Aik Ghazal Amjad Islam Amjad ke kalaam se muntakhib shudaa
Sana Ali
Lambi ghair hazri ke liye mazrat khavah hooN, jinhoN ne mujhe yaad
kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
(mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
Aasaan alfaaz, aam istamaal aur gehre maane, yeh tamaam khoobiyaaN
haiN Amjad Sahab ke kalaam maiN ... I have picked a ghazal to share
with all of you . Ummeed hai ke pasand aae gi. :-)
Yeh batati chalooN ke yeh ghazal mujhe kiyooN itni pasand hai.Sab se
ziyaadah to is liye, ke yeh ghazal hamaari aaj kal ki zindagi se
mutaabiqat rakhti hai, itni masroofiyat, itni masroofiyat ke jaane
kitne kaam " achhchha phir kar laiN ge" pe taal diye jaate haiN ,
magar ab to yeh taal matol zindagi kaa aik hissa ban chuki hai .
Savaal yeh paidaa hotaa hai ke konsaa kaam ziyaadah ehem hai aur
konsaa kaam foran ho jaanaa chahiye, iss silsile maiN mard hazraat ki
raae ham khavateen se bilkul mukhtalif ho gi ( I can bet on it ) :-P .
to daikhiye ke Amjad Sahab kiyaa kiyaa kuchh taal rahe haiN kisi aur
din pe :-)
Khair andaish
Sana
khud apne liye baith ke sochaiN ge kisi din
yoon hai ke tujhe bhool ke daikhain ge kisi din
bhatke hooe phirte hain kai lafz jo dil maiN
duniya ne diyaa vaqt, to likhkhaiN ge kisi din
hil jaaeN ge ik baar to arshoN ke dar o baam
yeh khaak nasheeN log, jo bolaiN ge kisi din
aapas ki kisi baat kaa miltaa hi nahiN vaqt
har baar yeh kehte haiN ke "baithaiN ge kisi din"
ai jaan, teri yaad ke be naam parindai
shakhoN pe mere dard ki,utraiN ge kisi din
jaati hai kisi jheel ki gehraaii kahaaN tak
aankhoN main teri, doob ke daikhaiN ge kisi din
khushboo se bhari shaam maiN, jugnoo ke qalam se
ik nazm tere vaaste, likhkhaiN ge kisi din
soeN ge teri aankh ki khalvat maiN kisi raat
saa'e maiN teri zulf ke, jaagaiN ke kisi din
khushboo ki tarha, masl e saba, khaak numaa se
galiyoN se tere shehr ki, guzraiN ge kisi din
AMJAD hai yehi ab ke kafan baandh ke sar se
us shehr e sitam gaar maiN, jaa'en ge kisi din
Khursheed Ahmed
On 11 May 2002, Sana Ali wrote:
> Aadaab Everyone :-)
>
> Lambi ghair hazri ke liye mazrat khavah hooN, jinhoN ne mujhe yaad
> kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
> (mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
>
>.....
Bohat khoobsoorat Ghazal likhi hai aap ne Amjad Islaam Amjad ki. Mujhe
bhi un ki shaayeri bohat pasand hai. Nice to have you back.
abida123
shukriya,,,,bahut khoob kalaam post kiya hai aap ne Amjad Sahib ka.
Cheers!
Abida
Zoya
> Aadaab Everyone :-)
>
> Lambi ghair hazri ke liye mazrat khavah hooN, jinhoN ne mujhe yaad
> kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
> (mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
>
Sana Sahibaa,
Welcome back! aap to raunaq-e-bazm hai.N, ab vapaas aa gayii.N hai.N,
to vadaa kiijiiye ke aatii rahe.Ngii.
