reKhte ke tumheeN ustaad naheeN ho, Ghaalib
kahte haiN agle zamaane meN koi Meer bhi thaa
I only know Hindi and always thought this sher had "tum hee". Wanted
to know the difference between tum hee and tumheeN. Please educate.
Bhavana
Interesting question.
In my view, if ghalib is saying the above about himself, then the
correct word is 'tumheeN'; where as if someone else is addressing
ghalib, then it should be 'tum hee'.
Vijay
Bhavana saahiba:
lafz "tumheeN" aur "tum hee" ke ma'ani 100% aek haiN albatta --- jab
in alfaaz ko shaa'irii meiN barta jaata hai to hameN in ke 'vazn' ka
Khayaal rakhna paRta hai. vaaqe'a yeh hai k "tum hii yaa tum hi" ka
vazn hai 22 yaa 21, depending on whether the vowel at the end is
elongated or contracted; please note that here 1 stands for a short
syllable, 2 for a long one!
ba-Khilaaf is ke, lafz "tumheeN" ka vazn hai 12 yaa 11 --- in this
particular she'r, it is 11.
ab kyaa kareN k Ghaalib ke is she'r ki baihr hi kuchh aisi hai k, is
maqaam par, lafz "tumheeN" [bar-vazn 11] fit baiThta hai --- "tum hee"
fit naheeN baiThta!
As an aside --- Ghaalib ke aek aur misr'e meiN lafz "tumheeN" bar-vazn
12 bhi ist'emaal hu'aa hai:
har aek baat pe kehte ho tum k tuu kyaa hai?
tumheeN kaho k yeh aNdaaz-e-guftgoo kyaa hai?
I hope this helps --- if it doesn't, I'll be quite willing to give you
further examples that might shed more light on this 'material'
difference between the two expressions which, otherwise, have exactly
the same literal meaning!
Raj Kumar
Baat tau aap ne baa-khubhii samjhaa dee, Waa..h!
Magar, iss par ik aur bhi sawaal ubhar aayaa..
Bar-vazn 11 meN 'tumhi' honaa chaahiye yaa k 'tumheeN' ?
Puuchhne kaa matlab hai k iss meN-noon gunnah- hai yaa nahiiN.
javaab kaa muntazir,
~B.G.
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Thanks Raj Sahib for the elaborate answer. I guess I was wrong in
assuming that there IS a 'material difference' in the usage of
'tumheeN' v/s 'tum hee'; other than the metric considerations.
Regards,
Vijay
> Janaab-e-Mohtaram Raj saahab, aadaab!
>
> Baat tau aap ne baa-khubhii samjhaa dee, Waa..h!
> Magar, iss par ik aur bhi sawaal ubhar aayaa..
>
> Bar-vazn 11 meN 'tumhi' honaa chaahiye yaa k 'tumheeN' ?
>
> Puuchhne kaa matlab hai k iss meN-noon gunnah- hai yaa nahiiN.
javaaban arz hai k, vazn chaahe 11 ho yaa 12, is lafz ke aaKhir meiN
"noon-Ghunna" hamesha hota hai --- albatta, is lafz meiN "noon-Ghunna"
ka ko'ii vazn naheeN hai (yeh bechaara to faqat aavaaz ko 'nasal'
banaata hai, vazn meiN qat'an madaaKhilat naheeN karta!).
rahii baat 11 vs 12 ki --- to is baat ka daar-o-madaar vowel "ye" par
hai. agar harf 'ye' ki aavaaz 'elongated' hai to is lafz ka vazn 12
hoga, agar 'contracted' hai to 11.
I hope this helps!
Raj Kumar
janaab-i-Bhavana jii, aadaab 'arz hai
I know nothing about 11, 12, 21 etc which Raj Kumar Sahib has
elaborated upon and have no doubt that this is correct from the poetic
perspective. ....but, the grammarians seem to be saying the following.
ham hii kyaa kareN...kuchh qismat hii aisii hai.
hamiiN ne kahaa thaa kih...
hamiiN se puuchho...
hamiiN ko maan-naa paRe gaa
yih daaGj hamiiN par lagaa hai
etc etc
In other words, ham hii is used in the direct case (without post-
position) and hamiiN in the oblique case (with post position). Having
said all this, I am not sure whether this usage is strictly adhered
to.
pichhlii raat KHvaab meN dekhaa
hamiiN charaaGh hamiiN parvaane
Josh
...............................
