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a poem for those in pain

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hop

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Mar 24, 2012, 11:43:44 PM3/24/12
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who else has sat on the pot, squeezed out the loaf of
crap,
who else has learned to endure how life can cruelly slap?
some of us dig holes and step deep in our lives
we never climb out, we never win, our days are shrieking knives

for us pills and bridges are not just tools for use of day to day
instead they allow us to say goodbye in a rapid painless way

harry

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Mar 25, 2012, 6:29:26 AM3/25/12
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This character doesn't have the guts to fall on a knife...
instead, it'll moan like a baby for the rest of it's life.

it supposes it's poems take the bit out of pain...
when all the while it's rhetoric is inane.

the words you speak bring to no one relief...
they're spoken only to express your own grief.

you're wasting electron's with these presumptuous poems you've made...
so scurry to the kitchen and fall on a blade.









hop

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Mar 26, 2012, 9:24:51 AM3/26/12
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On Mar 25, 6:29 am, harry <n...@nowhere.com> wrote:
> On Sat, 24 Mar 2012 20:43:44 -0700 (PDT), hop
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dont be so negative. they are a form of expression. we have 1st
amendment rights

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Mar 26, 2012, 12:21:37 PM3/26/12
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why is it negative he's just expressing his first amendent rights

U.N. Owen

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Mar 28, 2012, 7:05:23 PM3/28/12
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awesome

hop

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Mar 29, 2012, 3:44:59 PM3/29/12
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thanks for your compliment. i will try to write more when time and
inspiration permit.

Ishtar

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Mar 29, 2012, 9:12:51 PM3/29/12
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I like your little ditties. Keep 'em coming!

Mackintosh Paigemacher

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Mar 29, 2012, 10:42:42 PM3/29/12
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Moar!

Mr. Starbuck

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Apr 1, 2012, 5:16:44 AM4/1/12
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kudos <<#333

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Apr 2, 2012, 5:52:45 PM4/2/12
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Ishtar wrote:
> I like your little ditties. Keep 'em coming!



dittie this baby
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