> Aasaan alfaaz, aam istamaal aur gehre maane, yeh tamaam khoobiyaaN
> haiN Amjad Sahab ke kalaam maiN ... I have picked a ghazal to share
> with all of you . Ummeed hai ke pasand aae gi. :-)
>
> Yeh batati chalooN ke yeh ghazal mujhe kiyooN itni pasand hai.Sab se
> ziyaadah to is liye, ke yeh ghazal hamaari aaj kal ki zindagi se
> mutaabiqat rakhti hai, itni masroofiyat, itni masroofiyat ke jaane
> kitne kaam " achhchha phir kar laiN ge" pe taal diye jaate haiN ,
> magar ab to yeh taal matol zindagi kaa aik hissa ban chuki hai .
> Savaal yeh paidaa hotaa hai ke konsaa kaam ziyaadah ehem hai aur
> konsaa kaam foran ho jaanaa chahiye, iss silsile maiN mard hazraat ki
> raae ham khavateen se bilkul mukhtalif ho gi ( I can bet on it ) :-P .
>
> to daikhiye ke Amjad Sahab kiyaa kiyaa kuchh taal rahe haiN kisi aur
> din pe :-)
Sana, I am so glad ke aap vaapas aayii hai.N to Amjad Sahib ke kalaam
ke saath. Amjad Sahib mere ba.De aChhe dost hai.N. voh ek behtariin
shaayar aur adiib to hai.N hii, saath mei.N ek bahut aChhe insaan bhii
hai.N. He is absolutely one of my favorite people in the whole wide
world. mere paas un_kaa kuChh unpublished kalaam hai, jo un_kii
ijaazat se kabhii share karuu.Ngii. merii jab bhii un_se phone pe baat
hotii hai, to aaKhir mei.N mai.N kehtii huu.N ke apnaa koii sher
likhvaaiiye! He always obliges me!! ab aap_ko do ashaar sunaatii huu.N
jo unho.N_ne mujhe ek baar likhvaaye the:
talaash-e-ma.Nzil-e-jaanaa.N to ik bahaanaa thaa
tamaam umr mai.N apanii taraf ravaanaa thaa
mai.N us_ko hashr mei.N kis naam se sadaa detaa
ke meraa us_kaa ta'arruf to ghaibaanaa thaa!
>
> Khair andaish
> Sana
Bye for now,
___________________Zoya
Sana Ali
Thanks so much !!
For all the wonderful compliments, as well as for your active
participation on Alup.(ham khavaateen yahaaN pe naayaab nahiN to
kamyaab zaroor haiN )
It is so nice to know that Amjad Sahab is a nice person as well, as I
feel that now a days this quality is rather rare .... :-P
Kabhi Amjad Sahab se phir baat ho to ham "Alupers" ka Salam
pohnchaaiye gaa unhaiN :-)
aur yeh jo ashaar aap ne ham se share kiye haiN, in maiN se dooosraa
shair, uff!!
mat poochh ke dil pe kiyaa guzri...
It is one of my favorite ones :-)
Kaee dafaa ghaibaanaa ta'arruf insaan ko kisi aur ke itnaa qareeb le
aataa hai, aur doosre shakhs ko is ki khabar tak nahiN hoti..
isi baat pe Faraz sahab ne kiyaa khoob farmaayaa hai ke
Jab talak door hai tu, teri parastish kar laiN
ham jise chhoo na sakhaiN, us ko Khudaa kehte haiN
:-)
khair andaish
Sana
zbi...@yahoo.com (Zoya) wrote in message news:<2e750db.02051...@posting.google.com>...
UVR
On 11 May 2002, Sana Ali wrote:
>
> > Aadaab Everyone :-)
> >
> > Lambi ghair hazri ke liye mazrat khavah hooN, jinhoN ne mujhe yaad
> > kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
> > (mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
Welcome back, Sana saahiba. aadaab!
waise shukr to ham ne -- aap kii jaanib se -- tab bhii adaa
kiyaa thaa jab aap Ghaaib ho gayiiN thiiN, k shaayad aap ko
sh'er-o-shaa'irii ke is jaNjaal se nijaat mil gayii hogii! :-))
lekin yeh dekh kar to aaj AUR BHII Khushii ho rahii hai k
aap ne, kam az kam fil_haal to, apnaa 'parlok' *itnaa* ziyaada
nahiiN sudhaar-saNwaar liyaa hai! ... LOL
mazaaq bar_taraf (?), Khush_waapas_aamdeed!
