Song-A-Week #5 - Ribbonyfidget and the open song writing process

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Mar 27, 2007, 1:22:20 AM3/27/07
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In order to get the One-A-Week thing going again I've decided to do a little "open song writing" for a few submissions.  So, below is a beginning text for a new song.  I'll post it (blog and email) and feel free to respond.  What do you like or what could you do without.  Have a better title, let me know.  Think a particular style of music would be good?  Let's hear it!

This text looks at our willingness to put complex conversations into the shortest of forms, assuming that their creativity will carry them as valid additions to the betterment of our theology, cultural discourse, ethical debate, etc.  Now I'm all for a good bumper sticker, but we also need to think beyond such sloganing.  At a recent conference I found myself fidgeting with a rainbow ribbon I had received out on the sidewalk.  During a particularly dry plenary I found myself pulling the fibers of the ribbon apart and braiding it back together into a beautiful yet somewhat unrecognizable new form.  I wonder if that's how we should approach all our intractable hot topic discussions - start looking for ways to deconstruct, reconceive, and rebuild stronger systems of communication within ourselves and with those whom we disagree.


Ribbonyfidget

by Carl Thomas Gladstone

Even multicolored buttons act as shields
Ribbons looped 'round hearts
but pierced with pins
when hanging on lapels

And slogans?
Slogans have great faith in brevity
when all the world sees webs

Then there are the shirts,
little lithographic billboards
of dissent or accusation
Their wearers giving curves
to straight edged sayings

I would rather
braid ribbons into cords
to bind us
Stick pins into a map -
of places needing love
Stretch slogans
into conversations
Exchange the shirts
for gowns and take a dip
into the river whose current
pulls our various din
out to the sea and leaves us
naked before God
out in the sun, eyes closed

Singing with all
the siblings standing 'round.


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