PPB: To the Sea Angel / Will Dockery

George J. Dance

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Aug 5, 2018, 11:31:05 AM8/5/18

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Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery

Riptide waves,
there goes the sea angel,
right above the waves.
[...]

https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

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Bean Counter

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Aug 6, 2018, 12:24:10 AM8/6/18

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Good poem with good scenery....

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Will Dockery

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Aug 6, 2018, 5:53:39 PM8/6/18

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Thank you, George...

:)

Bean Counter

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Aug 7, 2018, 4:11:51 AM8/7/18

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On Monday, August 6, 2018 at 12:46:47 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:

> Bean Counter wrote:
> > George J. Dance wrote:
> >
> > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> >
> > > To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
> > >
> > > Riptide waves,
> > > there goes the sea angel,
> > > right above the waves.
> >
> > > [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html
>
> > Good poem with good scenery....
>

> Thanks for observing the scene, Bean.
>
> :)

Having another look see here...………….

George J. Dance

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Aug 7, 2018, 4:37:44 AM8/7/18

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It's worth a reread. I think it's a key to understanding all of Will's relationship poetry.

Will Dockery

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Aug 7, 2018, 3:04:08 PM8/7/18

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Hey, perhaps use this one as the lead poem, as a bit of intro within the poetry?

The work doesn't have to be chronological, after all...

George J. Dance

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Aug 7, 2018, 3:18:22 PM8/7/18

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No, it's not chronological. But I'm working on an order.

What I'd like to do is 2-part it, putting all the relationship poems in part 2, arranged irrespective of time or woman, to tell a story that goes dark and then comes up a bit at the end. (I'm considering WD as the centerpiece of that part).

I originally was going to end the book with "A Certain Music", but now I'm thinking of using it as the lead poem in part 2. To tell you the truth, there's one line in that poem I did not understand: "take it down to sea level" - but a sensible interpretation is that the speaker is walking toward the sea; he's moving in a direction just as his thoughts are moving in their new direction.

"Sea Angel" would follow right, or shortly, after, when he's at the sea.

Will Dockery

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Aug 7, 2018, 5:16:23 PM8/7/18

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I like the shaping of the theme idea, is there a full set of poems to work with yet, can't recall offhand?

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Will Dockery

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Aug 8, 2018, 8:21:24 AM8/8/18

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Thanks for observing the scene, Sir Bean...

ME

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Aug 8, 2018, 8:28:05 AM8/8/18

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On Tuesday, August 7, 2018 at 4:11:51 AM UTC-4, Bean Counter wrote:
> On Monday, August 6, 2018 at 12:46:47 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Bean Counter wrote:
> > > George J. Dance wrote:
> > >
> > > >
> > >
> >

> > https://gdances

> >
> > > Good poem with good scenery....
> >
> > Thanks for observing the scene, Bean.
> >
> > :)

>….

.................

Will Dockery

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Aug 8, 2018, 8:43:54 AM8/8/18

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On Wednesday, August 8, 2018 at 8:28:05 AM UTC-4, ME wrote:

https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

> > > > Good poem with good scenery....
> > >
> > > Thanks for observing the scene, Bean.
> > >
> > > :)
> >….
>
> .................

I don't see any post here, "Me"?

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Will Dockery

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Aug 9, 2018, 10:22:47 PM8/9/18

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Sounds good, I'll have the rest of my poem selections ready in the near future.

Bean Counter

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Aug 10, 2018, 2:58:27 AM8/10/18

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Living......

Will Dockery

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Aug 11, 2018, 3:01:13 PM8/11/18

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Yes, indeed...

Will Dockery

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Aug 15, 2018, 9:44:59 PM8/15/18

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Thanks again, George... now to get some readers up in this joint...

😀

Norman Bean

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Aug 16, 2018, 1:20:24 AM8/16/18

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:

Good pick George.....

Will Dockery

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Aug 18, 2018, 8:19:21 AM8/18/18

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George does have a good eye for poetry anthologies.

Norman Bean

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Aug 19, 2018, 3:20:34 AM8/19/18

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I paint the cover?

Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di

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Aug 19, 2018, 12:49:34 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 12:20:34 AM UTC-7, Norman Bean wrote:

> I paint the cover?