Khursheed Ahmed wrote:
>
> Bohat khoobsoorat Ghazal likhi hai aap ne Amjad Islaam Amjad ki. Mujhe
> bhi un ki shaayeri bohat pasand hai. Nice to have you back.
yeh dekh-dekh ke Khush-Khush hai gulsitaaN meraa
k 'lauT aayaa hai ghar aaj "paasbaaN" meraa'
(UVR)
mohtaram Khursheed Ahmed saahib, tasleemaat.
It is nice to have you back, too! ab is baar aap apne "ghar"
waapas aaye haiN to ummeed hai aap kaa aanaa-jaanaa yooN hii
musalsal chaltaa rahegaa.
guzishta kuchh maheenoN se ALUP par ka`ii naye ashKhaas
tashreef farmaa haiN. maiN soch rahaa thaa k ab aap
waapas lauT aaye haiN to phir se, "quarterly" taur par,
"ALUP FAQ-'n'-charter" post karnaa shuru' kar deNge.
-UVR.
P.S. jo log ALUP par Khursheed Ahmed saahib kii hastii
se naawaaqif haiN, (sirf) un ke liye arz hai k inheN
ham "paasbaan-e-ALUP" ke Khitaab se bhii pehchaante haiN.
Khursheed Ahmed
taak jhaank karta rehta tha lekin masroofiyat itni zayada theeN ke kuch
maheenoN ALUP ki paasbaani se mehroom rahaa. Is ke liye bohat ma'azrat
khwaah hooN. Lekin, kyooN ke ALUP ki mehfil baRi shaan-o-shaukat se
bar-qaraar thee is liye maiN ne paasbaani kii zaroorat bhi mehsoos na ki.
MaiN ALUP ke FAQ ko dohraa rahaa hooN, aur chand roz maiN ussay aap sub
logoN ki khidmat maiN pesh karooN ga taa ke aap log uss maiN mazeed
tarmeem kar sakeN.
Lagta hai ke Sana Saheba bhi bohat dinoN se Ghaayab theeN, aur un ki
waapsi se to ALUP yaqeenan jagmagaa uTThay ga.
Aap ki zarra nawaazi ka shukriya.
Faqat,
Khursheed
Yogesh Sethi
> Aadaab Everyone :-)
>
> Lambi ghair hazri ke liye mazrat khavah hooN, jinhoN ne mujhe yaad
> kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
> (mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
Sana ji:
Delighted to see your nice post. Welcome back!
Regards,
Yogesh Sethi
Sana Ali
> san...@yahoo.com (Sana Ali) wrote:e
>
> > Aadaab Everyone :-)
> >
> > Lambi ghair hazri ke liye mazrat khavah hooN, jinhoN ne mujhe yaad
> > kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
> > (mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
>
> Sana ji:
>
> Delighted to see your nice post. Welcome back!
>
> Regards,
> Yogesh Sethi
>
Aadaab Everyone
Shayad mujhe nikaal ke " kuchh khaa rahe hoN aap "
mehfil maiN iss khayaal se phir aa gaee hooN maiN :-)
lol
real shair is like this
Shayad mujhe nikaal ke pachhta rahe hoN aap
mehfil maiN iss khayaal se phir aa gaee hooN maiN :-)
be had shukriyaa aap sab ka, khaas tor pe ,Khursheed sahab, Yogesh
Sahab ka aur UVR sahab ka jinhoN ne itni izzat afzaai ki :-)
Abidah Sahiba, aap itni chup chup kiyooN haiN ? koi ghazal vaghairaa
sunaaiye naa ...
phir maiN bhi keh sakooN gi ke, ghazal uss ne chaiRi, mujhe saaz denaa
:-)
sab se baRh ke, yeh RajKumar Sahab ki koi khair khabar hai ?
