I have just obtained a copy of translations of Hafez's gahzals. One
side has the original Persian text and one side has the English
translation. I must say that I prefer your explanations of Urdu ghazals
to the more prosaic translations of hte books I have read.
I'm waiting for a second book (The Dance of Life) that has the orginal
Persian tranliterated, and I'll post something from it when I have it.
An interesting feature of the first book is its rather detailed
discussion f hte Sufi/mystic background for this form of poetry.
For those who are interested, see the web page www.mage.com for an
interesting collection of Persian books and music.
Nagesh