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Re: oblivion is welcome (a poem) > heres another poem

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harry

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Feb 8, 2012, 4:22:35 AM2/8/12
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On Tue, 7 Feb 2012 16:46:54 -0800 (PST), Manfred Rahim
<farewellpa...@spamgourmet.com> wrote:

>x-no-archive: yes
>
>if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
>here is my first:
>
>you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
>
>you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
>
>nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
>
>surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
>
>never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold
>
>embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.


if you had the guts to take the dive,

you wouldn't be here nor be alive.

instead, you'll bore me with your hypocrite rap,

filling my ears with your sissy crap.

so take your own advice and jump,

you boring, babbling, hypocrite chump.

Brave Burger

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Feb 8, 2012, 5:31:53 AM2/8/12
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Nobody invited you here, so don't let the door
kick you in the ass while leaving, bye bye..


Adam Lynn

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Feb 10, 2012, 3:02:30 AM2/10/12
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On Feb 7, 7:46 pm, Manfred Rahim <farewellpal.
13.ra...@spamgourmet.com> wrote:
> x-no-archive: yes
>
> if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
> here is my first:
>
> you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
>
> you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
>
> nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
>
> surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
>
> never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold
>
> embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.

Do you need a hug? There.
Hope that helps. Now go
make a poem.
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