Here's a Hentai Fanfiction
Minaka Dee Delight
are Serena and Darien) And if you want more,e -mail me, there's a whole lot
where this came from.
light out love
Rated: (H)
By: Serina Mya P.
Serena laughed louder and louder looking at T.V.'s comedy special. Her
sweet voice echoed throughout the whole house. Darien sat next to her,
and started stroking her odangos. "Shhhh." he hissed. Serena hugged him.
"I love you." she sighed. She un-huged him. "But this is too funny!" She
laughed louder and louder. 'I just wished I could do something with my
little minx.' He thought. The Lights went out. "NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!"
Serena whined. 'Yes.' Darien thought. Darien turned on the radio, "
Tokyo's power has gone out, wait till 6:00 for the problem to be
corrected. This is---" Darien turned off the radio, and sighed. he
turned his back to Serena to light a candle. When he turned around to
light the other one, he looked at Serena, she was naked with no clothes
on. "Well," she said with passion trying to make a sweet face. "W-w-Wo,"
Darien almost fainted. "Wait till I light this other candle." Darien
answered. Making at sweet face back at her. "I love You so much!" Serena
shouted. Darien lit the other candle, put the match out, then kissed
Serena's 'candy kisses' lips. "Oh Darien." Serena sighed. Darien picked
her up, carring her into her room. He layed her on the bed. "Lets make
love." Serena sighed. "Okay." said Darien lighting the candles around
the bed. After that, he dropped all of his clothes. "And The rubber."
Serena blushed. "Okay." Darien said pulling out a drawer to get a
condom.
Darien started kissing her stomach, making her feel better than ever.
Serena starts grabbing on to the bed post and moving with Darien. He
licked inside of her womanhood. "Oh yes please. Harder." Serena moaned.
Darien swiggled is tounge deeper and deeper. The lust came out quicker
and quicker in time. Serena closed her eyes. "Yes...." Serena moaned.
Darien pulled himself up using the bedpost. Darien started lovin' her.
"Oh yes, please more Muffin." Serena licked her lips. Time and Time
flew. But their love still lasted eternally. Serena kissed Darien's
cheek. "I love you." she sighed. "I *totally* love you more than
anyother woman I ever loved." Darien sighed. Darien started pushing
harder to show all of his affection, he swong wild and otta control.
"YEEESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!" Serena moaned.
"Oh MY God I love you!" Serena screamed.
"OH MINX HOLD ON!" Darien moaned.
"I'M TRYING!"
"YESSSSS HARD IT GOES!"
"OH HEAVENLY YES!"
"OH YOUR MY MINX."
"AND YOUR MY MUFF."
They swong and rolled over two times. Darien sat up on her humping hard.
"Oh, i love you." sighed Draien rubbing Serena's breasts. Serena was
breathing hard.
"Oh, My Muffin."
"Oh My Minx."
"You gotta trust me forever and ever." sighed Serena. "I do, cuz I love
you." Darien sighed.
"ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhh."
Serena moaned. Darien collasped on Serena.She sighed. "Darien, honey?"
Serena asked. "Huh?" he asked. "I was just checking if you was okay."
she answered. "Cuz, I love you and will throw my life on the line if
something were to happen to you." Serena cried. "Mmmh, I love you."
Darien said touching Serena's Face.
"I love you too, eternally."
In the morning, the lights were on and Serena woke up smelling pancakes
and bacon. "Yum," she whispered to herself. She walked into the kitchen,
putting her robe on. "Hey," Darien whispered. "The lights are on,
everything is fine." hes assured her. "I guess we could of called last
night, a Light-Out Love Session." Serena winked.
Minaka D. Delight | S.M.P.
"All Fun No Hard HomeWork Anymore in La-La Land"
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http://sailorscouts.ourfamily.com/moonnew.htm - Serena and The Scouts CP
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Minaka Dee Delight <zzusagit...@aol.com> wrote in message
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((snip all of that))
That was quite amusing...
