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Are the 6 points leading to my thesis too descriptive?
Setting up camp on the moon can help achieve six major exploration themes that NASA has had a focus on: colonization, scientific advancement, exploration preparation, global partnerships, economic expansion, and public literacy. Going back to the moon would realize those goals as well as test the limits of human ingenuity. Thus, the United States of America should spearhead the missions to return to and eventually colonize the moon, in order to secure it as a foundation for future efforts to achieve an updated version of its manifest destiny.
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My research paper is on the negative international image of America... obviously I don't hate America, I moved here, I live here, I like it here. But for the purpose of this paper though it would be funny to take something sacred like "God bless America" and make it extremely sarcastic and portray all the negative things about America, but I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO PUT IT! It just doesn't fit in anywhere in my introduction... suggestions! feel free to comment, edit, help!
God bless stupidity, arrogance, and patriotism. God bless reality television, George W. Bush, and McDonald’s. God bless all that is red, white, and blue. God bless the country that won’t mind its own business. God bless a population of corpulence and crass. God bless life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness. God bless America.
American football, McDonald’s, George W. Bush, an annoying accent; this is what America is known for. Although these disparaging generalizations may seem harsh, this nation’s track record in the past century has been one for both Americans and non-Americans to annotate. Before the 20th century, there was a time when America was appreciated as the safeguard of democracy; as a center of power and prestige. However, as time progress, perceptions change. The United States is a country that has been belittled by its international audience into a constant reminder of what not to be. As the epitome of westernization, America’s positive attributes fall behind the Broadway curtain, overshadowed and repressed by the apparent negativities that are showcased in their current social, political, and cultural endeavors. The fatality begins with an absence of self-realization for what their transnational reputation has become. Resultantly, stereotypes started to emerge. While most are fallacious by nature, their tendency to withstand the test of time gives them an air of truth. It seems that America is becoming increasingly unaware of its global conduct and external image, but in reality, the development of these pigeonholes must hold some sort of personal accountability to the country as a whole. Although regarded with merit for their superpower status and high moral standards, the United States, from an international perspective, has obtained a negative connotation to its name because of its political hypocrisy and acquired social ignorance, augmented by a lack of consideration for its tarnished reputation. Ultimately, this has fueled an army of critics to endorse antagonistic feelings towards the archetypically “arrogant”, “overweight” and “trigger-happy” American, making their character, culture and country perpetual subjects of denunciation.
Each year, approximately 4 million babies are born in the United States, but not all of them are born into affluent, safe communities. These unfortunate children often suffer throughout childhood and are forced to endure beatings as well as other unthinkable acts. Even if a child is born into opportune family, it is still possible that he or she could have troubles within the family that may cause that child to have future dilemmas. If a family has several children, it is easy for a child to feel left out when siblings are receiving praise or attention, which could possibly have the potential to lead to extreme sibling rivalries. Children who are not exposed to the thought-provoking and success-encouraging environments that certain households provide may not develop skills which are essential in later life. Those who are continuously exposed to drugs and abuse or are not as well protected as others will have a much harder time in the real world as adults, possibly following their parents down a path of addiction and complication. If parents had to take a test to prove their ability to take care of not only themselves, but a also child, there would be significantly fewer beaten, hungry, and lonely children in the world. A simple test that checks the background, family, and financial stability of a couple could considerably limit the number of children taken in by foster care and cases where the Division of Youth and Family Services or Welfare must intervene. Licenses and tests are often mandatory for everyday things, such as driving or teaching, which can often be considered less important than raising a child. Every day, children are born into families who do not have the sufficient money and means that are necessary to raise a child in a safe and happy environment where they will be encouraged to set and achieve goals in order to lead a healthy and successful life. The beatings, poverty, and horrible home and family life that thousands of children bear witness to each and every day can be prevented by requiring hopeful or expecting parents to take a test in order to make sure they have a safe environmental and financial future in order to provide the best for their future child.
Paragraph I- Role a parent plays in a child’s life- bad influences
Paragraph II- Licensing for everything else??? (teach, have a dog, hunt, fish)
Paragraph II- Abuse and addiction in households (gluing children’s hands to walls)
Baby left in 110 degree car while mom at work
Not having a mom/dad because they are in jail
Paragraph III- Extreme family size and effects (ex. Duggers)
Not getting a lot of attention
Paragraph IV- Adoption v having your own
Adoption takes years while anyone can have a baby
Put a baby up for adoption if you don’t want it
Are the 6 points leading to my thesis too descriptive?
Setting up camp on the moon can help achieve six major exploration themes that NASA has had a focus on: colonization, scientific advancement, exploration preparation, global partnerships, economic expansion, and public literacy. Going back to the moon would realize those goals as well as test the limits of human ingenuity. Thus, the United States of America should spearhead the missions to return to and eventually colonize the moon, in order to secure it as a foundation for future efforts to achieve an updated version of its manifest destiny.
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The United States of America is based on the principles of a capitalistic, free market economy. In other words, the cost of a good or service is determined by the economic model of supply and demand. A low supply and high demand will cause higher prices, whereas a high supply and low demand will cause prices to drop. This type of system produces unequal social classes. Furthermore, the supply and demand of occupations can greatly vary, causing a wide variety of incomes. Thus, capitalism explains the extraordinarily high earnings of professional athletes and other people in the entertainment business. By comparison, many individuals who serve our communities in arguably more important ways, such as teachers, firemen, and soldiers, receive a much lower salary. This brings about a questioning of priorities in American culture, because many people believe that these workers deserve better compensation. Despite the discrepancy, no one is limited in terms of how much money he or she is permitted to make, and some professions typically acquire significantly more money than others. If salaries were decided by the importance of an occupation’s role in society, then it would be reasonable to question the amount of money earned by those involved in entertainment. However, what can, and probably should, be questioned however, are the values of Americans. The 2012 Super Bowl currently stands as the most-watched television event in American history, almost triple that of the most recent presidential inauguration, which shows how much America stresses the entertainment industry. At first glance, the salaries of athletes and individuals in the entertainment business may seem astronomically high, but with further evaluation, their compensation is determined by the value that society places on their talents and abilities.
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Hi guys this is my thesis, feel free to criticize it and make corrrections and suggestions, Thanks!
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Does that ending count as a 3-part thesis? Davis doesn't want us to have those in our if it is.
Hey guys I have my thesis here, wondering if anyone can give me some criticism on itOf all the world famous, prominent, and inspiring musicians of the 60's and beyond, there have been few to go against the grain like one American poet. Bob Dylan's lyrics and innovative style of music changed the way America thought about extensive social, political, philosophical controversies.I feel like it's a little too vague... ideas? thanks
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