don't be discouraged. You have a unique talent of writing
> hilarious poetry. Not everyone will appreciate it, but that's their
loss.
> You made it amply clear that what you wrote was in good humour and
meant
> to offend anyone.
>
> Khursheed
>
karac...@my-deja.com
Very sorry ...I failed to appreciate your excellent sense of humour and
in doing so , caused myself so much grief at being labelled a "loser"!
Sob! Sob!
Not to worry though, wasn't your poem. Please do keep writing.
Do not be discouraged ...was just me...a woman..hating with passion
this sweeping/mopping floor business!
But you sure did sound so "charmingly foolish" with your additional
comments.
Am totally amazed at your insensitiveness to gender related issues!
And no remorse either!
No more comments please "case closed" ......know why??
I'll tell you why ..you better believe this...a woman must always have
the last word. If not, the next word you may utter, might just serve as
the cause of a new argument for me!
See ...what a "can of worms" you opened here!!!!
Take Care!
May the Good Lord Bless you now and always!
Ms. Karachiite
In article <7tomsv$5aa$1...@nnrp1.deja.com>,
rajkp...@my-deja.com
karac...@my-deja.com wrote:
Dear Ms. Karachiite:
I have been following this thread with both interest and dismay.
I do realize the source (in Arshad Sahib's kalaam) that upset you; I
wish it weren't there in so many words. But I must say that your
reaction too was rather swift and your response rather harsh --- in
fact, it was at total variance with the friendliness that generally
pervades this forum.
In any case, it seems wise to forget about the whole thing and get back
to business. I earnestly wish and hope that both you and Arshad Sahib
will continue to make contributions to this forum in the true spirit of
the forum.
In a LIGHTER vein, let me take an issue with you!
It is quite clear from your posts that you are against discrimination,
especially the one based on gender. It follows that you believe in the
true equality of genders. If so, then how can you justify the following?
> No more comments please "case closed" ......know why??
> I'll tell you why ..you better believe this...a woman must always have
> the last word. If not, the next word you may utter, might just serve
> as the cause of a new argument for me!
Now, tell me this:
why, in an argument, can't a man have the last word? :-))
khair-andesh, Raj Kumar