It reminded me of the "FRACTURED FAIRY TAILS" from the Rocky and Bullwinkle
show
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Edson of the Dead Flame
>I wrote this (My pin name is S.M.P.), and it's about Usagi and Mamoru (names
>are Serena and Darien) And if you want more,e -mail me, there's a whole lot
>where this came from.
"NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!"
>
>The Lights went out. "NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!"
>Serena whined. 'Yes.' Darien thought. Darien turned on the radio, "
>Tokyo's power has gone out, wait till 6:00 for the problem to be
>corrected. This is---" Darien turned off the radio,
Wait, the power went out; yet the radio still worked?
> When he turned around to light the other one, he looked at Serena,
>she was naked with no clothes on.
(chuckle)
(This is all I'm going to write, any more and someone might think I was trying
to be
malicious...)
Edson
Fourth Horseman of AHSM
"ich bin doch nur ein Gigolo"
Ramms+ein
Callisto: "Are you falling in love with me?"
Guy: "And what if I were?"
Callisto: "Then I'd have to kill you."
"All's fair in love and war and I don't believe in love."
Gali (Monster Rancher)
"Ow! That's my (bleep) vagina! Ow!"
Piggy
"Omae o Korosu"
Heero Yuy
"There is no such thing as right or wrong, not here.
Here you must take what you want."
Tim Curry
"Florida: America's penis."
Jon Stewart
Paul
used my girlfriends pet name or have i talked about trusting her after orgasm.
4 things. first dont be so descriptive in their movements like and i quote
"they rolled over two times" it just doesnt work. second isuggest that you not
use such childish terms like womanhood etc... is it so hard to say vagina?
third be more descriptive. the way you described it it sounded like it was
about three minutes long. Lastly i suggest that you work more on the intro to
the sex scene, at least have them be in eachothers arms talking kissing and
hugging for a while othewise serena is just portrayed as a slut. And Serena
said " oh... nothing to do, lets have sex" and she is magicaly naked at least
have her strip or something not just darn the lights are out, im naked let's
screw.
Im gonna post a lemon soon i hope you look at it it will be titled "a night of
fun at Lita's" it will include a new character, either Paul or Vegetix who is
in love with athe scouts but Ami mostly.
I am the great Vegetix. Kneel before me and my 8 Godesses or be crushed in my
wake.
H_Slave
have i
> used my girlfriends pet name or have i talked about trusting her after
orgasm.
...which, perhaps, just means that you're not Mamoru or Usagi. Of course,
I haven't had the time to finish reading the story myself.
> 4 things. first dont be so descriptive in their movements like and i
quote
> "they rolled over two times" it just doesnt work.
True, sorta. I'd tend to be more descriptive, trying to tie a couple
factors together. "They clasped together, and Mamoru rolled, pulling Usagi
onto him, and continuing to roll. The movement pressed their forms
together, flesh to flesh, as they...". See?
> second isuggest that you not
> use such childish terms like womanhood etc... is it so hard to say
vagina?
On the flip side, don't be afraid to use euphemisms to provide variety. If
we all stuck to the basics, every sex scene would boil down to "He inserted
his penis into her vagina. They copulated. They orgasmed." Choose your
terms carefully, but don't feel like you have to say "vagina" every time
you want to refer to one.
> third be more descriptive. the way you described it it sounded like it
was
> about three minutes long.
??? Ne, Paul, wasn't your first point "don't be so descriptive"? Anyways,
Minaka, be descriptive, but make sure the description is important.
Borrowing the example above, if you say "they rolled two times," then why
was the number two important enough to keep count? If the number of rolls
isn't really important, then you may want to say "they rolled a couple
times," which implies less certainty than "two." If the number of rolls is
significant, then by all means include them (for example "they rolled
together, once, twice, and fell off the bed.") If you're making a Vulcan
joke, then don't let a mere decimal point stop you ("they rolled
approximately 2.195452 times...approximately.") ^_^
And of course, something I've understood for a while but have never been
able to master is that sometimes a _lack_ of description, or not telling
the reader something, can be the most effective way to get the point
across. I'd give you an example, but if I could do that, I would have been
able to master it by now. ^_^;
> Lastly i suggest that you work more on the intro to
> the sex scene, at least have them be in eachothers arms talking kissing
and
> hugging for a while othewise serena is just portrayed as a slut. And
Serena
> said " oh... nothing to do, lets have sex" and she is magicaly naked at
least
> have her strip or something not just darn the lights are out, im naked
let's
> screw.