Shalom & Boker tov, Zod...I think that would be marvellous.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Torah אלילה Yehu'di Apikores / Philologia Kabbalistica Speculativa Researcher
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THE KABBALAH FRACTALS PROJECT
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George J. Dance

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Aug 19, 2018, 1:02:41 PM8/19/18

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That would be nice, but ... I think it's important to have Will's picture on the cover. He's not in the status of Cohen, Pink Floyd, Phish, where that's not needed. Do you do portraits?

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Will Dockery

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Aug 19, 2018, 2:14:30 PM8/19/18

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Zod does, I know of one person, Julie Pulie, who still praises the sketch portrait Zod did of her late Grandmother, which hang on her Uncle's wall.

And, of course, General Zod also illustrated me for the infamous "Shadowville Speedway" CD cover:

https://www.pinterest.com/pin/357684395400839198/

:)

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Will Dockery

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Aug 19, 2018, 2:23:24 PM8/19/18

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And, a better close-up view of Zod's cover art for "Shadowville Speedway", his sketch portrait of me:

https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f0/2b/62/f02b62050448024257fcfa0c22664393.jpg

Will Dockery

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Aug 19, 2018, 3:34:25 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 2:22:05 PM UTC-4, BPJ wrote:

> Do you really believe that is a good portrait?.....You are indeed a dumb mother fucker....

While your statement alone shows your glaring ignorance, old Jimmy.

And for fellow slurper, NG:

"...And after all this, what does NG do?

Posts a stand alone critique of Zod's illustration of me... without linking to the art:

https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f0/2b/62/f02b62050448024257fcfa0c22664393.jpg

Thanks for proving my point for me, NG..."

And so... well you know the rest.

:)

Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di

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Aug 19, 2018, 3:41:34 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 12:34:25 PM UTC-7, Will Dockery wrote:

Shalom & Boker tov, Will...it is interesting that in 2015, Senetto closed his uneven celebration of the machineries of hate, CARDBOARD MANSIONS, with these telling words: 'I am not a Jew'. NaziGene -- whose profound lack of education is obvious with his paraphrasing Wiki -- projects similar vacuity.

Cujo DeSockpuppet

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Aug 19, 2018, 4:22:43 PM8/19/18

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BPJ <blackpo...@gmail.com> wrote in
news:238b5d03-30b5-4e1e...@googlegroups.com:

> On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 2:14:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 1:02:41 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance
>> wrote:
>> > On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 3:20:34 AM UTC-4, Norman Bean wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
>> > > > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > > > To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > > > Riptide waves,
>> > > > > > > > > > there goes the sea angel,
>> > > > > > > > > > right above the waves.
>> > > > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > > > [...]
>>
>> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.ht
>> ml
>>
>> > > > > > > > > Good poem with good scenery....
>> > > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Thanks for observing the scene, Bean.
>> > > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > :)
>> > > > > > >

>> > > > > > > Having another look see here...………â
> �¦.

> Do you really believe that is a good portrait?.....You are indeed a
> dumb mother fucker....

This one is hideous and looks to be by George.

https://www.pinterest.com/pin/357684395385715261/?lp=true

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NancyGene

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Aug 19, 2018, 4:43:30 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 8:22:43 PM UTC, Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote:
> BPJ wrote in

It looks like it was inspired by the "Monkey Jesus" painting.
https://www.cnn.com/travel/article/botched-fresco-surprise-hit/index.html

Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di

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Aug 19, 2018, 4:47:53 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 1:43:30 PM UTC-7, NaziGene cannot...

write or compose or sculpt or paint or draw...In over a decade, I have only see from NaziGene cyberstalking fabrications, racist attacks, the embrace of 4th reich antisemitic delusions.

Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di

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Aug 19, 2018, 4:49:32 PM8/19/18

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typographical error from quick typing: '...only seen...'

NancyGene

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Aug 19, 2018, 4:58:33 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 8:47:53 PM UTC, Fake Jew Pickering wrote:
> On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 1:43:30 PM UTC-7, NaziGene cannot...
>
> write or compose or sculpt or paint or draw...In over a decade, I have only see from NaziGene cyberstalking fabrications, racist attacks, the embrace of 4th reich antisemitic delusions.