Please search for him :-)
baRaa dil chah rahaa hai, koi garam josh mehfil ki jaae ... Alup kaa
taraanaa tarannum se sunaa jaae aur sar ko dhunaa jaae :-)
ab ijazat dijiye
Khair andaish
Sana
Amit Malhotra
> sab se baRh ke, yeh RajKumar Sahab ki koi khair khabar hai ?
>
> Please search for him :-)
>
Sana ji aadaab,
RK sahib kuchh hafto.n ke liye kahii.n gaye hue hai.n. thats what I
gathered from his last post on ALUP about a week ago...
Regards,
Amit Malhotra
p.s. Welcome back to ALUP. ab dekhiye na, aap ke aane ke saath saath Abida
sahiba bhii aa gaaii, Khursheed sahib bhi aa gaye.. lagta hai mahfil garam
hone waali hai.. aur aapke dil kii muraad bhi milne waali hai aapko, jahaan
tak RK sahib ki baat hai, to thoraa aur intezaar kariye :)
Raj Kumar
> kiyaa un ka bohat shukriya aur jinhoN ne oopar vaale kaa shukar kiyaa
> (mere ghaib ho jaane pe ) voh ab kamar baandh laiN :-P I am back ...
aaj bahut dinoN ke ba'ad is gul-kade ka ruKh kiyaa to aap ka Khat dekh
kar be-iKhtiyaar muNh se yeh she'r nikla:
Khush-boo si uR rahi hai yeh mastaana-vaar kyaa!
phir aa gayaa chaman meiN voh "jaan-e-bahaar" kyaa!
bhai, Sanaa ji, mujhe to yaqeen naheeN aata k, itna lamba arsa
roo-posh rehne ke ba'ad bhi, aap ke dil meiN ALUP ki yaad tar-o-taaza
rahi. aur, dekhiye, aap ki dekha-dekhi kitne aur shaih-savaar bhi
maidaan-e-jaNg meiN utar aaye haiN. ab aap se yihi darKhwaast hai k
aap isi tarah, naseeeeeem-aasaaaaa, gulzaar-e-ALUP ki jaanib aati
jaati raheN!
> Aasaan alfaaz, aam istamaal aur gehre maane, yeh tamaam khoobiyaaN
> haiN Amjad Sahab ke kalaam maiN ... I have picked a ghazal to share
> with all of you . Ummeed hai ke pasand aae gi. :-)
Ghazal aap ne bahut achchhi chuni hai --- bilkul aisi k kalaam-e-Amjad
ki jumla sifaat ka muraqqa' nazar aa rahi hai. vaise, mujhe is baat
par koi hairat naheeN hui kiyooN-k aap ka inteKhaab, chaahe Ghazal ho
ya nazm ka, rubaa'ii ka ho ya qite' ka, hamesha achchha hi hota hai.
kaash-k aap ka husn-e-zauq "dostoN ke inteKhaab" meiN bhi aisa hi
hota! LOL
> Yeh batati chalooN ke yeh ghazal mujhe kiyooN itni pasand hai.Sab se
> ziyaadah to is liye, ke yeh ghazal hamaari aaj kal ki zindagi se
> mutaabiqat rakhti hai, itni masroofiyat, itni masroofiyat ke jaane
> kitne kaam " achhchha phir kar laiN ge" pe taal diye jaate haiN ,
> magar ab to yeh taal matol zindagi kaa aik hissa ban chuki hai .
> Savaal yeh paidaa hotaa hai ke konsaa kaam ziyaadah ehem hai aur
> konsaa kaam foran ho jaanaa chahiye, iss silsile maiN mard hazraat ki
> raae ham khavateen se bilkul mukhtalif ho gi ( I can bet on it ) :-P .