KHair-Khvaah,
Naseer
> pichhlii raat KHvaab meN dekhaa
> hamiiN charaaGh hamiiN parvaane
>
> Josh
albatta, kisi aur shaa'ir ne (hazrat-e-vaa'iz ke huzoor meiN) yooN
kahaa tha:
raat shaitaaN ko Khwaab meiN dekhaa!
saari suurat janaab kii sii thii!!! :)
Khair, chhoRiye in "muu-shigaafiyoN" ko aur aaiye --- ham aap ko
janaab-e-Qais ke qalam se bar-aamad huye kuchh ruumaani qit'aat
sunaate haiN. ;) farmaate haiN k
aaj tak yaad hai voh shaam k jab
dil meiN utrii thi ik nigaah tirii
muddateN ho gayeeN magar ab tak
ziNdagii tak rahii hai raah tirii!
aasmaanoN pe chhaa gaye baadal
aek bijlii fazaa meiN laihraa'ii
soye armaan uTh ke baiTh gaye!
un ko aise lagaa k tuu aa'ii!!!
dosto, aaj sub'h hone tak
us but-e-ashva-gar ki baat karo!
jaam-o-meenaa ke tazkire chhoRo
us "nasheelii nazar" ki baat karo!!!
husn ki aan hai to aek vuhii
ishq ki jaan hai to aek vuhii
mere dil ke Ghareeb-Khaane meiN
ko'ii mehmaan hai to aek vuhii
fil-haal, itnaa hi kaafi hai --- albatta, agar yaar-log chaaheN to yeh
silsila yaqeenan jaarii--o-saarii rahe ga!
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
On Jan 31, 12:01 am, Raj Kumar <rajkumarq...@hotmail.com> wrote:
> Khair, chhoRiye in "muu-shigaafiyoN" ko aur aaiye --- ham aap ko
> janaab-e-Qais ke qalam se bar-aamad huye kuchh ruumaani qit'aat
> sunaate haiN. ;) farmaate haiN k
>
> aaj tak yaad hai voh shaam k jab
> dil meiN utrii thi ik nigaah tirii
> muddateN ho gayeeN magar ab tak
> ziNdagii tak rahii hai raah tirii!
bahut KHuub, Raj Kumar Sahib, bahut KHuub!! nah jaane aap ko kisii ne
aaKHirii shi'r ke baare meN kuchh kahaa hai yaa kih nahiiN magar maiN
naa-daan kuchh 'arz karnaa chaahtaa huuN. "tak rahii" ke ma'nii yahaaN
pih yaqiin-an "dekh rahii" ke haiN lekin main ek awr ma'nii le rahaa
huuN...goyaa merii zindagii terii raah tak (as far as your street/
house etc) rahii hai..ya'nii yahii hai merii dunyaa-o-maa-fii-haa!!
kyaa KHyaal hai aap kaa?
> aasmaanoN pe chhaa gaye baadal
> aek bijlii fazaa meiN laihraa'ii
> soye armaan uTh ke baiTh gaye!
> un ko aise lagaa k tuu aa'ii!!!
bilaa-shak bahut KHuub-suurat qita' hai. mujhe yahaaN Akhtar
Shiiraanii kii ek Ghazal kaa shi'r yaad aa rahaa hai. us meN bhii
kuchh aap jaise KHayaalaat haiN..
abr-i-siyaah se ik barq-i-safed lahlahaa uThii???
yaa aa gae vuh saamne gesuu saNvaar aa ke
> dosto, aaj sub'h hone tak
> us but-e-ashva-gar ki baat karo!
> jaam-o-meenaa ke tazkire chhoRo
> us "nasheelii nazar" ki baat karo!!!
>
> husn ki aan hai to aek vuhii
> ishq ki jaan hai to aek vuhii
> mere dil ke Ghareeb-Khaane meiN
> ko'ii mehmaan hai to aek vuhii
bahut bahut shukriya Raj Kumar Sahib, in motiyoN ko pesh karne kaa.
> fil-haal, itnaa hi kaafi hai --- albatta, agar yaar-log chaaheN to yeh
> silsila yaqeenan jaarii--o-saarii rahe ga!
kyoN nahiiN janaab! lekin yih motii is laRii ke nahiiN. inheN qit'aat
kii larii meN honaa chaahiye. lihaazaa maiN in an-mol ratanoN ko ek ek
kar ke "udhar" le jaauuN gaa jahaaN "yaar-log" maziid marvaariid
bakher sakte haiN!!
KHair-KHvaah,
Naseer
On Jan 31, 4:08 pm, Naseer <qures...@googlemail.com> wrote:
>
> abr-i-siyaah se ik barq-i-safed lahlahaa uThii???
> yaa aa gae vuh saamne gesuu saNvaar aa ke
abr-i-siyah meN ik barq-i-HasiiN lahlahaa uThii
yaa aa gae vuh saamne gesuu saNvaar ke
Naseer