Let's include you and Will and Zod in the list of people who cannot write or compose or sculpt or paint or draw or sing or play an instrument. You cannot include us because you don't know who we are but we have seen examples of Will, Zod, and your "art" and it is extremely poor. No talent there.

Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di

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Aug 19, 2018, 5:08:15 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 1:58:33 PM UTC-7, NaziGene is rather unsure of his identity...

NaziGene cannot write or compose or sculpt or paint or draw...In over a decade, I have only seen from NaziGene cyberstalking fabrications, racist attacks, the embrace of 4th reich antisemitic delusions. I have been writing and publishing for decades (under three names), and NaziGene has not. NaziGene is a deliberate, knowing liar; that is not an 'art', but his method.

Will Dockery

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Aug 19, 2018, 7:05:24 PM8/19/18

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I had never read old Jimmy's book before, but you are right, there it is in the book:

Cardboard Mansions - Page 12 - Google Books Result
https://books.google.com/books?isbn=1329079825
J.D. Senetto - 2015 - ‎Poetry
J.D. Senetto. Shout I MUst I am not a Jew: photographs of plump cheeked, then hollow lineage, never linger on the mantel but fear I can taste and mountains

https://books.google.com/books?id=MUC_CQAAQBAJ&lpg=PA12&ots=mYpz2Y3v8V&dq=%22I%20am%20not%20a%20Jew%22%20%22senetto%22&pg=PA12#v=onepage&q=%22I%20am%20not%20a%20Jew%22%20%22senetto%22&f=false

Cardboard Mansions
By J.D. Senetto

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Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di

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Aug 19, 2018, 7:31:31 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 4:27:30 PM UTC-7, BPJ wrote:

> Fake Jews don't count...

Shalom & Erev tov, James...your 'Fake Jew' mantra is antisemitic and unjustified. I read the book, and I don't accept your rationalisations.

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Michael Pendragon

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Aug 19, 2018, 8:10:41 PM8/19/18

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No, Will, it's a very poorly executed drawing. I'm sorry, Zod, but it looks like a doodle by a sixth grader.

Michael Pendragon

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Aug 19, 2018, 8:20:38 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 7:27:30 PM UTC-4, BPJ wrote:

> Silly fools...read and understand what I am not but must shout out the horror...
>
> 'I am not a Jew, photographs of plump cheeked, then hollow lineage, never linger on the mantel but fear I can taste...'
>
>
> is that hatred of Jews or trying to understand the plight?

>
> Fake Jews don't count...

Both the concept and the language you've expressed it in are too complicated for Pick and Will to understand.

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Will Dockery

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Aug 19, 2018, 8:31:28 PM8/19/18

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Oh, Pendragon, thanks for giving your opinion, although you know you don;t understand modern art.

:)

George J. Dance

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Aug 19, 2018, 8:40:40 PM8/19/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 7:27:30 PM UTC-4, BPJ wrote:

> Silly fools...read and understand what I am not but must shout out the horror...
>
> 'I am not a Jew, photographs of plump cheeked, then hollow lineage, never linger on the mantel but fear I can taste...'
>
>
> is that hatred of Jews or trying to understand the plight?
>

> Fake Jews don't count...

Since you guys have decided I'm a "jew fag" and a "foreskin sucker," I guess it's OK for me to comment.

It reads like one long whine: "The Jews, rape victims, and the homeless think they've had it bad? What about ME-EE-EE!"

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Will Dockery

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Aug 20, 2018, 11:40:22 AM8/20/18

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"George J. Dance" wrote in message
news:68950a8e-3565-43ba...@googlegroups.com...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Or, more like:

"ME EE-EE about what!"

Old Jimmy Yoda has spoken.

