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Amir khusro's kalam....request for translation
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vijaydeep
Jun 14, 2014, 3:35:17 PM6/14/14
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the qawwals sang it a nizamudin dargah.....i was hooked....perhaps the ee sounding radif makes it particularly sweet....if only some kind soul can translate for me...i would be eternally grateful.....since a complete translation would be tedious....i have marked in capitals...the incomprehensible lines
Aamadey bey qatl-e-mann, en shokh sitamgari
LIN TURFA TAMASHA BI, NA TARDA GUNAHGARI
Gar nam-o-nishan-e-mann,PUR SANG BE GO QASID
Awara-o-majnoon ne, rusva sar-e-bazari
Ae isiye bimara, dar hijr-e-ranj o ram
Shayad na khabardari, az halat-e-bimari
Khwahi ke shifa baashad, beemar-e-mohbbat ra
GAR JURA KHUDA RAZE, az sharbat-e-deedare
Dar lazat-e-deedar ash, khusrau che to a guftam
SAR DADAM UJA DADAM, na deeda rukh-e-yaare
please dont bother with with poetic translation...all i need is a simple explanation.....shall be very grateful if you take five minutes...to help me out
----bohot shukria
the qawwals sang it a nizamudin dargah.....i was hooked....perhaps the ee sounding radif makes it particularly sweet....if only some kind soul can translate for me...i would be eternally grateful.....since a complete translation would be tedious....i have marked in capitals...the incomprehensible lines
Aamadey bey qatl-e-mann, en shokh sitamgari
LIN TURFA TAMASHA BI, NA TARDA GUNAHGARI
Gar nam-o-nishan-e-mann,PUR SANG BE GO QASID
Awara-o-majnoon ne, rusva sar-e-bazari
Ae isiye bimara, dar hijr-e-ranj o ram
Shayad na khabardari, az halat-e-bimari
Khwahi ke shifa baashad, beemar-e-mohbbat ra
GAR JURA KHUDA RAZE, az sharbat-e-deedare
Dar lazat-e-deedar ash, khusrau che to a guftam
SAR DADAM UJA DADAM, na deeda rukh-e-yaare
please dont bother with with poetic translation...all i need is a simple explanation.....shall be very grateful if you take five minutes...to help me out
----bohot shukria
Naseer
Jun 16, 2014, 10:36:05 AM6/16/14
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aap ne yih nahiiN farmaayaa kih aap ko kis zabaan meN tarjumah chaahiye! xair, merii Haqiir koshish Urdu meN hai. maiN ba-xuubii jaantaa huuN kih mere Farsi matn (text) meN GhalatiyaaN haiN. is kaa yih matlab hu'aa kih Urdu meN bhii GhaltiyaaN hoN gii.
aamaadah ba-qatl-i-man aaN shox-sitamgaare
iiN turafah-tamaashaa biiN naa-kardah gunahgaare
taiyyaar to hai mere qatl ko vuh shox sitam-gaar
hai yih 'ajiib tamaashah,par nahiiN maiN gunahgaar
gar naam-o-nishaan-i-man pursand, bigo qaasid
aavaaraa-o-majnuune, rusvaa sar-i-baazaare
puuchheN jo meraa naam-o-nishaaN, kah de ai qaasid
ek paagal aavaarah hai aur rusvaa hai sar-i-baazar
ai 'iisii-i-biimaaraaN dar hijr-i-tu ranjuuram
shaayad nah xabar daarii az Haalat-i-biimaare
ai biimaaroN ke masiiHaa, dukhii huuN tere hijr meN
shaayad tuu nahiiN jaane, kyaa hai Haalat-i-biimaar
xvaahii ki shifaa baashad, biimaar-i-muHabbat raa
yak jur'ah xudaa raa dih, az sharbat-i-diidaare
to chaahtaa hai kih muHabbat ke biimar ko shifaa mile?
de phir ik ghuuNT xudaa ke vaaste, az sharbat-i-diidar
dar lazzat-i-diidaarash Khusrau chih tavaaN guftan
sar daadam-o-jaaN daadam, naa-diidah rux-i-yaare
Khusrau us ke diidaar kii lazzat meN kyaa kahuuN
sar diyaa, jaan dii par dekhaa nahiiN rux-i-yaar
"A kind soul" :-)
vijaydeep
Jun 17, 2014, 3:22:02 AM6/17/14
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Naseer sahab
kitna khoob tarjuma pesh kiya aap ne....Inayat!....maazratkha hain ki itnee kharab transliteration humne post karee...(misal taur par-'pursand' ko pur sang likha...aur 'hijr e to' ko faqat hijr e ranj o ram'....dar asl hume internet se copy paste kiya tha.....is ke bawajood aap ne....kuch waqt nikal kar humaree madat kare....aap yakeenan ek 'kind soul' hain!
bas ek aur sawal.....maqte me 'tavaaN' kaise istemal kiya gaya hai?....gar 'chih' ka matlab hai 'kya'(what)..
kya iske maani kuch yoon hai
uske deedar ki lazzat bayan karne ke liye ab kya taqat bachee hai?
sar diya jaan dee.....lekin rukh e yaar na dikha
bohot shukria!
vijay deep
kitna khoob tarjuma pesh kiya aap ne....Inayat!....maazratkha hain ki itnee kharab transliteration humne post karee...(misal taur par-'pursand' ko pur sang likha...aur 'hijr e to' ko faqat hijr e ranj o ram'....dar asl hume internet se copy paste kiya tha.....is ke bawajood aap ne....kuch waqt nikal kar humaree madat kare....aap yakeenan ek 'kind soul' hain!
bas ek aur sawal.....maqte me 'tavaaN' kaise istemal kiya gaya hai?....gar 'chih' ka matlab hai 'kya'(what)..
kya iske maani kuch yoon hai
uske deedar ki lazzat bayan karne ke liye ab kya taqat bachee hai?
sar diya jaan dee.....lekin rukh e yaar na dikha
bohot shukria!
vijay deep
Naseer
Jun 20, 2014, 4:46:32 PM6/20/14
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dar lazzat-i-diidaarash Khusrau chih tavaaN guftan
sar daadam-o-jaaN daadam, naa-diidah rux-i-yaare
Naseer
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Jun 17, 2017, 5:13:39 AM6/17/17
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Assalamuallaikum dosto mujhe aap HAZRAT aamir khusroo rehmatullahalai k kalam o ki kitab urdu tarjume k saath chahiye uska naam or dasteb ho payegi mujhe bataiye aap logo ki mehrbaani hogi allahhafiz
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