is meiN 'bet' karne ki kyaa baat hai, Sanaa ji? aap to jaanti hi haiN
k auratoN ke to sabhi kaam mardoN se ulaT hote haiN! :-))
ba-har-haal, Ghazal bahut umda hai --- Ghaaliban kisi mard ki kahi hui
hai! LOL
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
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>
> khud apne liye baith ke sochaiN ge kisi din
> yoon hai ke tujhe bhool ke daikhain ge kisi din
>
> bhatke hooe phirte hain kai lafz jo dil maiN
> duniya ne diyaa vaqt, to likhkhaiN ge kisi din
>
> hil jaaeN ge ik baar to arshoN ke dar o baam
> yeh khaak nasheeN log, jo bolaiN ge kisi din
>
> aapas ki kisi baat kaa miltaa hi nahiN vaqt
> har baar yeh kehte haiN ke "baithaiN ge kisi din"
>
> ai jaan, teri yaad ke be naam parindai
> shakhoN pe mere dard ki,utraiN ge kisi din
>
> jaati hai kisi jheel ki gehraaii kahaaN tak
> aankhoN main teri, doob ke daikhaiN ge kisi din
>
> khushboo se bhari shaam maiN, jugnoo ke qalam se
> ik nazm tere vaaste, likhkhaiN ge kisi din
>
> soeN ge teri aankh ki khalvat maiN kisi raat
> saa'e maiN teri zulf ke, jaagaiN ke kisi din
>
> khushboo ki tarha, masl e saba, khaak numaa se
> galiyoN se tere shehr ki, guzraiN ge kisi din
>
> AMJAD hai yehi ab ke kafan baandh ke sar se
> us shehr e sitam gaar maiN, jaa'en ge kisi din
------------
Yogesh Sethi
>
> Shayad mujhe nikaal ke pachhta rahe hoN aap
> mehfil maiN iss khayaal se phir aa gaee hooN maiN :-)
>
Sana ji, aap kaa khayaal durst hai - magar dekhiye ke is kaa natiijaa
kyaa niklaa; kisii shaayer ne kahaa hai:
jab tak mile na the to judaa_ii kaa thaa malaal
ab ye malaal hai ke tamannaa nikal ga_ii :-)
Regards,
Yogesh
Irfan 'Abid'
> > san...@yahoo.com (Sana Ali) wrote:e
> >
> Aadaab Everyone
>
>
> mehfil maiN iss khayaal se phir aa gaee hooN maiN :-)
>
> lol
>
> real shair is like this
>
>
> Shayad mujhe nikaal ke pachhta rahe hoN aap
>
> mehfil maiN iss khayaal se phir aa gaee hooN maiN :-)
>
Sana Sahiba, aadaab!
bilaa-ijaazat aap dostoN kii guftuguu meN madaaKhilat shaaistagii kii
misaal nahiiN, lekin ye jur'at is ummeed par kar rahaa huuN ki aap
mujhe muaaf farmaayeNgii. dar-asl aap ke Khat meN kuchh aisaa thaa jis
ne mujhe apnii raae dene par aamaadah kar diyaa. lekin sab se pahle
aap ko :ghar lauTne: par Khush-aamdeed kah duuN!:-)
> be had shukriyaa aap sab ka, khaas tor pe ,Khursheed sahab, Yogesh
> Sahab ka aur UVR sahab ka jinhoN ne itni izzat afzaai ki :-)
>
> Abidah Sahiba, aap itni chup chup kiyooN haiN ? koi ghazal vaghairaa
> sunaaiye naa ...
>
> phir maiN bhi keh sakooN gi ke, ghazal uss ne chaiRi, mujhe saaz denaa
> :-)
>
> sab se baRh ke, yeh RajKumar Sahab ki koi khair khabar hai ?
>
> Please search for him :-)
>
> baRaa dil chah rahaa hai, koi garam josh mehfil ki jaae ... Alup kaa
> taraanaa tarannum se sunaa jaae aur sar ko dhunaa jaae :-)
>
yahee vo baat hai jis par maiN kuchh arz karnaa chaahtaa huuN. aap kii
Ghair-maujuudagii meN, kuchh arsah qabl R K Sb hameN is taraane se
navaaz chuke haiN. lekin kalaam R K Sb kaa ho aur vo bhii
bazm-e-suKhan kii taareef meN, to jitnii baar sunaa jaaye kam hai.
lihaazah aap kii farmaaish kii taaeed meN bandaa bhii apnaa :vote:
pesh kartaa hai!:-)
> ab ijazat dijiye
>
> Khair andaish
>
> Sana
niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:
Raj Kumar
> san...@yahoo.com (Sana Ali) wrote in message news:<5a74bfd0.02051...@posting.google.com>...