:)

Will Dockery

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Aug 20, 2018, 5:37:38 PM8/20/18

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On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 9:31:37 PM UTC-4, BPJ wrote:

> On Sunday, August 19, 2018 at 8:40:40 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>
> > > > > Shalom & Boker tov, Will...it is interesting that in 2015, Senetto closed his uneven celebration of the machineries of hate, CARDBOARD MANSIONS, with these telling words: 'I am not a Jew'. NaziGene -- whose profound lack of education is obvious with his paraphrasing Wiki -- projects similar vacuity.
> > > > >
> > > > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
> > > > > STEPHAN PICKERING / חפץ ח"ם בן אברהם
> > > > > Torah אלילה Yehu'di Apikores / Philologia Kabbalistica Speculativa Researcher
> > > > > לחיות זמן רב ולשגשג...לעולם לא עוד
> > > > > THE KABBALAH FRACTALS PROJECT
> > > > > לעולם לא אשכח
> > > > >
> > > > > IN PROGRESS: Shabtai Zisel benAvraham v'Rachel Riva:
> > > > > davening in the musematic dark
> > > >
> > > > I had never read old Jimmy's book before, but you are right, there it is in the book:
> > > >
> > > > Cardboard Mansions - Page 12 - Google Books Result
> > > > https://books.google.com/books?isbn=1329079825
> > > > J.D. Senetto - 2015 - ‎Poetry
> > > > J.D. Senetto. Shout I MUst I am not a Jew: photographs of plump cheeked, then hollow lineage, never linger on the mantel but fear I can taste and mountains
> > > >
> > > > https://books.google.com/books?id=MUC_CQAAQBAJ&lpg=PA12&ots=mYpz2Y3v8V&dq=%22I%20am%20not%20a%20Jew%22%20%22senetto%22&pg=PA12#v=onepage&q=%22I%20am%20not%20a%20Jew%22%20%22senetto%22&f=false
> > > >
> > > > Cardboard Mansions
> > > > By J.D. Senetto
> > >
> > > Silly fools...read and understand what I am not but must shout out the horror...
> > >
> > > 'I am not a Jew, photographs of plump cheeked, then hollow lineage, never linger on the mantel but fear I can taste...'
> > >
> > >
> > > is that hatred of Jews or trying to understand the plight?
> > >
> >
> > > Fake Jews don't count...
> >
> > Since you guys have decided I'm a "jew fag" and a "foreskin sucker," I guess it's OK for me to comment.
> >
> > It reads like one long whine: "The Jews, rape victims, and the homeless think they've had it bad? What about ME-EE-EE!"
>

> It is no surprise, your political career went belly up

George is a Libertarian, BPJ, he must have known from the start it would be a tough run.

Will Dockery

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Aug 21, 2018, 12:50:05 AM8/21/18

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No, I understand Jim's poem fine, and that Yoda opening really gives it an amusing opening.

😀

Norman Bean

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Aug 21, 2018, 2:22:50 AM8/21/18

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>
> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Yes, can do lifelike renditions of peoples....

Will Dockery

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Aug 27, 2018, 1:35:35 AM8/27/18

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Again, we would like to see the art ideas you have, Zod.

Will Dockery

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Aug 27, 2018, 6:12:08 PM8/27/18

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This was the very recent photograph I had in mind for you to use as a model for your painting, heavy on the Van Gogh blues:

https://scontent-atl3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/39943062_10156861273609363_6026978175974637568_n.jpg?_nc_cat=0&oh=e8823e53395a98a79818f84fe7748518&oe=5C039090

Of course, if you have other ideas, go for it...

Remember, though, that as editor and publisher of the book, George Dance has final say on the package, I'm just a poet, here.

:)

Will Dockery

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Aug 28, 2018, 10:49:03 AM8/28/18

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How is the rating looking, here in the sky days of August, George?

I expect Nathaniel Hawthorne still has the lead?

George J. Dance

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Aug 28, 2018, 1:57:22 PM8/28/18

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On Tuesday, August 28, 2018 at 10:49:03 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> How is the rating looking, here in the sky days of August, George?
>
> I expect Nathaniel Hawthorne still has the lead?

No, you're 3 points ahead: so, after the 3-headed doggie reads this, you'll be tied.

Will Dockery

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Aug 28, 2018, 2:01:54 PM8/28/18

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Time for a last minute Whistle Stop tour then, it seems.

:)

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To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery

https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Monty Stone

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Aug 28, 2018, 11:41:24 PM8/28/18

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:

> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>

> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Igotsome arideas forb it...……..

