so much depends upon

[Julie Damerell]

with a nod to William Carlos Williams

***
so much depends
upon

a blue lined
notebook

finding my black
ballpoint

under the white
lightbulb

***
so much depends
upon

a brown tin
cake pan

willed with white
batter

inside the balck
oven

***

so much depends
upon

a soft white
pillow

covered with hair
loosely

across the pink
cover

***

so much depends
upon

a boy four
years old

taking my hand
in his

below the blue
heavens

[Jerry H. Jenkins]

Julie,

I like these vignettes much better than WCW's tired old
wheelbarrow, quoted by multitudes.

The last one is my favorite.

Typos in the second one need attention, unless you have an
unusual kitchen.

Jerry

[LiIStar626]

julie-

nice work. i really enjoyed this. i especially liked the way recurring theme
of colors- a theme that can often be overdone and cliched, but i think you
managed to find a way to make it seem fresh. good job!

XoXo-
Kalikala

"Use your troubles, write about them, expose them, make them serve you...this
was an old, old tradition."
- Joyce Carol Oates

the current page
Plundered
http://members.aol.com/liistar626/plundered.html

[Julie Damerell]

I do have an unusual kitchen. Now I know why nothing I try to cook ever
comes out quite right. How embarrassing, though in the long run more
difficult for the people I try to feed than for me.

Julie

Jerry H. Jenkins <jerry_h...@csi.com> wrote in article
<36378699...@csi.com>...

[Gerrie Atrics]

OOooohh.........Very nice!

CreDo Ut InTeLLiGaM: "I believe so that I may understand"...........

[Julie Damerell]

Thank you. I wasn't paying attention to colors or recurring theme, so I am
especially glad I did it without overdoing it.

Julie

[Floyd Bass]

Julie, liked these!

So much depends
upon

The Wall Street
Journal

Spattered with coffee
stains

Inside the white
Lexus