Paul has a point here, Minaka. One of the biggest problems I have when
writing lemons is _justifying_ it...saying "this is why these characters
are doing something they never ever would have done on <insert show name
here>." Yeah, Usagi and Mamoru are in love, but just suddenly throwing
over all their wholesome family values and having sex for no apparent
reason seems unlikely to me. A good lead-up always helps draw the reader
into the action.
At least you didn't write one of my least favorite types of lemons: two
anime characters who hate each other on the series, or each loving a
different character, suddenly declaring their love for one another for no
better reason than the author always thought they'd make a cute couple,
despite all evidence to the contrary. Those _really_ annoy me. ^_^;
> Im gonna post a lemon soon i hope you look at it it will be titled "a
night of
> fun at Lita's" it will include a new character, either Paul or Vegetix
who is
> in love with athe scouts but Ami mostly.
Paul, just so's you're forewarned, self-insert fanfics generally receive
highly mixed reviews. Don't be intimidated if someone slams it just for
being a self-insert fanfic.
H_Slave, understands many arts, but practices few well.
Rune
the Dead Flame" <ed...@garbage.com> whispering conspiratorially
>(I'm bored... *sigh* Ooh, what's this? A new lemon for me to read.)
>>I wrote this (My pin name is S.M.P.), and it's about Usagi and Mamoru (names
>>are Serena and Darien) And if you want more,e -mail me, there's a whole lot
>[more]
>>where this came from.
>"NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!"
I'm with you again, but just to be fair, I'll defend it. 8-)
>>The Lights went out. "NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!"
He he he.
>>Serena whined. 'Yes.' Darien thought. Darien turned on the radio, "
>>Tokyo's power has gone out, wait till 6:00 for the problem to be
>>corrected. This is---" Darien turned off the radio,
>Wait, the power went out; yet the radio still worked?
Maybe he didn't want it to be damaged when the power returned?
>> When he turned around to light the other one, he looked at Serena,
>>she was naked with no clothes on.
>(chuckle)
Just to totally clear. No Odangos, no necklace, no toenail polish.
>(This is all I'm going to write, any more and someone might think I was trying
>to be
>malicious...)
Aw, c'mon. This is the only way I'll read more than a few lines of MDD's Oh-so-mature
fanfics
>Edson
>Fourth Horseman of AHSM
Rune [Official Neko-Ooji of AHS-M]
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Minaka Dee Delight
nobody is standing ::
Do you know the word OLD and NEW?
S.M.P. is my OLD code name, so the story is OLD and If Minaka is my NEW I guess
those are my NEW stories.>vagina?
GGROSSS >.< When I type or try to say that word, my stomach starts hurting. and
IT's very hard when my mom and dad are looking on the screen.
: sighs : I'm only 11. I know alittle bit about sex because I hung out with the
wrong people when I was younger okay. You people act like I'm....I don't know
-.-;.
: still picking up old letters :
Catt
>Okay...... May I have a minute with you folks. :: goes over to a room where
>nobody is standing ::
>
>Do you know the word OLD and NEW?
>S.M.P. is my OLD code name, so the story is OLD and If Minaka is my NEW I guess
>those are my NEW stories.>vagina?
>
>GGROSSS >.< When I type or try to say that word, my stomach starts hurting. and
>IT's very hard when my mom and dad are looking on the screen.
penis penis penis
vagina vagina vagina
They're not that bad, and you should prolly get comfortable with them.