Will Dockery

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Aug 29, 2018, 5:16:20 AM8/29/18

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Thanks again Zod, post your art ideas here...

Frank Greenbaum

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Aug 30, 2018, 3:19:30 AM8/30/18

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Again, this could use some illustrated enhancement......

Monty Stone

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Aug 31, 2018, 2:19:35 AM8/31/18

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>
> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Yesss post me that art link...…………..

Will Dockery

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Aug 31, 2018, 12:11:19 PM8/31/18

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On Tuesday, August 21, 2018 at 2:22:50 AM UTC-4, Frank Greenbaum wrote:

I think that George Dance and I have pretty much settle on this for the cover:

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/proxy/xqtS2TP5dNJYhJGsWqar2_dVeS9tTWBldcNJMJfBwkBeKgebZjjjcVH40OxYwlLquPSlmwQ0rWgTtYg2ES2T2qvvTVXQhmVpsTl6PeO_UVrOZ9OaLpj9MAot=w454-h452-p

...But there will be other books, at least one more that we plan, so perhaps we can deal, soon, on something.

Frank Greenbaum

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Sep 3, 2018, 3:21:31 AM9/3/18

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Let me give it a shot either way I will have the art to parlay6 otherwheres….

Monty Stone

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Sep 3, 2018, 11:02:12 PM9/3/18

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I will do some samples for you and you can decide... either way it will be more art for me to wheel and deal with.....

Will Dockery

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Sep 4, 2018, 2:27:25 PM9/4/18

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So, George, what was the too poem of August, final count?

😀

Brother Dave

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Sep 4, 2018, 2:55:31 PM9/4/18

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Will has determined your art to be unworthy of his shitty book, so stop begging George Sulzbach.

Brother Dave

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Sep 4, 2018, 2:56:15 PM9/4/18

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Stop begging, George Sulzbach.

Brother Dave

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Sep 4, 2018, 2:56:33 PM9/4/18

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Stop begging, George Sulzbach.

Brother Dave

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Sep 4, 2018, 2:56:48 PM9/4/18

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Stop begging, George Sulzbach.

Brother Dave

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Sep 4, 2018, 2:57:52 PM9/4/18

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Stop begging, George Sulzbach. Will is ignoring your please. Maybe he will be you a steak dinner to paint our shed with some gay colors.

George J. Dance

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Sep 4, 2018, 5:49:32 PM9/4/18

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On Tuesday, September 4, 2018 at 2:27:25 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> So, George, what was the too poem of August, final count?
>
> 😀

As of month end, "Sea Angel" was #1, with 78 reads. Hawthorne's "Ocean" was #2, with 76. #3 was "The Diver," way back at 54.

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Will Dockery

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Sep 18, 2018, 5:03:31 AM9/18/18

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On Wednesday, September 12, 2018 at 5:07:21 PM UTC-4, Frank Jernigan wrote:
> On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>
> > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> > To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
> >
> > Riptide waves,
> > there goes the sea angel,
> > right above the waves.
> > [...]
> >
> > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html
>

> Very visual Florida scenes.......

Thanks, Frank...

Will Dockery

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Sep 19, 2018, 5:25:15 AM9/19/18

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Enjoyed the feature spot, thanks, George.

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Mr. Spacey

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Oct 12, 2018, 1:16:55 AM10/12/18

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>
> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

I could make this a comic book...……………….

Major Liberty

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Oct 25, 2018, 5:54:37 PM10/25/18

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>
> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Short poem with big story...........

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Rex Hester Jr.

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Jul 5, 2019, 11:42:21 PM7/5/19

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On Tuesday, September 4, 2018 at 5:49:32 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> On Tuesday, September 4, 2018 at 2:27:25 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > So, George, what was the too poem of August, final count?
> >
> > 😀
>
> As of month end, "Sea Angel" was #1, with 78 reads. Hawthorne's "Ocean" was #2, with 76. #3 was "The Diver," way back at 54.

Congratulations Doc....

Pentagram

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Oct 10, 2019, 8:22:59 PM10/10/19

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Zod-The...@none.i2p

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Oct 13, 2019, 11:29:49 PM10/13/19

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A favorite poem revisited.......

