Valkenholm Draft

[Ross Watson]

Here's one of my writing assignments for Accursed, as outlined by John in his Manreia post. Opinions and feedback welcome!

[Patrick Dennis]

Ross,

I like this. I think that all the salient points about Valkenholm you wanted to present are there. I would like to see a little more elaboration about the Dhampir but I do really like the Blood Witch. <shudders> Scary and hot all at the same time! Her court would be a cool campaign in and of itself. You could do all kinds of crazy stuff with that and thus you have empowered the GMs who run this with several known "hook" areas. 

Patrick

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From: Ross Watson <spy...@clansmith.org>
To: accursed-wo...@googlegroups.com
Sent: Tuesday, July 9, 2013 1:10 AM
Subject: Valkenholm Draft

[dar...@darrellhardy.com]

And.... almost a week later, here's my feedback on Valkenholm. I tracked
changes and made a bunch of comments. Feel free to use or ignore whatever
you like; my feelings won't be hurt either way :)

I really do like the Transylvanian vibe of the place. It's pretty much
exactly what I want in a game like Accursed.

Thanks for the chance to help out a bit!

- Darrell

[Ross Watson]

Excellent feedback Darrell, thank you very much! I've got to finish up Cairn
Kainen first but after that I'm going to get back into Valkenholm and do
some revisions based on your comments.