I personally find slang to be much less tasteful and much harder to
use with out feeling uncomfortable (or just dumb)
Well if you're going to be writing stories aimed at an adult audience
then it's kind of expected that you write with the language and
maturity level that people expect in hentai. Noone's going to take
your age into consideration when you write, the story needs to stand
for itself....
>
>: sighs : I'm only 11. I know alittle bit about sex because I hung out with the
>wrong people when I was younger okay. You people act like I'm....I don't know
>-.-;.
Ah and back on the topic of age... this is a ng for adults so if
you're a minor then you should never say so in the group... we don't
want anyone elses server to get dropped because minors are coming out
of the age closet.
Catt
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The Mercury Mage
me. Cunt, Now who came up with this word, they need to be drug out
into the street and shot, it is a Rude and Vulgar word that is to
short, Pussy or Cunny are Much nicer words. Cock is the same as cunt,
if any one wants cock, they should go visit a Chicken farm and chase a
rooster around.
Robert
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> Cunt, Now who came up with this word, they need to be drug out
> into the street and shot, it is a Rude and Vulgar word that is to
> short, Pussy or Cunny are Much nicer words.
The latter of the two cleary bearing no relation to the word "cunt"
whatsoever. And yes, most of the slang associated with sexuality sucks,
but that's because the intent has always been to denigrate it and make
it seem disgusting and immoral.
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Minaka Dee Delight
>if any one wants cock, they should go visit a Chicken farm and chase a
>rooster around.
ROFLMAO
Cock-Caka-Doodle-Doo >D
Okay, I'm done. Go back to your raving.
Okay, another reason why I don't use that penis and vagina stuff. It's like,
scientific. And all of my fanfictions are funny and crazy, so i hate geeky
words. I know, It's not geeky to use, but its...just too forwarded.
(( Notices She uses Okay, too much ))
Minaka D. Delight | S.M.P.
"All Fun No Hard HomeWork Anymore in La-La Land"
http://usagiandmamoru.cjb.net/ - T.U.M.O.
http://members.xoom.com/ilovelinkz/SSSK/sexyall.htm - SSSK
Kaz
> Okay, another reason why I don't use that penis and vagina stuff. It's
like,
> scientific. And all of my fanfictions are funny and crazy, so i hate geeky
> words. I know, It's not geeky to use, but its...just too forwarded.
> (( Notices She uses Okay, too much ))
sorry to interupt but I just got this urge to quote Kindergarden Cop...
'Boys have a PENIS and girls have a VAGINA!'
ok I am done ;)
<Kaz dives head first into a random portal>
Kaz
El Diablo Loco
13124943
Catt
>There are a Couple of Slang words that I find Rude, and to abrupt for
>me. Cunt, Now who came up with this word, they need to be drug out
>into the street and shot, it is a Rude and Vulgar word that is to
>short, Pussy or Cunny are Much nicer words. Cock is the same as cunt,
>if any one wants cock, they should go visit a Chicken farm and chase a
>rooster around.
I dunno, I can't stand any of them... if they're not rude or vulgar
soundsing then they're too amusing or ridiculous... I just can't use
any of them. I mean, even saying "pussy" feels weird to me. Which make
it really hard to write explicit lemons...
Minaka Dee Delight
DUUUUHHH :P!! What are you old? I think I know this-- I think I know this-- I
think I know this-- I think I know this-- and it goes on as DH NinnieNei spins.
Eldrick Tobin, Master of Perversion
zzusagit...@aol.com (Minaka Dee Delight), let forth a throaty,"Eureka!"
they followed their Joyful Noise with:
>>'Boys have a PENIS and girls have a VAGINA!'
>
>DUUUUHHH :P!! What are you old? I think I know this-- I think I know this-- I
>think I know this-- I think I know this-- and it goes on as DH NinnieNei spins.
Minaka you have been sucessfully teased ^-^
Eldrick Tobin
--
I'm here to chew bubblegum and write fanfic... I'm out of ideas... got any gum? I'm out of that too...
Minaka Dee Delight
WOW. I'm sucessfully teased for the about... hmm...1,060th time.