General Zod

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Oct 20, 2019, 5:41:42 PM10/20/19

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>
> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Poetry of light and shadow...…

Zod-The...@none.i2p

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Nov 1, 2019, 4:27:49 AM11/1/19

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George J. Dance wrote:
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> > As of month end, "Sea Angel" was #1, with 78 reads. Hawthorne's "Ocean" was #2, with 76. #3 was "The Diver," way back at 54.

Bravo, pip pip.....

General Zod

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Nov 21, 2019, 1:38:15 AM11/21/19

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Quite good...

Will Dockery

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May 17, 2020, 1:04:37 PM5/17/20

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On Sunday, May 17, 2020 at 8:25:45 AM UTC-4, philo wrote:
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> Poets do not do well when things are are going well so indeed we are
> doing very well!

These mystery years,
where would I be without them?
What if I'd stayed happy?

Years lost,
these last few I've played catch up,
drifting from the shore.

[...]

From:
To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery

https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

...

Rocky

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May 17, 2020, 8:06:12 PM5/17/20

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On Sunday, August 5, 2018 at 11:31:05 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:

> To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>

> Riptide waves,
> there goes the sea angel,
> right above the waves.
> [...]
>
> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

A stone cold classic...

Rocky

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May 21, 2020, 8:23:17 PM5/21/20

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On Tuesday, August 7, 2018 at 4:37:44 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> On Tuesday, August 7, 2018 at 4:11:51 AM UTC-4, Bean Counter wrote:
> > On Monday, August 6, 2018 at 12:46:47 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:

> > > Bean Counter wrote:
> > > > George J. Dance wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> > > >
> > > > > To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
> > > > >
> > > > > Riptide waves,
> > > > > there goes the sea angel,
> > > > > right above the waves.
> > > >
> > > > > [...]
> > >
> > > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html
> > >

> > > > Good poem with good scenery....
> > >
> > > Thanks for observing the scene, Bean.
> > >
> > > :)
> >
> > Having another look see here...………….
>
> It's worth a reread. I think it's a key to understanding all of Will's relationship poetry.

You nailed it....

W.Dockery

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Jul 30, 2020, 4:22:04 AM7/30/20

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Thanks for the nod, General Zod.

:)

Zod

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Dec 1, 2020, 7:00:04 PM12/1/20

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A good example of the great poetry available in and via this poetry group, under attack by trolls such as Nancy G. and the one called ME...

Ping Retro Guy....

Zod

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Jan 18, 2021, 8:50:03 PM1/18/21

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> ....

Another Florida Fave...

General-Zod

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Apr 2, 2021, 10:13:04 PM4/2/21

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George J. Dance wrote:
>
>> > > > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
>> > > >
>> > > > > To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Riptide waves,
>> > > > > there goes the sea angel,
>> > > > > right above the waves.
>> > > >
>> > > > > [...]
>> > >
>> > > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html

Good read...

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Will Dockery

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Apr 4, 2021, 4:18:07 AM4/4/21

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Rocky wrote:

>> > > > Good poem with good scenery....
>> > >
>> > > Thanks for observing the scene, Bean.
>> > >
>> > > :)
>> >
>> > Having another look see here...………….
>>
>> It's worth a reread. I think it's a key to understanding all of Will's relationship poetry.

> You nailed it....

Thanks for the reads, my friends.

:)

General-Zod

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Apr 6, 2021, 10:26:04 PM4/6/21

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Right on...

W.Dockery

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Apr 8, 2021, 3:21:05 AM4/8/21

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On Tuesday, August 7, 2018 at 4:37:44 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>>>
>>>> > > > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > > To the Sea Angel, by Will Dockery
>>>> > > > >
>>>> > > > > Riptide waves,
>>>> > > > > there goes the sea angel,
>>>> > > > > right above the waves.
>>>> > > >
>>>> > > > > [...]
>>>> > >
>>>> > > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2018/08/to-sea-angel-will-dockery.html
>>>> > >
>>>> > > > Good poem with good scenery....
>>>>

>>>> It's worth a reread. I think it's a key to understanding all of Will's relationship poetry.

Thanks again, George.

Zod

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Apr 17, 2021, 3:59:04 PM4/17/21

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