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Please search for him :-)
> >
> > baRaa dil chah rahaa hai, koi garam josh mehfil ki jaae ... Alup kaa
> > taraanaa tarannum se "sunaa" jaae aur sar ko "dhunaa" jaae :-)
> >
sun sun kar sar "dhun_ne" vaalo
maiN ab insaaN aek nayaa hooN
'bhakti-ras' meiN Doob gayaa hooN! LOL
is liye, Sanaa ji, ab aap ham se GhazaloN ya taraanoN ki ummeed mat
rakhiye. ab to keval Bhagvaan ki 'stuti (ya'ani-k, faqat Khudaa ki
ta'areef) ke geet hi suniye ga. :-))
>
> yahee vo baat hai jis par maiN kuchh arz karnaa chaahtaa huuN. aap kii
> Ghair-maujuudagii meN, kuchh arsah qabl R K Sb hameN is taraane se
> navaaz chuke haiN. lekin kalaam R K Sb kaa ho aur vo bhii
> bazm-e-suKhan kii taareef meN, to jitnii baar sunaa jaaye kam hai.
> lihaazah aap kii farmaaish kii taaeed meN bandaa bhii apnaa :vote:
> pesh kartaa hai!:-)
>
Irfaan Saahib:
Khaaksaar ko is qadar mohabbat-aamez alfaz ke saath yaad farmaane ke
liye, aap ka bahut bahut shukriya. maiN aap ko yaad dilaana chaahooN
ga k yeh Sanaa Saahiba vuhi haiN jin ka zikr naGhma-e-ALUP meiN kuchh
yooN hua tha:
"chhalakte haiN yaheeN saaGhar Sanaa ke"!!!
aur ab tak to aap ko bhi kuchh aNdaaza ho hi gayaa hoga k yeh mohtarma
aek Khaas-ul-Khaas shaKhsiat ki maalik(an) haiN; Ghaaliban, inheeN ki
aamad par Faiz Saahib ne kahaa tha k
aayaa miri mehfil meiN, Ghaarat-gar-e-hosh aayaa!
paimaana-ba-kaf aayaa, maiKhaana-ba-dosh aayaa!!!
kehne ka matlab yeh k in ki aamad aur shirkat se ALUP Khoob se bhi
Khoob-tar ho jaaye ga!
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
P.S. Amit Saahib se darKhwaast hai k voh maNdarja-baalaa she'r meiN
"maiKhaana-ba-dosh" ki tarkeeb ko 'note' kareN! This is yet another
example of the 'extreme personification' we were talking about in a
recent post. R.K.
Sana Ali
jo aap ne meri baat suni :-) aur javaab dene ki zehmat gavaaraa ki :-)
vese aadat to nahiN hai mujhe apne baare maiN kuchh ziyaadah shaikhi
baghaarne ki.... magar kuchh aaj kal " show off " kaa mood ho raha
hai shayad,
ab Raj Sahab ki ghair mojoodgi maiN kisi ko to yeh kaam karnaa hi paRe
gaa :-P
Please dont tell him I said this :-( varnaa bohat daant paRe gi mujhe
:-(
so any way, what I wanted to say was, (for all of us, Abidah ji,
Khursheed Sahab aur baqi tamaam azeez jo khaamosh baithe the itne
dinoN se )
Ham aa gae to garmi e baazaar daikhnaa :-P
vese garmi se yaad aayaa, aaj kal garmi shuroo ho gaee hai, Khudaa
Khudaa kar ke yeh mosam aayaa hai hamari east coast pe :-(
aap sab ne aam khaane shuroo kiye ? ya phir tarboozoN se shoq rakhte
haiN ?
jo bhi ho, kehte hain , pasand apni apni, naseeb apnaa apnaa :-)
ab ijaazat
khair andaish
Sana